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    Sleep Deprived

    one night, got up bare naked lookin white as shit,
    started sleep walking while writing this,
    made up something ridiculous, started falling plus,
    im not embarrassed, cuz its happened to all of us
    wrote something random down, hand started aching,
    tried the hand again, pen started shaking,
    stopped writing, got me agitated & i pressed harder
    tried to make the ink come out, it just OUGHTA !
    didnt know wtf i was doin, i account it where,
    i live in a rancher & swore i fell down the stairs
    tripped all the way to the fridge, opener the freezer
    hadnt had my milk yet, hadnt had opium neither,
    shut the fuck up yall, i errode ya defense,
    but im sleep deprived, so i hope this makes sense..
    i went back to my writing, a knowledge infestor,
    and started typing it up like a college professor
    laid back started drifting off, out in a daze
    but seeing as im feeble minded i doubt ya amazed,
    woke up a few hours later, got back to my writing
    but up to this point, its lacking enlightening
    i looked back to other ideas, was hoping again,
    till i realized this really couldnt have been wrote w. a pen..

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    literally fck ur own face Wise Ways's Avatar
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    Nice original topic here
    Good flow and multies
    Liked tha tripping line
    Tha best..I can't sleep
    Sometimes too..solid drop

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  3. #3
    This was a good read.Very simple,Yet very enjoyable.I had a laugh while I was reading this.I'm we have all had this experince before.Once again Very enjoyable.

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    what are you on? lol, this was crazy stupid dope lol
    i liked it a lot, the whole time i was like wtf, this kid
    is crazy, i like that originality on the real, the ending
    provided a nice little conclusion, my only advice would
    be to go take a few hits of opium and take a nap ..
    pz brother.
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