blind spit
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due 30-mins after checkin
no crew votes etc. etc.
good luck timeless
timeless
sikspita
blind spit
10-12 lines
due 30-mins after checkin
no crew votes etc. etc.
good luck timeless
that was my check in^^^
checkin in........................................
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heres my spit
yo fuck this bitch ass wannabe emcee
trien to be like everyone u see on tv
eminem, dr dre, 50, and jay-z
when the person u should wanabe like is me
u should be my apprentice, my helper, my golf caddy
man id to embarassed to even say im ur daddy
look at his battle record then look at mine
but ur gonna lose this one, ur all out of 'time'
u say ur a poet with words, dont make any sence
what am i sayin your brain has a few dents
i looked at ur other battle and there pure shit
its finally the end of this blind spit
Ok lets go again....
Another shit herb, who will never be smokein. Even tho he’s brand new
You’re a joke to rb, coz cleaning ships, is the only time ya maid a crew
Sickspitta’s like a voiceless mcees when spittin, he’s only shootin blanks
A tougher fact, anal sex with army boys, is the only time u going up a rank
Lol ya a fake ass white boy, your from Columbus, u must be the only ones
I spit ace, and flow like the runs, so I’m putting an end to your case, like sex with guns
You should just stand back ,and leave the battling to men, or you’ll get hurt
Your like a stuck up girl with a rich daddy, coz your defiantly getting merked
Another newb on a rap site, wahts that? ya should get your shit and leave
ohh and G the only time you should wrap, I s birthdays and christmas eve
Ya pore's spread and let the sweat give away ya fuckin emmotional status
So spitta I’ll leave you stuck with this loss, like I was throwin' a cactus
ok nice battle uppin for votes.........
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Doper Than You-
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hott verse by timeless...
time- had good punches and personals
the flow was on point and it made the verse easy to read.......structure was good and the opener and closer was good
good verse.....keep gettin better
sik- really didnt do nothin for me...had a newbish verse
no punches or personals
flow was bad and the strtcuture was pretty bad
no flow made it hard to understand...elevate and get better
v/timeless
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thanks, ill vote on yours very soon!! afta i finish my driving theory test in bout 30 minz!!
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Doper Than You-
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uppin.............................................
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Doper Than You-
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yo fuck this bitch ass wannabe emcee
trien to be like everyone u see on tv
weak...no real punch...too generalized
eminem, dr dre, 50, and jay-z
when the person u should wanabe like is me
No punch...first line is filler and second isn't a diss...refrain from talking bout yourself in ya verse...focus on dissin ya opponent
u should be my apprentice, my helper, my golf caddy
man id to embarassed to even say im ur daddy
whack!
look at his battle record then look at mine
but ur gonna lose this one, ur all out of 'time'
whack attempt at a personal
u say ur a poet with words, dont make any sence
what am i sayin your brain has a few dents
weak
i looked at ur other battle and there pure shit
its finally the end of this blind spit
weak
Another shit herb, who will never be smokein. Even tho he’s brand new
You’re a joke to rb, coz cleaning ships, is the only time ya maid a crew
meh...ok...lil stretched
Sickspitta’s like a voiceless mcees when spittin, he’s only shootin blanks
A tougher fact, anal sex with army boys, is the only time u going up a rank
whack....1st line is mad played...and SEX/GAY JOKES ARE A NO NO!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lol ya a fake ass white boy, your from Columbus, u must be the only ones
I spit ace, and flow like the runs, so I’m putting an end to your case, like sex with guns
stretched...ok
You should just stand back ,and leave the battling to men, or you’ll get hurt
Your like a stuck up girl with a rich daddy, coz your defiantly getting merked
weak
Another newb on a rap site, wahts that? ya should get your shit and leave
ohh and G the only time you should wrap, I s birthdays and christmas eve
mad played
Ya pore's spread and let the sweat give away ya fuckin emmotional status
So spitta I’ll leave you stuck with this loss, like I was throwin' a cactus
pretty good
Vote=Timeless for a verse more consistent with punches and personals and also a harder hitting verse
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I normally break down my votes, line for line, but no need in this battle. This was slaughter. Sik was way too basic. He had one decent attempt at a punche. Besides that, he got merked. Time had way mor/better punches. So Timeless gets my vote for better punches.
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Hence Forward
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Oh god..
Too basic to even compare to Timeless' verse..
Outdone in every category..
Time, your lines where stretched, hoe....
v/ Time..
Pz..
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boooooo. 4-0 to 2-0!! anyway uppin.......................
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Repay the vote on my battle, please..
Im sure I voted on this..
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