10-12 lines
only instant crew votes
first to 5 votes
drop by sunday night 9.00pm GMT
goodluck both
Mentality
Mc Aines
10-12 lines
only instant crew votes
first to 5 votes
drop by sunday night 9.00pm GMT
goodluck both
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Doper Than You-
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checking in
copy and pasted from crew forum....
just want to say good luck aines......lets make this good
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You livin in nature cause dude im known to bury males
Instant knows you dreamin to win.. cause even your avy looks like a fairy tale!
You livin in this fake galaxy...I have verses you cant touch
Yea im gone Color your shirt Red but bro.... i aint no Paint Brush!
Im full speed, no control so dude you aint gonna stop me
Cuz in a minute you can be Balboa.... but for now you can call me Rocky
Why Call yourself a man..drop your light ass....You only found at the Bottom
Your location is wrong...Cuz you really bout to be known in my Loss Column!!
Sorry bout this embarressment....but truth is....your never gonna be sick
Battle was over before it started......and i didnt even mention your Pic!!
good luck.............lets make this a contest!
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ight check check
good luck mentality
verse will be dropped soon
ight heres ma shit
Runnin on street beats?Ur a bubble gum gangsta cos im leavin you popped..
It's like my salivas stone cos everytime i spit at you,ya rocked..
My styles ahead of you clown but i'll still break ya back bone..
.................................................. ....................ill verses?
Ya wack lyrics get thrown,Lmao you stil couldnt rock a mic if it was stone..
Why am i battling this herb?hes the bronze im the platinum..
...............................ur rhymes?Instant dont want them..
Your punches cudnt be more flat if ya mother sat on em...
15 yrs old thinkin you Phat tryin to attack with your skinny arms intact..
Tryin out for instant,being knocked back by aines with no time to react..
Now its time for aines to end this
Ive dipersed of ya work didnt you hear?queers get murked..
.................................................. .........Test me?lmao..
Realise ya worth!your a faggot why should I fear that verse?..
Im done now let the votin commence.....it dont look 12 lines but it is 10 or 11
mentalitys punclines were too basic and not creative at all the flow was nice though and so was the topic but the concept was crap
aines used very creative punchlines and is lyrically clever he also used lots of personals whereas mentality used none
vote aines
IVE TAKEN THE TIME IN URS TAKE SOME TIME AND LOOK AT MINE
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Suck My Hairy Balls U Faggot I Didnt Know That I Followed A Link
Anyway I Forgot To Vote So It Doesntb Matter
followed form what?you talk shit agen and my crew will humilliate yours.sshh
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You livin in nature cause dude im known to bury males
Instant knows you dreamin to win.. cause even your avy looks like a fairy tale!
[b]1st line is filler...second is a weak punch[b]
You livin in this fake galaxy...I have verses you cant touch
Yea im gone Color your shirt Red but bro.... i aint no Paint Brush!
weak...1st line is filler again...secon is e-thug shit..didn't hit hard
Im full speed, no control so dude you aint gonna stop me
Cuz in a minute you can be Balboa.... but for now you can call me Rocky
wtf? filler
Why Call yourself a man..drop your light ass....You only found at the Bottom
Your location is wrong...Cuz you really bout to be known in my Loss Column!!
This was an ok bar...1st line is meh...2nd is pretty ok
Sorry bout this embarressment....but truth is....your never gonna be sick
Battle was over before it started......and i didnt even mention your Pic!!
But you did mention his pic...weak bar
Runnin on street beats?Ur a bubble gum gangsta cos im leavin you popped..
It's like my salivas stone cos everytime i spit at you,ya rocked..
meh..ok i guess
My styles ahead of you clown but i'll still break ya back bone..
.................................................. ....................ill verses?
Ya wack lyrics get thrown,Lmao you stil couldnt rock a mic if it was stone..
Not feelin this structure....makes ya flow off
Why am i battling this herb?hes the bronze im the platinum..
...............................ur rhymes?Instant dont want them..
Your punches cudnt be more flat if ya mother sat on em...
whack
15 yrs old thinkin you Phat tryin to attack with your skinny arms intact..
Tryin out for instant,being knocked back by aines with no time to react..
weak
Now its time for aines to end this
Ive dipersed of ya work didnt you hear?queers get murked..
.................................................. .........Test me?lmao..
Realise ya worth!your a faggot why should I fear that verse?..
ok
Aines wins this for a less weak verse...Honestly bot can come better than this....Mentality...you had way too much filler...focus every line on a punch....Aines..you shit was kinda weak at times...but you won this with better and moreconsistent punches.
Vote=Aines
Drop an honest one here please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118436
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arent u in ijl???
anyways.......
uppin......only instant members......penskills lyric and rule can vote
menatlity =
You livin in nature cause dude im known to bury males
Instant knows you dreamin to win.. cause even your avy looks like a fairy tale!
played. dont really hit hard!!
You livin in this fake galaxy...I have verses you cant touch
Yea im gone Color your shirt Red but bro.... i aint no Paint Brush!
na, very weak punch
Im full speed, no control so dude you aint gonna stop me
Cuz in a minute you can be Balboa.... but for now you can call me Rocky
not good at all
Why Call yourself a man..drop your light ass....You only found at the Bottom
Your location is wrong...Cuz you really bout to be known in my Loss Column!!
ok
Sorry bout this embarressment....but truth is....your never gonna be sick
Battle was over before it started......and i didnt even mention your Pic!!
best line of your spit, personal as well
Mc Aines =
Runnin on street beats?Ur a bubble gum gangsta cos im leavin you popped..
It's like my salivas stone cos everytime i spit at you,ya rocked..
played but decent
My styles ahead of you clown but i'll still break ya back bone..
.................................................. ....................ill verses?
Ya wack lyrics get thrown,Lmao you stil couldnt rock a mic if it was stone..
ok,
Why am i battling this herb?hes the bronze im the platinum..
[B]...............................ur rhymes?Instant dont want them..
Your punches cudnt be more flat if ya mother sat on em...
didnt punch hard!!
15 yrs old thinkin you Phat tryin to attack with your skinny arms intact..
Tryin out for instant,being knocked back by aines with no time to react..
ok i guess
Now its time for aines to end this
Ive dipersed of ya work didnt you hear?queers get murked..
.................................................. .........Test me?lmao..
Realise ya worth!your a faggot why should I fear that verse?..
umm ok
mentality, came alright with the flow and structure, but your punches were weak. the only good punch you had was the last line. i've seen better from you!!!
mc aines = also came alright with flow and structure, but maybe the structure fell off a lil bit!! punches hit harder the mentalitys, but i've also seen better from you!!
vote = mc aines - for a better and wittier punches. both of you could of spit better than this. i'm dissapointed in this battle!! :-(
pz
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Both had played punches...
Mentality
You have potential but too many of your punches were played. You had good flow but your structure was fucked. Because of the played punches like the rocky one and the gay joke in the first line it shows that you need to be more creative...
Your best line was the closer...
MC Aines
Also a few played punches but not as many. And mother punches are extremely played and dont hit hard any more. Try not to use them. Again you have potential but it will take a lot of hard work to get to your highest level. Your flow was Ok but he structure dragged the verse on a whole down...
Your best line was your closer...
My vote goes to aines...His punches were wittier and although he had some played lines,there wasnt as many as in Mentality's verse. He needs to elevate but he shown that he has potential.
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