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Thread: The Path Of The Burnt Out Candle Smoke

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    Roll Out The Barrel N-Demik's Avatar
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    The Path Of The Burnt Out Candle Smoke

    Just a different style I'm trying out

    emptiness conserves the cranium in walls of liquid functions
    negligence is a the unseen vision of tarnished perfections
    deception seeps through the wounded iris and floods the spectrum
    while the lungs hung silently the grimacing heart pounds the echo drum
    with each echo the memories return and turn to violent disorders
    a flash of heat melting the conscience of logic’s borders
    and I’ve tried to see eye to eye but was lied to be blind men
    diving into a puddle of ink that reveiled malice intentions
    threw words, I stained the pages of sanity never mentioned
    Pollution runs rapid and inflicts weak through the domino effect
    "These are big shoes to fill" I said but continued with baby steps
    while the widows wept I kept my spotlight focus on development
    the sky dried with a crying ground but the apocalypse seems irrelevant
    The ignorant wise men mumbled intelligent facts of the fruits of life
    But humankind’s concepts bit the holes of worms threw eternal light
    The fight of turmoil burns deep with in life’s candle and wick
    But we put out the flames to paint images in the dark we depict
    With strict guidelines where breaking the boundaries of acoustics
    Trying to submerge the eight ball with a frail warped pool stick
    So as the thoughts conclude I ask what is the true meaning of life

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    The cranium Geraniums where the baby hums


    ^ i got your style locked negro.

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    Legends. . INSTANTLY
    I`m telling you, the hidden meaning to this peice is just soooo fucking classic ..

    LEGEND


    negligence is a the unseen vision of tarnished perfections


    Those words, put together SOO Nicely


    10/10

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    oh shit, n-demik i dont even know what to say....this is some next level shit, i usualy dont like that aesop style but this got me thinking. i think this deserves legends, more then your other one nominated right now.

    this was dope. its almost poetry.

    i love you n-demik suck my blood!!!!!!!

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    JAE CYPH STOLE MY NIGGERFUCKING AVATAR, yO.

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    beyond dope.
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    Follow the rules this will be closed otherwise.

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    - Artificial Intelligence

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    I am not worthy to reply to this - much props.

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    I'm dead.


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    Hence Forward

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    vocab is as always superb
    and the meanings, tho hard to hold on too
    since i dont swallow dictionarys and shit
    was sick. had to read it over couple of times
    but in the end it was a good read.
    good change i guess .
    . . . . .

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    illness again..
    your style is so unique in that you use english language in a way most can only dream of an still come out with a distinct meaning behind it all
    intelligent,poetic,insightful,and meaningful...
    really thoughtful piece like others ive seen of yours..liked it alot
    too many nice lines to really quote..
    props

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    it's a bold statement - the new youtube

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    Incredible...this should go in da hall of fame thing boi..."But we put out the flames to paint images in the dark we depict/With strict guidelines where breaking the boundaries of acoustics/Trying to submerge the eight ball with a frail warped pool stick...i like this part...what can i say this piece is off da chain...check out my latest piece

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...900post1241900

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    speechless.........
    dis was so deep i drowned trying to understand it lol
    good drop good everything legends mos def

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    Quote Originally Posted by fgee
    illness again..
    your style is so unique in that you use english language in a way most can only dream of

    WORD! i think im going to nominate this. N-demik is so dope.

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    N-demik is so dope.
    I know man...I bet you're jealous!

    Thanks for the replies

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    *I will not nominate this for Legends*
    *He exposed my alias,I will not read his piece ever again*
    *I will not say he is dope!*

    Demik...You are Dope!*I'm a sucker.....=(

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    ^^^Mister Pen is using his dick riding skills to get two pages of replies..
    So consider this an upping for yoo cause yoo rock my socks mister Demik..
    WordPerfect

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