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    Lightbulb Two-sided Coin (w/ Wise Ways)

    WW then Qual.

    From the beginning was risen above, with capable talent
    Ryan's nonchalantly dope, while others failed in malice
    He didn't bother with practice - it came to him naturally
    And actually fueled from within, like water to a cactus
    On the path to greatness, RB only a stepping stone
    As he took pride in everything he did, except for his own
    Rarely taunted vet - repping alone, crewless for unwanted respect
    Raising the bar with his writings, a lord or god in aspects
    More than just a pebble in the stream - Ryan went after it
    Captured it, when most let it settle as mere dreams
    But he didn't even take it serious, which made it quite funny
    That Ryan was...
    Looked upon as a father figure and idolized by somebudy
    Responses on his keystyles..never even saw mixed spirits
    It was his quality and wisdom that gave him experiance
    Difference between him & u - made mistakes & learned from it
    Even though he saw RB as only..a screen with words on it


    Bill joined two years ago, after just perusing the board once
    Now, school cools on the back-burner, eluding the forefront
    Once studious doors shut, behind the passion & duller dreams
    Emotions mirrored by the boards & their black & grey color schemes
    Irresponsibly abusive; admitting, a once-passive vice was muddy
    The spiral`s contortion would `force him` to sacrifice his studies
    He learned music, true! Yet, the tomorrows would hope to kill
    The cocky `legends` of the `net let him borrow their social skills
    Schoolwork was an after-thought, the sites thwarting delays
    Via the advice and feedback that changed the course of his day
    It was sad; dot com slash forum, surely, the passage was devout
    His favourite forum no-more, somebody had banished his account
    Deliberation ensued; I`ll remember; the pity scanned & soothed me
    A great story, but an ending too brash for a Disney Channel Movie
    Rope tied to branch, wanting to see - the most bashful of crowds
    Rb laughed when I told them the branch broke & he crashed to the ground

    Ryan visited Bill; the doctors listened to his story, penciling his name
    & booking an extended stay in the hospital for the mentally insane
    `”The `net is two-sided” keeping his gimmick - boastful: the irony!
    “Make it advantangeous” were the last words Bill wrote in his diary

    Rb was never the same.

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    Wow, great piece. I love seeing shit like this dropped. The content was great, the ending was nice also. Both protrayed each aspect of their part of this piece well and made each verse enjoyable in it's own right. Wise Ways, you had a great verse with fluid flow and nice content. Koalatee, forgive me for not replying to any other of your pieces that I can remember, but I've always enjoyed your work. It's always exceptional and I thought the way you ended this was flawless. You had my favorite lines in this piece too, along with a flawless flow and great content.

    Deliberation ensued; I`ll remember; the pity scanned & soothed me
    A great story, but an ending too brash for a Disney Channel Movie
    ^ ^ Dope.

    This whole piece was dope, great job to both of you guys. Keep dropping piece like this. Pz.

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    This was dope man .. I like how ya'll portrayed the net as the characters' lives .. And the names Ryan and Bill .. RB .. Creative .. This was dope with description .. Both verses were greatly put together .. My fav. line in the piece was the Dis. Chan. Movie .. That was creative .. I liked it a lot for some reason .. Props to both on this .. Was a good entertaining read .. Stay writing .. One

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    Word...nice drop Koalatee

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