Lyric versus Born To Kill

[Laureate]

10-12 lines...whatever you want
45 min blind spit
regular rules

G'luck

[Laureate]

Checkin in...we'll start the clock after you check in

[Laureate]

Damn man...I'm out for a half hour..I'll check back then to see if you've check in

[Born To Kill]

Lyric thinks he's hot shit, asking me to duel...
April 8's ya birthday? Nope! It's a week earlier, fool!
What's up with ya avy? Where'd Tupac go?
He was all about resurrection, until he heard you flow.
Shit sent him back ta his grave, ears ringin, urn spinnin...
Goddamn Lyric! Ya let the whole industry down just by spittin.
And haven't I beaten you before? Herbs are all the same...
Oh yeah, ya the whore, who literally can't jot his name.
Ya never wrote any lyrics that dope peeps would speak...
Only thing Insane about you, Joker, was thinkin I wouldn't repeat.
(win again)

[Laureate]

aight

BTK pushes so much shit, he makes farmers look foolish
Born again Christian?...
...Well he does come Massively newbish!
This dudes true to his name, he's been killing kids for years
Cause they been dying of laughter...
Since Chrit reduced him to tears!
Dawg with 100+ wins you'd think elevation would come
Born To Kill+Rap is easy...
...Cause a whack vet is the sum!
I mean you should decrease ya words maybe then you'd be ill
So you blurr readers vision...
...In hopes of doubling your skill!
Born To Kill claimin recognition, well you got 85+ losses that's sumthin
We need a backlines on RB...
...Cayse your skills goin negative not uppin

[Mag...]

A close battle really...

neither really punched terribly hard...

lyric... the born again christian line was poor and didn't really punch... which was indicative of the entire verse... each line seemed like it had potential... but then the punch came...and it just felt stretched... besides just coming at the phrasing from different angles... try upping you multis...

B2K... not your best ... you obviously don't need pointers on multis, structure, flow... everything is vet savvy... but your personals were weak... might as well ignore them and just straight diss em... but whatever... you showed just a bit more technical skill and slightly more meaningful punchs...

close but

vote= B2K

I would really appreciate a returned favour .. with an honest vote from both of you on the link in my sig... Please!

[Catalist]

aight this was another good battle

btk- You came good....you came personal...it was a good verse that had a lot of good points in it..the flow was good and so was the structure.......opener was good and so was the closer...good showing..keep it up

lyric- you came really strong in this battle......u had good punches and personals that made me laugh....the flow was good and the structure was good also.....your opener and closer was also good and everything in the verse made it stronger
good job from both of you

in the end it came down to who made me laugh the most and lyric did that...good verses from both of you but i felt that lyric beat btk witht he amount of harder hitting personals

v/lyric

[Laureate]

Thanks for the votes so far guys. Uppin this...will peep links

[Flip]

btk-didnt have to come hard but u made it close....seen better from u....but i know u were savin ya punches...good multies and wordplay...

lyric-came iight.....but wasnt enough to beat Btk...iight punches and everything....else to work a lil harder and practice...

v/BTK

both vote on my battle...vs ill fresh...on first pg.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

[ChriZno]

lyric - Your verse was laright but ive seen better from you, Your lines seemed a little streached, i didint like your punches that much i mean they where lainding just not very hard. Alright verse but could of been better

B2K - you came hard with punches, flow ect. Personals where alright... all around nice verse. Some lines had me laughing... so enjoyment was there... good job...

Conclusion - very close battle... i think B2K takes this.... his punches hit harder, i felt his verse flowed a bit better.

vote - B2K

i would apreciate it if you return the favour, with an honest opinion on this topical:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121317

[CAMROK]

This was a dope battle.. but I was expecting that.

b2k - You had hard hitting punches in every bar.. nice personals on lyric.. had a fine flow, strucuture, everything... but you come with that everytime because you're a vet and been doin this for awhile. I think you could've come alot harder here, I've seen you come alot harder in the past with punches and personals.. good verse

lyric - You also had all the same as b2k.. hard hitting punches every bar, very nice personals.. ur flow and structure was dope... I thought you came alot stronger with your punches here. You're personals, to me, every single one of them just came right through almost perfect here and hit b2k real hard. Seen you drop better as well though.

Overall, I think lyric just had more creativity inside his verse. Wasn't necessarily expecting this... but I really think he pulled the upset here. Hopefully, b2k being the vet he is, doesn't get the dickride votes coming from all the other vets... we all know it happens. Honest vote here goes to.....

vote- lyric

nice battle guys..

[Scott B]

im going with lyric, is verse was funny, actually, both verses were fuuny, both were entertaining, lyric had a line of his LARGER FONT whcih was kinda noobish, but this all came down to personal preference so im goin to go with lyric

[Cels]

BTK - Nice Verse.. every punch was hard hitting and you had acouple good personals in there too..your flow also never fell off.. your wording was alright.. but could've been better...

Favorite Lines:

What's up with ya avy? Where'd Tupac go?
He was all about resurrection, until he heard you flow.


Lyric - Dope Verse.. Every Punch Just Like BTK's Was dope and hard hitting.. flow was good too and structure was fine also..

Favorite Lines:

This dudes true to his name, he's been killing kids for years
Cause they been dying of laughter...
Since Chrit reduced him to tears!

this was a very close battle.. since all punches in both verses hit hard, and both btk and lyrics structure and flow were good.. it came down to the hardest punch.. and i felt that lyric had that

V/ Lyric

Good Battle Guys

[UNDEAD.]

MY VERDICT

This was a really good battle both of you did well with nice punches , personals and flow and structure so im baseing my vote on which one i enjoyed more but i'll still give an assesment of both your verses.

B2K: Your spit was nice but didnt really lift off by getting better towards the end i liked your punche useing 2pac even though im a fan of his but anyway nice personals and you flow was decent not many multies and no deep internals that could of turned this around you used a bit of wit which was nice to see overall i give you 8/10
My Favourite Line:
"Lyric thinks he's hot shit, asking me to duel...
April 8's ya birthday? Nope! It's a week earlier, fool!"

Lyric: you had really good punches and nice personals your flow was good and structure was ok could of been better i liked the thransitions and witty formats you used like makeing text smaller and by leaving a link to a loss of B2K's thats a classic.your verse overall was more enjoyable to read and a bit easier as some lines were shorter never the less they still hit hard. 9/10
My Favourite Line:
"Dawg with 100+ wins you'd think elevation would come
Born To Kill+Rap is easy...
...Cause a whack vet is the sum!"

Overall my vote goes to Lyric because his was more fun and harder hitting.

MY VOTE: Lyric
P.S- please return the favour by voteing on my Diverged battle. look in my signature.