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code-187 pop you up to 7th heaven i would beat you if i was only eleven.
not gonna try you a baby maybe i should finish you off now.
You see i aint trying so just lye down and start dieing.
If you take a look closely your ego is ..................... this big but your equipment is dis big ..
i give you punches you take them in the chest .
on rap battles you only a guest .
fuck off you a pest.
you taking tips of victoria secret really you just a idjit.
you aint having a grave you having a pit
Dont stand up just sit .
Im gonna be the one having the standing ovation . just remember i didnt try
U need to learn how to rap, while I was born with the nack
im Burning cats and its ur turn to get smacked
touch of golds only flow is the sperm in his sack
we had to adjourn because the dumb fuck posted in bitch slapped
u say u could beat me if u were only 11
but with a verse like that id say u were about 7
t.o.g's got less brains than a vegetable,
an after ive fried the iliterate fuck
hell know battling me is regretable
yall know who this, fuck t.o.g that wiggers neglegable
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Touch To Gold
You need to drastically improve, no real punches or flow. And I wont even mention your structure. Read more battles and find out the basics in W.E.C
Code-187
Not your best I've seen, punches were'nt that hard. Flow coulda been improved but you were more creative and you did enough to win easily...
v/ Code-187
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yo ite this battle wasnt very good code did wat he had to,
in my opinion i thaught touch was wak here,
no punches watso eva that hit hard....wak flow,
shit strucutre and everythin seemd wak soz man,
but you gota elavte,.....code did it here,
not rly 2 many good punches but he did enuf,
also had alot better flow and strucutre.
make sure you hit this as oi took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...3&page=2&pp=15 thx alot........
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If you take a look closely your ego is ..................... this big but your equipment is dis big ..
I thought that was cool ^ Nothing great, but just a cool attempt at a line at least. IMO Code didnt have a flow, flow was off, lines were too short to get any real content and he had no reeal concepts or punchlines
Vote - Touch To Gold
Pot` Ed.
I dropped to show RM what hot was;
And this faggot got Butterflies in his stomach the size of Mothra
Your text is just another weak display
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come on VOTE
leave battle links and ill get back atcha with honest opinions
yo homie...this was an aiight battle cuz it was sorta to 1 side...t.o.g- didnt have much of a flow n not ne real punches, 187- had a nice flow, nice punch, n creativeness.....overall i say 187 won this battle
vote-code 187
n if u got time hit this up n vote..my 1st battle-http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118059
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aight ....this was an okay battle...touch of gold didnt have any good punches or flow...but 187 had better punches and pretty mucha better flow
vote- code 187
This has 2 go 2 code 187, he had the better flow,punches and everything else,
Vote= code 187
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Code-187 you took this one with better punches and they were hittin alot harder..
Touch it seemed as if you were goin for multies more than punches which you should of gone more for punches and personals....
overall it was an aiight battle seen both do alot better bu no one can be perfect in every battle......
\/0te.....Code-187...........
Upp this battle ya'll........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...65&page=1&pp=15
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Gud Battle
Flow/I felt that code had a better flow b/c he had sum nice rhymes in their with a lot of variation and a gud wordplay, I didn't felt a gud flow with gold
punchlines: They both had sum great punches but I thought that the punches from code just came harder, gold also had sum gud punches but he hadn't such as code
personals: gold had gud personals while code just tried to have personals, gold you just need to work on your punches, code, you must work on your personals
structure/ They both had a gud structure goin on so..
Originality/ code was more original than gold cuz he had sum nice lines in there and gold had to many lines which were played
Overall vote: code 187
code 187 had this one his hits were harder and his flow was miles better, the other guys flow and structure was non exsistant.
187 had some ok wordplay so I vote for him....
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