"10 lines at least
no crews
no d/rs"
I spit first
Both verses due wednesday
"10 lines at least
no crews
no d/rs"
I spit first
Both verses due wednesday
Fuck it, my shits done so here it is.. looks like u got 2 more days to come up with something
Ok slayer, you wanted a battle for practice,
So you sent me a private message sayin you want to get back to this.
I hate to say it now but the fact is:
Your signature is much bigger than your low level status,
And the only way you’d win is if this battle was gratis.
All your unfounded criticism has been abortive and contumelious.
So after all your cynicism, you expect me to be supportive, nigga are you serious?
Your game’s got a cancer on it, I think its malignant,
It just goes to show any talent you got is strictly a figment.
I’ve been bringin lines and as of late my shit’s been consistent,
You been singing paeans of hate and your shit’s nonexistent.
So fuck you slayer, your destiny lies with me
In the words of the Greeks, my win is fait accompli.
Im pickin up beano even tho am gettin bored and 'throwin newbs'
A will leave a 10 meter 'dimple' in ye 'temple' like squashed 'frozen food'
Im owning you, 50 cents down at the 'local store'
For the shit beano mag, thats a waste of ya 'vocal chords' (like this battle)
Your a cartoon, a will take away ya ink like a 'leaking pen'
Ya battle historys so gay, i now say that your 'seaking men'
Im gunna roll over you again an again like the 'national lottery'
Break ya lyrics up i can do that easily, like 'fractional pottery'
Ya say my shit has got cancer, thats just ya face, and i gota 'fair answer'
Ur a peasant im a lancer, and i will beat u in the ring like if ali was a 'square dancer'
Ya usin big words tryin 2 reflect on yaself, u cudnt rise on a 'trampoline'
Cos beanos small on the 'magazine' and you cudnt fall from heaven and 'stamp on me'
Ya rhymes seem forced like storylines in beano, do you 'own a plan'
Beanos rhymes so flat like the beano mag, or like outa date 'cola can'
Bitch i took this battle, like people taking magazines from 'markets'
You get walked over every time like the queen walkin on red 'carpets'
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Alrite ppl we need votes...................
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uppin ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ i need some votes on these battles ya'll
Ok slayer, you wanted a battle for practice,
So you sent me a private message sayin you want to get back to this.
Filler
I hate to say it now but the fact is:
Your signature is much bigger than your low level status,
lol, decent
And the only way you’d win is if this battle was gratis.
blah
All your unfounded criticism has been abortive and contumelious.
So after all your cynicism, you expect me to be supportive, nigga are you serious?
what tha fukk
Your game’s got a cancer on it, I think its malignant,
It just goes to show any talent you got is strictly a figment.
filler
I’ve been bringin lines and as of late my shit’s been consistent,
You been singing paeans of hate and your shit’s nonexistent.
filler- although i like your vocab
So fuck you slayer, your destiny lies with me
In the words of the Greeks, my win is fait accompli.
weak punches
Im pickin up beano even tho am gettin bored and 'throwin newbs'
A will leave a 10 meter 'dimple' in ye 'temple' like squashed 'frozen food'
dont get it -- first line was nice though
Im owning you, 50 cents down at the 'local store'
For the shit beano mag, thats a waste of ya 'vocal chords' (like this battle)
lol, nice play on his name
Your a cartoon, a will take away ya ink like a 'leaking pen'
Ya battle historys so gay, i now say that your 'seaking men'
alright, but seems a bit too elementary, makes it a weak punch
Im gunna roll over you again an again like the 'national lottery'
Break ya lyrics up i can do that easily, like 'fractional pottery'
lol, first line was very nice
Ya say my shit has got cancer, thats just ya face, and i gota 'fair answer'
Ur a peasant im a lancer, and i will beat u in the ring like if ali was a 'square dancer'
ehhh
Ya usin big words tryin 2 reflect on yaself, u cudnt rise on a 'trampoline'
Cos beanos small on the 'magazine' and you cudnt fall from heaven and 'stamp on me'
didnt like the ending, but the rest was nice
Ya rhymes seem forced like storylines in beano, do you 'own a plan'
Beanos rhymes so flat like the beano mag, or like outa date 'cola can'
lol cola line = nice, your usin the beano mag too much though
Bitch i took this battle, like people taking magazines from 'markets'
You get walked over every time like the queen walkin on red 'carpets'
decent, dunno why you put 'around the rhyming words'
metaphors- s
wordplay - s
punches - s
vocab - b
multis - ehh prolly bout the same...
Vote- slayer... quiet a nice battle, slayer just had more hard hitting rhymes..
uppin....... be real with it^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
slayer: ok you had good multis and wordplay and you mixed up your rhyme scheme and kept bringing new ideas throughout your verse, i liked ur closer and also your "local store"/vocal cords, buttttt remember that sometimes instead of froving a multis its better to not do one and comme harder instead of sacrificing punch for multis.
overall-----7/10
Beano:nic verse but your structure could have used some work and the whole french/latin shit was pretty weak , who cared what the creeks said?? i dont. but since you atleast were trying to be creative ill give you credit.
you expect anyone to know what contumelius means??? honestly goodluck
like i pride myself on being pretty well read and having a good vocab but i dont knwo what the word means. you had some ok punches though----your third and 4 lines were your best in my opinion, keep elevatin
overal:6/10
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uppin for some votes c'mon now^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Uppin need more votes........I will return a vote
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Beano ~ I dunno man, your shit seemed to be forced..how long you take on that? The rhymes just need work thats all. You had some nice ideas, and creativity, and flow wasnt all that bad. Overall, like ive told other people..watch for the shit hot rappers and learn fromt their battels and shit.
Slayer ~ Pretty easy win for ya man. Flow was consistent, and vocab was nively varied and used. Personals were eh, ok, good overall verse though man, you gettin good
Vote: slayer
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a wanna get this battle closed ppl
votes votes votes !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Drop a link and i will repay a vote pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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