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Thread: How Many Faces

  1. March 3rd, 2004, 04:23 PM #1
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    How Many Faces

    The faceted crystal reflects light that fragments
    Dispersing in directions depending on the strength
    Its powers immense, from tense to evil, hateful and good
    With many of its perceptions misunderstood
    It has extremes, cos it’s drought as well as flash floods
    And its dreams and nightmares dripping in blood
    Ripping like it should and shouldn’t but it does
    Cos peeps are different, so’s what gives them a buzz
    Yes, some’s strange love, other’s straight down the line
    A vast range is present from adolescents doing crime
    To gentle giants never defiant, giving no reason to do time
    So get this rhyme, a face can lie, a smile can be faked
    And a split personality can partake in many shapes
    But that doesn’t tell you trust should be brushed away
    Cos 99% of our race is safe, their personalities sane
    Yet the insane have a way of placing people in shells
    From outgoing to recluse, jus from how the News delves
    But remember more go to heaven than go to hell
    So there’s no dilemma, live… forget them and live well


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  2. March 3rd, 2004, 04:36 PM #2
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    ahh fuck sake man.. Not again.. Fuck you biatch..










    Why you keep droppin good shit?

    Lol.. .. This was good Devster.. Flowed good through-out.. Inner multi's and rhymes.. Nice.. So on and so on..

    Honestly.. Cant find something to critisize.. Maybe this will do.. For something that was so short.. It took me ages to read the damn thing.. Dont know why.. Just did.. Thats all the "critisizm" a can think of..

    Well done..

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  3. March 3rd, 2004, 05:36 PM #3
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    thnx... but come on peeps quit sleeping... your all young, not old men..lmao
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  4. March 3rd, 2004, 05:55 PM #4
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    *Stares in awe* Dope D......just plain dope....you imagery was outstanding.....I could picture an see everything you mentioned....dope......

    Everything was on fire in this piece......your vocab was vocabulary is very deep.....makes for a great read....I can't critisize nothing.....cause everything here was well done.....

    Never a dissapointment reading one of your pieces....always great.....good job once again......

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  5. March 3rd, 2004, 06:00 PM #5
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    ^^lol....thnx.... no need to be too praise'ful........ but i am dope so...lmao
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  6. March 3rd, 2004, 06:10 PM #6
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    Nice piece - It felt like something a father might say to his child - kinda instructional - thought that was good. Conveyed your point in a short time. Flow was nice, vocab was good. One thing the closing line said live twice which made it worded a little oddly. Nice work from you once again however - Hit my ELEETE collab if you get a chance. (Two Geniuses - One Mind) Peace
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  7. March 3rd, 2004, 06:14 PM #7
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    ^^i hear what ya saying, but if ya read thru proprery.. its the style.... in an odd way
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    Sorry I wasn't clear - I liked the tone you used. I edited the above post.

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  9. March 3rd, 2004, 06:34 PM #9
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    np man.... thnx
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  10. March 4th, 2004, 03:02 AM #10
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    Lol..Dont get too carried awya with ur "Dopeness"...I mean 5-1...Rediculous....

    Anyway, Props on this man...

    Its another one i like from you...Iv seen u elevate allot in the last week...(Not saying that u needed to, But with that mouth of urs, i think u should, maybe, a little bit...Cuz its me and you soon sonny boy..!!)

    U used fine vocab, U used the right amount...In places where it was most affective...

    U use more and more internals and multies each time...Wich is nice...

    I liked it...

    Ohh, Hope u havin fun in Crufts man...
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  11. March 4th, 2004, 08:30 PM #11
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    ^^ it took 6 fucking hours to get there and 6 getting back...FUCK...lol.... other than that it was good..... oh and thnx for the feedback, but id concentrate on your writing, cos i aint slacking with our nrxt confrontation... lmao
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  12. March 5th, 2004, 06:44 AM #12
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    Lol....^^

    Well see Hombre..!!!
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    ^^sure will.....upp
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    upp.... cos i cant be fucked to post another tonight....lol...thnx to those who reply
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  15. March 6th, 2004, 12:33 AM #15
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    well done. good use of vocab, multis. this was a good read. short enough to keep interest, but long enough to get the point across. cant really think of an area for you to improve on, except maybe wordplay? nice drop.
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