10+ lines
drop in by couple hrs
u spit first
JaE_Muah
Fears
10+ lines
drop in by couple hrs
u spit first
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checking in I'll spit when im done with this work
aiight im back give me 30minutes to spit aiight
Kinda rusty but whatever let me see if i can still merk niggas.
Yo check, This kid is The Reason Why ‘Child’ern Should Be ‘Seen And Not Heard’...
Ya Girl Been ‘Trained’ More Than Remixs Of ‘Loco-motion’...
Show Devotion.... I ‘Fill U With More Shells’ Than The ‘Pacific Ocean’...
Whenever he Look Down...he Can’t help but-Frown ...
Like ‘ctrl, alt, Delete’ I Got Ya Style ‘Shut-Down’...
This Is Ya first Battle But Now Its still Time for YouTo Retire...
No ‘strings’ attached to this ‘flame’ but u still in the ‘Line Of Fire’...
Ya Game Is ‘Broke’ No ‘Funds’ To Support U All the Feelings Are ‘MUTUAL’...
I use ya ‘cuticals’ to ‘nail’ ya coffin shut at the funeral...
Ya Live In A ‘Landfill’ Thas Why Ya Life Is A ‘WASTE’...
Put ‘Electric Currents’ To Ya ‘Heart’ So U Can Keep Up The ‘Pace’ ...
Playin ‘TAG’ ‘Backwordz’ Is The Only Time U Twirled Tha ‘GAT’...
Ya Spine??? I Snap...Got Ya Hoe Like My ‘Cough Syrup’ She’s A ‘DIME-A-Tap’...u ‘carry a nine’ ...
U ‘Sunk’ Like A ‘Worm’ And Were Left Dead ‘On-Line’...
Your gonna be shut down:
Hay yo, i'm makin dat 'dough' by tha day, gonna cut ur throat so there's no more 'airway' passin thru. I'll smack the mic in ur 'mouth',cuz theres bout to be a 'drought' in tha 'south'. I'm always practicing tha tools of tha 'trades', while you
in jail playin uh game of 'spades'. I gotta lotta fans that be callin my name, bustin you up in da 'game' cuz you 'lame', wait uh minutes....where's all the 'fame'? I'm bout to 'blame' ya for your actions, then light ya up in 'flames'. You say you a 'player', i'ma straight up shoot ya 'dealer'. I'm wearin these wife 'beaters', gettin it all bloody cuz i just stabbed you wit this meat 'cleaver'. I'm pickin out tha seeds n 'stems', i'm bout to tell D12 that you messin wit 'eminem'. They'll brake ya 'face', believe me they wont leave no 'trace', cuz they aint no 'disgrace.'
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aiight uppin fro votes and dont forget to hit the poll 2
well i gotta say both you catz need to elevate.. come more personal...
...but who won?.. well.. im gonna have to go with Jae, he brought more wordplay, and slightly harder punches... the other verse wasnt as clear, as in, the bars,, you need to set up punches better... and work on connecting, but that goes for both.... not a good battle, but you gotta start somewhere so.... vote=jae
... oh and jae, check my sig.. then read the rules on voting......lol
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oh and both of you, dont highlight things.. we know whats there.. jus a tip...
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Fears
hmm extended barz, not much multis, you just started battlin im guessing?
not hatin just statin that u need to elevate... wtf? did u just say your gonna tell d12 that hes messin with Eminem LMAO!!!
JaY_MuAh
your 1st battle? Anyways you had good multis and stuff..
just take all the '' out ya lyrics to fix the structure.. but from what I read my vote goes to you...
vote-MuAh
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QueenStyle
Upping for votes people
come on people vote on this battle
Uppin
that battle was one sided.........................
V=muah
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uppin come on people
Uppin' this battle
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