...Please Don't Cry ...

[Key Tone]

I want to dedicate this poem to everyody who reads this and to everybody who has gone through trials and tribulations in their life. So, this is for y'all!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...65#post1274265
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...69#post1274269

..I know life is hard and I know it brings pain..
..I know hearts break like windows and tears fall like rain..
..So much sorrow and sadness that it's hard to be strong..
..It's hard to search for tomorrow cuz it seems far too long..
..It hurts to see you cry and it just breaks my heart..
..I wish you would be okay to give life a fresh start..
..Don't ever give up cuz in this world there's a choice..
..You either throw in the towel or you carry on..
..And only god knows what your going through..
..The road that we'll travel and the life that we chose..
..Life can be precious if it's given a chance..
..Just stand up and be strong and believe in your stance..
..Pray every night and let God know your wishes..
..And He'll give you your wish if He knows your ambitious..
..Just know there is hope so please wipe your eyes..
..And know that I'm here always so please don't cry..

Resp. every1

[Mistral]

Nice man that really was nice....Very deep and emotional...I really liked this piece...I liked it all the beginning to the end, everything just was nice....the flow was great....the vocab was good.....had a lot of meaning to this, I like that a lot...overall a nice piece man, really was.

[State_of_Mind]

this was deep yo...i felt this hard since..reminded me of my bro's funeral...nice flow and vocab was good...i love this

keep writing this stuff...like this alot and thnx for writing this

[HeXen]

good peace

Emotoin was there

flow was nice

structure and vocab were dope

pz

[Endeva.]

id agree the emotion was there, but like all the ones ive read today, the transitions need work... and complexity.... unless like you said this is a poem, then it shouldn't be in this forum.. i dunno....

[Endeva.]

^^have manners and reply to mine.... you noobs need to learn how things go on here.. if you want peeps to reply to your future OM's

[Key Tone]

LOL^^^ always Blabering......relax boi boi

thnx every1

And yea leave links ama return favor.

[Key Tone]

...Show some Love...

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[Penskills]

Not Bad....

[Key Tone]

Umm Short Really Short reply.

[Osirus]

Feelin this piece,

don't worry about these vets man, some of them got there head up their asses..

can't accept that a new guy could be on the same level as them..

but this was deep bro..
v.emotional, the flow was aight, and lyrics were meaningfull,...
but it was more poetic to me, like you said it's a poem..

keep elevating..

Peace
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[Key Tone]

Thnx.

[Ace of Aces]

dope for sure............its funny though.....becuz the title is please dont cry. when the effect it would have an most people would make them cry. touching, props on this.

peace

[Key Tone]

^^^Thanks i apreciate it my "Friend"