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Last edited by Chris Black; March 16th, 2004 at 07:08 AM
Hence Forward
axis powers
check agreed
I almost forgot to drop...
What’s ugly? I Looked at Kryo, & what I saw was major...
...With him, God broke the mold......and the laws of nature!
And if he says he’s not a virgin, then this bitch is a liar...
...I’ll add a spark to his sex life, by setting his hand on fire!
I’m head and shoulders above kryo, so I’ll fuck his health...
...He can’t touch me!.............he’s to busy touching himself!
‘We’re all racers’ but I’ll hit him as my engine thunders...
He’ll take the victory lap, though...
...cause he’s still attached to my bumper!
*to break the monotony*
When I start shooting, you wont outlast the slugs
Mistake me 4 angry coffee drinkers...
...Cause I’ll smash ya mug!
Your sig says you’re racist; touchy subject, mister
Well fuck it, I guess I’ll eat chicken...
...While you fuck your sister!
Stereotypical, I know, & I’d get back to the flows
But you’re down for the count...
...Like Dracula’s hoes!
He said he’d no-show...
Just dropping in case he changes his mind...
Blah@this match...
Hence Forward
axis powers
blah, im tryin not to no-show, sooooo, fuck this verse
You's a bitch, no really,let me reveal your history
Asked Aisle who were you, and he said you're His Tori
I swear, you guys are freaks,but I'll still get in that ass
^Wack punch,still 1 more than you ever threw in your past
You pervert,you're only rubbin my data so he can pet a file me
I'll leave W1cked with a shakin condition, just like this smiley
I got scared, when I seen what you said you'll do to me
"I almost forgot to drop..." <----Too late, you already missed puberty
Im already pissed at the net, so bitch dont try to tempt me
You once came full force,but like Judd Hirsch, you're Runnin On Empty
And dont show off in public, you fatherfucking BUM
You said you was gonna Hum me, where did you get the "BLE" from?
And I need 1 last bar, so,I cant beleive the following line dude
I will cut off your ankles, just to de-feet you..roflmao
im straight ganksta bitch..
fuck yall.
Last edited by Samuel Same Old; March 20th, 2004 at 12:20 AM Reason: i typed fatherruckin instaed of fatherfuckin,lol
omg this is not a hate vote, but kryo that was simply THE saddest verse, well ever, i cried tears of pain after the first line...... ur history... ur HIS TORI.... i stil water up
while on the other hand, wicked brought a great verse, and im sumwut proud to say that i lost to him, when his shit IS THIS GOOD.... down for the count, that shit really had me on the floor... people say rofl.. i was REALLLY on the floor laughing
v-wi
.. im back
Blah..
Kryo.. didn't try very hard and it showed.. weak punches.. flow wasn't all there.. nothing too creative/original..
W1cked.. better punches.. some dope lines in there.. creative touches throughout..
Just a much better verse in comparison..
V/W1cked
Last edited by .Provoke; March 20th, 2004 at 05:37 PM
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Hmmm...looks like a murder occured here.
Vote W1CKED for the Better battle verse overall. Actually, was pretty good...a lot of the punchlines had me rollin.
"What’s ugly? I Looked at Kryo, & what I saw was major...
...With him, God broke the mold......and the laws of nature!
And if he says he’s not a virgin, then this bitch is a liar...
...I’ll add a spark to his sex life, by setting his hand on fire!"
^Set the room on fire lol.
Kyro came...meh, dissapointed me. I've seen you come a lot harder. I could see where you were trying to go with punchlines but meh...They just didn't make it. Better luck next week.
v/ - W1CKED
W1cked took this for a verse with more consistency in punches, personals, and metas. Kyro didn't seem to car and jus dropped a verse so he wouldn't no ahow. W1cked came pretty well, could lose a little of the filler in ya verse....but otherwise an OK verse.
Vote=W1cked
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W1CKED wins (2-0)
Kryogenix loses (2-2)
im leavin this site
ive been here for a year
so, take me out this thing or w/e
trust me,it wasnt because of this battle
i've been leavin for a while now..
so, peace out fuckers..
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