10 lines due in 30 mins
no crew votes no gay shit .......
check in ,and get killed
10 lines due in 30 mins
no crew votes no gay shit .......
check in ,
........check..........check........check...*hardh itter*
Check to beat newbs yup yeah
yo.......who the fuck is this fagg callin a newb.......
youve only been on the site for a fuckin hour dude...
yeah i can feel it im gunna slaughter you *NEWB* in every position..
........you best be kissin and best be wishin......
so birng on the next text ~n~ next scription.......
dude your claimin me as the wrong person...
no one will give you as much pain or hurtin....
i'll make you suffer dude and treat you like every other newb...
fuck that no need for me to go any farther,im 9 lines deep...
and you pose and patray with your 7 post and no beef after this RAPBATTLES will prononce you six feet deep.....
ightt just a quick key for this NEWB, come on mann get that little 10 lines in!
He claims to be a hardhitter but his reasons are faulty
This kid sacrifices hard punches to flip worthless multis
Damn kid go to grammar school before you attempt rap-inOriginally Posted by Hardhitter
I mean it's sad you got 600+ posts and still talkin shit to newbs
Thie bitch with a 6-5 record, we'll make it even when youl lose
You still an unknow on this site, cept for your band of dickriders
This kid is gettin more dirty hose, than a mutha fuckin firefighter
I soar easily to victory, while my rhymes leave your wings clipped
With you played ass rhymes, your punches and personals all miss
uppin thi MO fo leave a link i'll return the favor
UPPIN#1
i think you were a line short ,wow bad structure!!
hmmm if you could count thats 10 lines herb...your dumbass quote counts as a line...quit swayin
com on vote in this.....honest votes please
uppin this MO FO leave a link ill return the favor
Hardhitter:
Ok very simplistic nothing to say wow!! Or good punch
No clever lines that I can say stood out!! The highlight
Is your structure , your flow scheme is ok. Work more
On cleverness with punches and disses and you will do
Good.
Sidewinder:
Ok your opener was nicely done!! Which basically the reason why
You took this battle! Ok flow nice structure. You fell off at the
End. Got kina lazy there I can see. Which I do myself.
Anyways stay more consistent threw out. no matter if you feel
You won…
Vote goes to: SideWinder due to better punches
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116939
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114316
^ Please vote here needs to be closed…would be appreciated
By both emcees…
nice battle. lol.
hardhitter- hilarious opener. i think wit that you won tha battle. lol. seriously. your other lines were prolly jus to take space, even tho they were good too. nice flow, and your structure wasn't bad either. good job, easy to vote on this one.
sidewinder- okay i guess, for a firsttimer. your had the structure but for some reason your flow and rhymes were off. your first line didn't rhyme wit anything. work on that. you had personals but thats about it. elevate.
vote-hardhitter...pretty much everything
hit this up in return plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122528
thanx.
peace
CAN some one pleazz tell me whatBio*Chemist is talking aBOUT?? WOW HE MUST BE OUT OF THIS WORLD CUZ HES VOTE WAS WACKED,HE'S JUST DICK RIDEING OH WELL.....
Quit swayin you piece of shit...uppin for FAIR votes
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