10-14 Lines.
10-14 Lines.
due within 30 mins?.agree to that and ill drop but intill you do i am not checking in man..
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^ I'll drop as soon as I can. It should be within the hour.. go ahead and drop. I won't feed.
I'm dropping as soon as you tell me you're ready.
Fuck it.. along with you and your signing offline newbie ass.
You're here for an Instant.. then you're gone.. with grief
Cuz Token'll rest ya case.. like putting ya folders to sleep
Kid thinks he's better.. I got him laid out n he's bitchin
Sure you elevated Kid.. now you're in sitting position
Fuckin herb.. doesn't understand what I'm tryin to say
You're not elite and never will be.. n that includes today
Judge couldn't punch.. so he kicked but his knees gave out
Then he went in for the kill.. but the moron never came out
Fuck new kids.. starting shit with vets.. ya hands aren't good
I'll turn your ass so pink.. you'll have to move to Camrons hood
soz toke man had football traingind lol.good verse and good luck,
little paranoid bitch..sressing with his pen to hold it steady
ill merk in an instant..so why you say,
your the only head i no..with a pritty record whos overatedI'm dropping as soon as you tell me you're ready.
got his name in black.. but still searching for shit hes moderated
hes the creation but his elavation just keeps going back
theres a thin line between dope and wack..and toke just feel in the gap
we all no toke supports inter millan..cause hes always balck & blue
comes shit in the first battle and still fears a deja vu(sig)
i'd never feed of toke..wouldnt want my mouth getting dirty
31 votes against token..he wont loose cause he deleted thirty
toke is always dqing votes for no reasons.............1
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haha! liking this battle alot!
Token
You're here for an Instant.. then you're gone.. with grief
Cuz Token'll rest ya case.. like putting ya folders to sleep
ILL opener man
Kid thinks he's better.. I got him laid out n he's bitchin
Sure you elevated Kid.. now you're in sitting position
Lmao! Nice diss
Fuckin herb.. doesn't understand what I'm tryin to say
You're not elite and never will be.. n that includes today
n that includes today... EH?
Judge couldn't punch.. so he kicked but his knees gave out
Then he went in for the kill.. but the moron never came out
Haha, shit had me laughing, nice punch
Fuck new kids.. starting shit with vets.. ya hands aren't good
I'll turn your ass so pink.. you'll have to move to Camrons hood
Not a great Closer, overall verse 8/10
Judge
little paranoid bitch..sressing with his pen to hold it steady
ill merk in an instant..so why you say,
I'm dropping as soon as you tell me you're ready.
Shit, 1 hell of a opener!! LMAO!!
your the only head i no..with a pritty record whos overated
got his name in black.. but still searching for shit hes moderated
Mad Played
hes the creation but his elavation just keeps going back
theres a thin line between dope and wack..and toke just feel in the gap
LMAO...Nice diss
we all no toke supports inter millan..cause hes always balck & blue
comes shit in the first battle and still fears a deja vu(sig)
Whack
i'd never feed of toke..wouldnt want my mouth getting dirty
31 votes against token..he wont loose cause he deleted thirty
Shit, that is 1 ILL closer, overall verse 7/10
Vote Token, because of punches
^^ ummmm no!
i think that the judge clkearly got this because of three reasons......
1. token rushed it i think and it effected his verse
2. Judge's punches were good and they made sense
3. The judge had more personals..and it made the verse better
the judge also had a good flow ans stucture....
token had an ok verse...i thought that it was rushed a bit.....
the flow was good and so was the structure...punches didnt hit that hard and the personals were ok also....more personals would have been nice....great battle but my vote goes to...
v.judge
I won't sway cuz people who knows what makes a verse should know better.
But.. I DQ votes when they are bad, Judge. I let a lot more go than any other mod.
uppin 1.
^^^those were the best lines in ya verse.........good wordplay and a tight punch......had me laughin......overall ur verse was pretty tight......had good structure and flow.......some nice metas.......tight wordplay.......most of ya punches connected.......personals were decent.......Originally Posted by Token
^^^im gonna say those r ur two best lines.......the first one could have been worded better, but the second one was pretty tight......had a personal and a pretty good punch.......overall ur verse was pretty tight as well.......it had a good structure and flow.......some metas.......pretty good wordplay........the punches were pretty good.......personals were pretty tight......
conclusion - ima say token takes this.......he was more consistent with his verse.......the judge had a nice opener........ok second bar........tight third bar.......wack fourth bar.....and nice closer.......i thought token was good throughout his verse.......on top of that i thought token had better metas, wordplay, and punches so he gets my vote......
VOTE - TOKEN
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^ Thank you..
uppin 2.
Judge couldn't punch.. so he kicked but his knees gave out
Then he went in for the kill.. but the moron never came out
LOL Ryan. Tight...
...And overall I'm going with Token.
Token was just coming more consistent in my eyes. His lines were witty every time, while Judge had a few nice punches, but nothing really to witty or worth quoting. Just a better overall performance by Token. No beef or anything :K:.
Better punches, harder hitting and more witty. Could tell it wasn't full effort though.
V/Token
Ite Coop.......thanks For The Votes Close Shit............1st
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Thanks..
uppin 3
and 2nd............................................
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