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Thread: And` Fight. Ft. Fgee&Pot1ent

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    And` Fight. Ft. Fgee&Pot1ent

    Replyed to Dev & Baron
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    And` Fight.

    Round One : Pot1ent

    The rain poured and yet this young fighter toned his muscle
    And game score progressed the same as he honed to tustle
    Blues brain tore with the crimson red's band now rubbing on
    Seconds into and even now blue shrivelled like suds to long
    Bekon to cue so crowds stand tumbling like drying machines
    Trek on a feud with punches as ring men are trying to clean
    These blood stains lay there from the blues blood pattering
    Both rub's brains then blues forced and now tugs tatterings
    Gross grudge claims as red’s lightening hands make contact
    With big strikes like postal workers, he don’t take one back

    Referee's point of view:Fgee

    Watching closely every dancing move on the canvas
    as their colours merge in a blur
    and the gloves paint a fight of angers
    each trying to hamper the other, in a flurry of fisticuffs
    block jab hook and cover as knuckles slit the cuts
    and miss the guts in an everlasting storm of muscle
    i yell break up as they lock in a tussle
    earning my stripes as
    grown men fight for an over sized belt buckle
    i stand back, letting them command the square ring
    and as they land smacks
    im spattered by masses of sweat as the pair swing
    but tiredness sets in lightning feet are reduced to shuffles
    and air starved limbs know their in trouble
    each running on empty
    arms thrust on the last reserves of pride
    the blue corner shy
    as their mans face resembles their side

    Round Two : Edicius

    Drained out of energy leaving me completely exhausted
    yet my eyes filled w/ a roughened coating ` purely frosted
    and my physical & mentally state turned ` fatigued
    but the shouting of the crowd, and the winner inside me..
    kept me focused & intrigued
    Knowing this win was on my side..
    my vitals start degreeing..
    as he fell into my arms i told him in confide
    ' U are a very good & strong opponent'
    yet you are going down & lose this fight!
    Than he hit me & i started to spin..
    my concetration was off for one second..
    but i came back putting him in a state of `chagrin
    I was tired.. & victory was allready in .. but
    Knowing this round will come to an end ..
    inside my mind growed this hemorrhagic fever
    for a while ' yes' i was a reciever..
    and gastrointestinal symptoms of capillary hemorrhage
    accured turned me into a non-believer
    but i cant give in to them & need to continue
    I am not a little griever
    so i was determined to leave him were here stands!
    cause..` what good is a failing achiever?

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    Bravo~~~Bravo~~~Pot1tent...I have not read many pieces from you..but..I was certainly impressed by this...you did a great job wholding your own with this two great writers...Fgee..with your uniquie format of story telling...you always keep me interested...and Finally Eddy...My other M!sf!tted brother....What can I say...you are amazing man....yet..you are misunderstood most of the time..Maybe that's why we are M!sf!ts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    This a Dope Collab!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OM of the Month mos-def!!!!!

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    LMFAO...
    This was great
    Fuckin hilarious.
    Gotta give props to Pot1ent, Fgee, & Eddy
    Funny ass piece to read,
    All 3 verses were hilarious.
    But Pot1ents had better structure & flow.


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    I think Ill misunderstood a little o.O ne way .. Upper.

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    Lol.. i told i'm a little high right now
    I'll read it a few more times, maybe i'll get it.


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    LMFAO! i understand it now
    Eddy had to slap me a few times!

    Quote Originally Posted by edicius
    Round One : Pot1ent

    The rain poured and yet this young fighter toned his muscle
    And game score progressed the same as he honed to tustle
    Blues brain tore with the crimson red's band now rubbing on
    Seconds into and even now blue shrivelled like suds to long
    Bekon to cue so crowds stand tumbling like drying machines
    Trek on a feud with punches as ring men are trying to clean
    These blood stains lay there from the blues blood pattering
    Both rub's brains then blues forced and now tugs tatterings
    Gross grudge claims as red’s lightening hands make contact
    With big strikes like postal workers, he don’t take one back
    Nice vocab, good flow. Very interesting to read.
    Some pretty decent imagery. Better than expected from you.
    Like how you had this piece though, went nice with the concept



    Quote Originally Posted by Edicius
    Referee's point of view:Fgee

    Watching closely every dancing move on the canvas
    as their colours merge in a blur
    and the gloves paint a fight of angers
    each trying to hamper the other, in a flurry of fisticuffs
    block jab hook and cover as knuckles slit the cuts
    and miss the guts in an everlasting storm of muscle
    i yell break up as they lock in a tussle
    earning my stripes as
    grown men fight for an over sized belt buckle
    i stand back, letting them command the square ring
    and as they land smacks
    im spattered by masses of sweat as the pair swing
    but tiredness sets in lightning feet are reduced to shuffles
    and air starved limbs know their in trouble
    each running on empty
    arms thrust on the last reserves of pride
    the blue corner shy
    as their mans face resembles their side
    Lol.. pretty nice, good imagery also.
    Vocab was great, wordplay was pretty nice
    Fgee & his unique style of writing,
    It went in well with this.



    Quote Originally Posted by Edicius
    Round Two : Edicius

    Drained out of energy leaving me completely exhausted
    yet my eyes filled w/ a roughened coating ` purely frosted
    and my physical & mentally state turned ` fatigued
    but the shouting of the crowd, and the winner inside me..
    kept me focused & intrigued
    Knowing this win was on my side..
    my vitals start degreeing..
    as he fell into my arms i told him in confide
    ' U are a very good & strong opponent'
    yet you are going down & lose this fight!
    Than he hit me & i started to spin..
    my concetration was off for one second..
    but i came back putting him in a state of `chagrin
    I was tired.. & victory was allready in .. but
    Knowing this round will come to an end ..
    inside my mind growed this hemorrhagic fever
    for a while ' yes' i was a reciever..
    and gastrointestinal symptoms of capillary hemorrhage
    accured turned me into a non-believer
    but i cant give in to them & need to continue
    I am not a little griever
    so i was determined to leave him were here stands!
    cause..` what good is a failing achiever?
    Nice, pretty good fighter Eddy
    Nice flow, Somewhat good wordplay
    very Unique piece. Nice imagery
    Feels like i was Fighting..



    Very good piece by all 3 of you
    You all made this topic seem like reality!
    (yes, i box a little so i can relate a little more)
    But interesting piece, when is the rematch goin down?


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    Nice fucking piece. Po, always coming nice, great vocabulary, great structure and some very impressive one liners. Fgee, you also used good one liners, nice imagery and your verse was very good. Ed, always dropping dope ass verses, good imagery and good vocabulary. Nice fucking collab fellas.

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    good collab.....everyone had decent flow for the msot part but edicius was kinda choppy at some parts.....didnt matter cuz he had nice vocab..... wordply was there...jus everything nice

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    Simple rhyming fucks

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    iight..

    Good piece fella'z..

    All had a nice flow..
    Vocabulary was nice and relevant from all..
    Baron had the best structure..

    This was a nice topic..
    <-- Used to do boxing a while back..
    Could relate.. Lol..

    Good..

    Y'all hit my OM in my sig..

    Thanks..

    Pz..

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    It was not baron!.. Geez.. Up

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    Bump it up~~~

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    damn... this was pretty slick right yonder... n' shiiiiiiiiiiiiit... pimp...





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    Got 1` love for those verb replys ..

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    Hi Eddy

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