without me ..

[Edicius]

But yea, this was a good drop.. i liked your writers voice here.. very nice concept =) like fgee stated, good relevance, & indepth in ur writtin, .. flowed nicely.. very good drop.. i liked the second stanza the most, .. but it fitted well together .. =)

[Penskills]

Sand is Fuc*ing Dope! He's stuff should not be slept on!!!
<-Has nothing more to say.

*Write your verse for the crew collab* *If you haven't done it yet *

[Chris Black]

Ill. The opener was really nice. This flowed well. I like the use of multis. This was an enjoyable read.

"if money makes the world go round in a endless tragedy
then i can hold you down without making sense of gravity"

^I love that part. This whole drop was nice. Keep up the good work.

[Sand]

i will keep it up, thanks for replying cunts.

[Koalatee]

Trucking dope, you ass. If you were semi - active, you`d own this site - as would Kelsey & various crewmates. It was a rather new conviction you seemed to write with, pushing the poetic aspects aside for a few moments, I trust? A lot of times, with the way you wrote, a piece'll sound a bit multi - saturated, but you pulled it off with ease. Two impactful lines:

if money makes the world go round in a endless tragedy
then i can hold you down without making sense of gravity

I chuckled.

a restless vanity, i awake reasoning in almost every cell
to flip visions of vertices, and make heaven and hell parallel

Even though the flow was sketchy, 'twas dope.

Excellent, brethren. Peace
Qual.

[Sand]

i'm active now, and get on aim .. i'm attempting to get my s mod spot back, so if i do, i will be very active, and very owning. pz

[Richard Parker]

it sure seemed like an eminem remix. lol. was a lot like his style. but.. was a good piece. i dont like OMs much but this was pretty good. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
not much i can quote though. i didnt like ur first 6 like everyone else did. it got better in the middle of the verse.