I will return....the favor and peep your song and give you some feedback...
Basically i send this to my producer and he makes it perfect ..and i pay...so i just wanna know how ya'll like the feel and the lyrics and flow....i know the production is pretty is pretty fucked ...THAXK to all those who took the time..
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/demuirgic.htm
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Flow doesn't sound right on this.... Like it's probably that beat being so slow an empty... I ain't dogging on the topic it's pretty straight but this could have been done a little better.... GL to who ever fixes this up to sound perfect man vocals sound fuzzy.
Chez Scheme - Can you INTERPRET *this?
You're rhyming with a "lisp" how I "interpret" is a wonder
You all know my "scheme" (set! wackRappers sixFeetUnder)
Listen to the Wackness
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^dun worry hes good and thank you for you opinion......
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yep plz peep i will return any feedback that i get.......good or bad.....just lemme know thanx....
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the beat is nice...flow is aight...im not really into the spitting slow...then speeding up some words...it's either your fast or slow...not both....bit for the most part it was a safe song....holla...thanx for the feed on my track...
I Like The Lyrics. But The Flow Wasn't There For Me, The Voice Kept
Changing Tone, My Advice, Find A New Beat, And Record Same Lyrics.
.WP. .. It' Still Perfect..
^thanx for taking the time to peep and the opinion i'll give feedback if people need it leave links aight then......keep evalutatin
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beat is simple but still aiight. flow is good, lyrics are tight. i think since its such a serious topic more emotion would help. but it's still a pretty good drop none the less.
if you wanna return the favor here's my link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120038
the beat is nice...flow is kool...im not really into the spitting slow part ...blah...need to speed up some words and verses ....it's either your fast or slow...not both....bit for the most/ part it was a safe song....liked it alot but it had it's ups and downs give it a
7/10or an 8//10
the flow i dont see as being bad? i just think it depends on if you feelin the style of flow he bringin, beyond whether his flows actually good or not.
the flow is solid, but at certain points your delivery/presence gets weak, just like on some words you sound more monotone and like your just talking, i think its just in the pronunciation of the words but it gives off that sound.. but its only at a few points, not really noticable.
your voice is cool, ya lyrics is nice, ya style i can feel id like to peep you on a more hyped up track to, good shit man, keep up.
ps: i like the tribute idea man, much respect, i like how you did the intro and the talking inbetween (if you did do that?? ionno).
aight nice thank you for all the feedback leave links guys i will return all feedback i get......pz
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word uppin for even more feedback ...i'll return all feedback pretty much instantly .....if i'm on ...aight thanx pz
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it could be that 9-11 was my 21st b-day and this song is just hittin me deep down in the pit of my stomach... but i have not been able to turn it off since i heard it!!!!!!
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant wait to hear the album
Aight I'm peepin' This is a good beat... hmm your flow is not on point...it is decent but it is nothing special. I know you said you gon get this fixed up but wow your boi must do wonders... lyrically you good some steez but that topic has been done to death by cats so this is not anything new to me. The last verse is the best on this track. I aint gon rate you cause who am I to judge other then give a opinion. Stay Up
good lyricks dont like the flow but pretty good man, i dont like that effect u got on your voice wtf is it??
ne wayz
6.5/10 cool shit
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