besides only two kid replied.
av dropped the real one..
besides only two kid replied.
av dropped the real one..
Last edited by bribeone; March 10th, 2004 at 12:09 PM
Bribeone
Artificial Intelligence
Bribeone
Artificial Intelligence
lol @ u postin this...does Av know?....
hmm..
Bribeone
Artificial Intelligence
a couple views...no replies..lol
K. Largo, nice flow and feeling throughout your verse.you fed me lies through a tube connected to hells doorway. I liked that line the most.
13th, you had a nice verse too. Flow wasn't as good, but it was still an easy read, with nice emotions in it. Overall this was a pretty decent collabo. Keep up the good work, fellas.
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axis powers
I take it you need to judge on more before you drop
wtf is this two days and this many views ...sad
Bribeone
Artificial Intelligence
Largo came nice.... had a poetic imagery nice flow and metaphors overall solid piece
you fed me lies through a tube connected to hells doorway
^I also like this line
13 also came nice.... ok vocab... nice multies and the flow was nice
..grudges from years of a teen..murderous intent that God never seen
^your best line
overall solid pieces from both...... 4.2/5
pZ
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