This song is unfinished but lemme know what you think about the first verse and the hook. Thanks.
Saint Louis' Finest
Verse 1:
It's no contest, I'm the best from the midwest/
I'm iller than cancer, and sicker than sperms with syphillis/
emcees easily get defeated, you'll get beat whichever way suits ya beat/ I'm more intense than automatic bullets to ya chest/I'm thru with the mess, put a bigger hole in you than jupiter/ and if you look in my eyes, you see I portray the image of lucifer/ I'm cruel to ya, y'all know that I'm not to be fucked with man/ type to enroll in the army to put a bullet in uncle sam/ I'ma stay at the top, all y'all wack faggot rappers get dropped/ my metaphors have ya heads spinnin' even faster than tops/ my tag-teams are hot/ people wanna test the best emcee, but they'll soon cease to breathe when they all get blasted and shot/
my raps are the bomb, you know I talk it, walk it, and pop it/ cuz all my rhymes explode off the tip of my tongue like they was rockets/ steadily bringing that hot shit/ don't nobody really wanna fuck with me/ cuz I'm steadily blazing these tazers at all the faggots and wannabe's/
Hook:
St. Louis' finest, we in the building/
causing trouble and harm, mothers lock up ya children/
we say what we mean, and we mean what we say/
So you can think that you ill, but ima be the king for today/
Repeat Hook
This aint finished yet but y'all tell me what you think. Thanx