10 lines
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30 minutes time limit.
check in real quick.
10 lines
usual rules
30 minutes time limit.
check in real quick.
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check in..............................................G/L............
......Jonesy_UK.. talentless and a waste of lines....
my last battle, i told him you gotta 'watch'.
..............no!! but i'll copy an paste the time*,
^not a real personal, but a metaphor, get it?
of course you don't...
.........you find punches in alphabet spaggetti,
im coming elementary, an played to school you....
looked at your name...
an thought theirs no way he could fool you...
your thought track, is running out of ideas,
only hot shit you got... you buy from the pizzeria,
well last line filler, because im almost out of time,
switch the last word with, soul, an you lost your mind?
blah,
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shit,
i forgot to explain my verse, it's mostly metaphors,
if you drop hard, fair play to you, i underestimated you.
peace
g/l
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This kid Menolin out their maxing out and i'm maxing eighty
Cos now i got you hanging from a window like michael jackson's baby
Menolin you sure you can handle my lyrical handgun
Cos your weak as a pup, lemme give you a hand son
See man , im usually a nice guy, but I gunna murk ya anyway
i'll straight string you up by your sack and leave you danglin' in an alleyway
ima just sock him back and take a forty to his dome
and leave his ass lyin on the floor and let the Mods drag him home
I notice ya status always reads Online, I see your busy behind your 1977 model Macintosh
Cos tha 2 websites you checkin out r ‘RB’ and gayfuckers.com for your wanking off
ah...nutin special man..............any way votes plz
Menolin - you made me laugh at a few lines, flow was pretty good, punches hit nicely.. personals coulda been a little more complex. Coulda used a little multies, but eh.. you didn't .. its all good, you had some creative lines..
Jonesy_UK - you came.. blah original, nothing really stood out in your verse. Punches were aight, but non direct, no personals really. You coulda used Multies, wordplay, and creativity.. elevate man...
V/Menolin
He had some humor,
hard hitter punches.
And, creativity
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Men:
Yo lines were pretty creative made me laugh, Flow was good decent, Punches could being better but they hit,Personals were not that exciting but ok. Overall nice verse
UK:
Yo verse was ok, Punches were aight some didnt hit, No Personals that i could say WOw!!. Focus on yo personals and use wordplay.
V/Men
Return Fav both.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121914
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121313
i'll hit em up later
drop an honest vote an link
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uppin x1..........................please vote on this............................................. drop a link and ill return the favour
what he said x2 up
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menolin ur verse was some weird shit it didnt even make sense and u kept explaining what ur doing ur structure was fucked and ur flow was wack
jones ur verse wasnt the best but isuppose theres no point wasting a good verse on his ure structure was good and ure punches were alot better than his u didnt use personals but u beat him by far
vote jones
return the fava and vote honestly on a battle in my sig,
ok man can u poll ur vote, then ill hit up urs man..................pz
plz dont sleep on this battle...ill vote on yours if you drop an honest vote, just drop ya links............................................
uppin x3................................................ .........................
drop links if you want me to return the favour
ok poor battle both of you!!
menolin = you had good structure and flow was ok, but you didnt have any punches that hit hard, you tryed to use personals which i thought just didnt work. i know you can do alot better than this!!
jonesy = you also had a good flow, structure was ok but fell off in places... your punches were not good most of the time, but some made me laugh like the last line, i though that was the only decent line in both ya battles!!
vote = jonesy coz basically had better punches than menolin!! but both of you lacked big time!!!
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