The Path Of The Burnt Out Candle Smoke

[Penskills]

^^^Mister Pen is using his dick riding skills to get two pages of replies..
So consider this an upping for yoo cause yoo rock my socks mister Demik..

^You wish it was yours

[Maven.]

I quite enjoyed this.
you put cool morals and cool stories and coolness in general in words that are only on the edge of my understanding.
you make the rest of us look bad.

[Judge Judy]

Demik this is another good show of ya vast array of Vocab'
The good thing I like about your pieces is that your vocab'
isnt just in vain ( put there for show ). it actually suits the
piece very well & contrasts your imagery.
Kept my attention all the way through the piece w/ the momentum
you kept. It was consistently brewing throughout.
Flow was a few syllables off in places but nuttin major
Yet another well worked piece.
Props.

Hit this up plz.
Very Humourous
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118707

[Lingwistik]

the flow was nice, i liked the ryme scheme, it was consistent...the concept and topics were, well, apocolyptic......but this crated a lot of imagery in my head, alot......your vocabulary was unbelievable, really really good vocab......the metas were good also, i never even seen this OM, it was really good, props

can you please leave feedback in one of my two parts of Imagery, they in my sig

peace