SS: The Yellow Pages

[Endeva.]

Whether you soft or hard bound… the core’s the part
…Where we start and embark on our many stages
Of the many pages… it jus happens to be yellow
Thru the mix of races… a blend of all, that’s mellow
So don’t pretend your call is the only address listed
Cos its just a number, after all… like the others depicted
Another group of digits in an increasing directory
So basically, were binary in a book of stationary
Which I think is a felony, mean, who wants looked up
Ya don’t know my name? Well… I don’t give a fuck
I aint getting stuck, I wont delve, cos N.Deva aint struck
…By the touch tone number phones, not never… me
Im free, without reprise, you want thee?… your outta luck
Like 1,2,3, without the 4… yes, my link aint pushed
It won’t combust in the flames of the average man
But I don’t span the standard plan, cos im not cheap,
…Im not contraband, my essentials…just… for the sheik
Not standard peeps who feel its aight to play the reap-
-per, to my line’s speech, that’s for gorgeous… her
Dressed in furs… to the rest I teach this… don’t admit
You’ll get cursed by the tarnished… dirty calls, no bliss
Id rather have only mates, shit… hold up wait…
My business aint straight… yes… it betrays the portrait
Cos im not getting play’d… my scene don’t need a rate
From 1-10… it offends, my price aint a commercial plate
Only I nominate… but it depends on whether it’s deserved
Cos no matter what ive heard, I believe fate is nominal
I infer to when you get to my turn, you don’t ring… responsible
Damn… you cant, cos my code only sings to my hostel…
And that’s only dawg’s that give a response that don’t follow
….the rest of the list… who cant resist the above…
…They’re not apostle’s…
I only answer brov’s… the rest can hit another sectors love
Like they should… but I only have space for another friend
So all ya’ll in the pages, who’s yellow, grow… and defend!



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[Freeman]

Sigh..

Cant wait to see how badly this will be slept on.. ..

Anyway..

You had a nice flow.. Good transitions.. Added to the flow..

Inners.. Yea, mo' fucker.. Liked them.. Erm.. What else..

Was consistent..

By the way.. Completely random.. Im listening to.. Usher ft Lil Jon & Ludacris at the moment.. Very nice.. Was on in the club last night.. Grindin' wiv my girl to almost every song.. Dope..

Hit something in my sig, hoe..

Thanks..

Pz..

[Endeva.]

^^what all this.... "Dev's gets slept on"... hmm, who wins..you jus sleep alone.... lol

[Freeman]

Yes.. Ive been sleeping with my girlfriend all weekend..

While you.. Have most probably been sticking your dick in your bong.. ..

At least your getting some action though.. :P..

[Endeva.]

^^ your mother and sister dont count tho

[Freeman]

Lol..

This is a cool way of getting your replies up I guess..

Anyway..

Goodnight..

Check you tomorrow, dawg..

Pz out..

[Endeva.]

^^free post again in my thread... ill get you banned..

[SMZ]

Flow was nice - internals good. Liked the way you included the numbers into it. Made it seem more connected to the topic. Wording of the last line seemed odd to me. Nice drop - peace.

[MuhThugga]

The flow was nice....I loved the opener....
"Whether you soft or hard bound… the core’s the part"

However, the piece seems to fall apart towards the end, where you just ramble on about yourself.
"So basically, were binary in a book of stationary
Which I think is a felony, mean, who wants looked up
Ya don’t know my name? Well… I don’t give a fuck"
^^^^What?

I'll re-read it but my opinion still stands.

[Endeva.]

^^lol, ok.... it makes perfect sense, im exdirectory... not listed

[Reeco]

ok nice flow in this piece dev, also structure was spot on. line were stright to the point!! strange last line, didnt really get it. anyway nice drop. keep it up! pz

[Endeva.]

hmm.. ok well i'll tell you, since thats 2 people now who have said that....

I only answer brov’s… the rest can hit another sectors love
Like they should… but I only have space for another friend
So all ya’ll in the pages, who’s yellow, grow… and defend!

^^i only answer the phone to friends, and im exdirectory, and a word of advice to others, business number or not, too many dodgy phonecalls going around... so i wouldnt be listed in any book....ok...