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Thread: who can YOU trust?

  1. #1
    Key Tone
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    Unhappy who can YOU trust?

    Yea who can you TRUST!!!



    who can you trust
    when everything seems out of touch
    when loyalty is a must
    when the bubble is about to bust

    who can you trust when the chips are scarce
    when competition is fierce
    when the walls have ears
    who remains dear?

    who will be there thru the thick and thin
    who can you call - a true friend
    who will be there in the end
    who can you call on - again and again

    do you have a person that's down wit ya for life
    when things ain't going right
    down in the tunnel - but can't see no light
    they're there to make sure everything turns - aiight

    who can you trust with your innermost
    some secrets - should remains with its' host
    who can you trust with your goals and hopes
    who can you trust - they won't burn you like toast

    who can you trust at the end of the line
    who can you trust when you're short on time
    who can you trust - to reveal to you - to what you are blind
    who can you trust and know they are not lyin'

    who can you trust - they not playing games
    who can you trust to not diss your name
    who can you trust - to not use you for their capital gains
    who can you trust - when it starts to rain?

    who can YOU trust?

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    can't fuckin trust anybody sooner or later you gonna get stabbed in t he back.....anyway to your poem

    I liked it, Everyone ask's the question atleast once is there life. Kinda asking that myself right now....friends doing shit they shouldn't be doin. o yeh shit your poem.
    The flow was really good, rolled off the tongue nicely. Your Vocab was also good. i liked the way you got your point across. My favorite part was the 3rd verse.
    The only person you can really trust is yourself.....and hell....i question that soemitmes.

    Anywho nice drop man. keep it up
    word

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    - U right in so many ways Krem U only Can Trust Yourself-

    -Thanx

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    Quote Originally Posted by Eyeronik
    - U right in so many ways Krem U only Can Trust Yourself-

    -Thanx
    i dont believe that. I trust lots of people, especially my girlfreind i trust her more than my mom.

    But nice poem enjoyed reading it. Vocab was very nice, original and creative ideas. structure was alright could use some work. Great Flow.

  5. #5
    ekwal
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    similar minds, in deed....i felt the flow of this one 2 the beat of the radio.....hence, hit my process and sparked a curiousity....
    dug it

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    ..:: SpOrTzDiScIpLe™::..
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    nice...u cant trust no one in the world the'll stabb u rite in the back....
    i liked the flow....nice mutlies........nice feeling good stuff....
    8/10

  7. #7
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    Why are u banned so quickly^^

    Anywayz thnx fo checkin my poem b4 u got banned.

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