ok man
10 lines
no d/r
explained votes only
40 mins to spit after checkin
50 post to vote
blind spit
sHoRtAy140
JONESY_UK
ok man
10 lines
no d/r
explained votes only
40 mins to spit after checkin
50 post to vote
blind spit
iight im checkin in ima drop in like 20 mintues maybe even 15 iight
peace
Imma smash-this plas-tic bas-tard, til he's screa-min in submission,As-his-ass gets ta-ttered fast-er, than his priests' sneak intuitions/.1
To afraid to-be-brave, cuz JONEY was made the "chip" and "melt",Like a ba-by mis be-having, SON DONT MAKE ME GRAB THE BELT!!!//.2
This Afro-dyke-he's tryin'- to-escape cuz Im "Blessed-with-Hotness",He's like Aphro-di-te cryin'- from-rape when I "Molest-this-GODESS"/.3
I'll smack you and your whole wack-crew, shouting out "RAP DELIGHTS!".4
R-B-C, you see-we-be knockin' you "pussys" to "sleep", like "CATS AT NIGHT"/.5
JONEY just got "snacked upon", quicker that he "gets soft" at the crack-of-dawn/.6
Your whole rap games "played" and "defeated", like I'm "STACK-in'-PAWNS"/.7
Im "explodin" on this ba-sic bitch like "gre-nade-kits", like IRAQI ARMIES you cant "INVADE SHIT"/.8
I'll slice through your taste-less face-its, bleeding out ya eyes like Im practicin' LAS-IK/
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Face it, you can't deny-this, split ya-wris, you "cant touch me" like you're "Walking in BLIND-NESS!"/.10
okay uppin for vote's on this when joney uk drops his verse iight im out lata
ight man give me 5-10 mins, .................................................. ................
iight u ill wait for u to drop dont worry no rush
ight ight here go's
Im tha real UK battle assassin, I kill these BG’s for fee’s
My bullets are words and they’ll give ya brain disease
Don’t tempt me to prove my lyrical dream
Cos you’ll end up half dead on a life support machine
Your produce shit , so don’t type with ya backside, type with ya finger
Cos you talk through ya ass just like those hoe’s on dat show jerry springer
‘Speeding up’
Im tossing this kid under bin lid, you rubbish to me son im too far ahead.
I’ll slice ya ass with sharp glass, and make this a 5 to nothin thread
The shows over, its blown over, I still murdered ya, after you groaned and moaned.
Times up, you still shook, show me the documents bitch you ve been OWNED.
iight okay uppin for votes ........................1
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Terrible Battle....No Flow Whats So Ever......
i aint even sayin who im votin for ill just close my eyes and pick one of yall wack kats...
hell naw that aint a vote take that shyt out one of the mods this vote doesnt count son u cant just close ur eyes and pick some on to win that aint a vote
ayo some mod take that vote out ....
still 0-0 uppin for votes
yo yo yo
str8 battle liked both sides a lot, but ima break it down and decide the winner cuz whoever i vote for always wins!
shortay.... hated your structure, that shit aint you dawg you gotta figure that out! your metas were tight and you punches hit pretty hard no huge uppercuts but it was more of some nice jabs. I like your rhymes a lot of 3 sylabuls, no personals though! fav line "Im "explodin" on this ba-sic bitch like "gre-nade-kits", like IRAQI ARMIES you cant "INVADE SHIT".. lol.
Jonesy ..... like your structure .... followed it well. rhymes were real basic and only 1 or 2 sylabuls and words that my little sis can rhyme but i liked the actual lines. Just need so more "challengeing words" to rhyme.... ya know? punches were ok... i'd say average but pretty funny. good verse! fav line "Don’t tempt me to prove my lyrical dream
Cos you’ll end up half dead on a life support machine"
Structure - Jonesy
Metas - Shortay
rhymes - Shortay
punches - Shortay
Personals - NONE c'mon ya'll shoulda kicked one
shortay the motha's from the UK
Jonesy his name is shorty, call him a umpa lumpa or somethin!
V- hard decsion I enjoyed Jonesy's more, but like one of his lines, i enjoy the Jerry Springer show but that doesn't mean it should win a fuckin emmy. ya know? based on pure skill, punches and metas shortay had the better battle by the hair on his ass, sorry Jonesy great battle though! vote - Shortay
re-pay the favor and vote on my shit, links in the sig... dont forget ya'll or i wont vote on a battle from one of ya'll again! peace
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