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Thread: 'The Complexity Of Love' Dopeness

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    'The Complexity Of Love' Dopeness

    'The Complexity Of Love'


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    Asked a question from a woman that I've learned many lessons
    feelings that dwells deep with N.Why She couldn't share or give.
    She feels so secluded.., due to past circumstances and, loves
    complex situations. Love so diverse like the string of genetics.
    It's built in our DNA but, yet we can't grasp loves versatile ways.
    As hands and blood flows on this topic my body is left perplex.
    Subject must be disected,Cause we will be put threw loves test.
    One question to luv when we finally find U why we're left still lost?
    love is loneliness? passion? kindness? happiness? patience?
    or just all the above. I've cried tears at night due to my heart bites
    headaches, on why I still have yet fount my wife.My soul takes flight,
    to the heavens asking God when will I finally feel peace inside,,,,
    but yet still no reply. No peace Love to me is making me bleed
    Why do I feel like I belong with someone but yet not have received?
    It's such a tease.Trapped in a metaphor of a cage can't breathe.
    I feel my life closing in yelling out loud, ...FEELINGS LEAVE!!!!.
    I don’t want love anymore! but I still won't seas finding my dream.
    Love why are you so difficult, Just answer the call of my feelings.
    My depth places needs to be relinquished, or my heart will be
    finished. I still ask the question what is love but yet U have not
    answered. So complex , I'm stressed. Writing a piece like this
    Now I know why they say "Love is Bliss" I want to be blessed.
    with Loves answer to why are so Complex.!!

    Absolute Power

    Drums beat in time as we try to analyze the cunning of passion
    Yet when examining your lover’s vows there is no mitigation of voice
    Epistles of love portraying double sided faces and we ponder on
    We engage in a dance of life twisting and complexing over passion
    Stare across into the soul, trying to find the conscience
    Pondering over the direction of the psyche and dying to get the answers
    We die a little each time we take action upon us to inspire love
    With the poetical essence swelling within our sunken souls
    Pooling up and cueing up thoughts never yet processed by our hearts
    Praying and paying homage to heaven to get a conscious connection
    To the answer…the answer…the answer still yet unknown even to god
    As to what makes us love for it always ends up in loss yet we strive on
    Inscribed within endless volumes of pages sifted through minds of opal
    Contemplating green and yellow melancholies, mixed colors of emotion
    Blood shed for each tear that drips from my pierced heart
    And if you shall love, in the pains of it, remember.
    It tis a world more complex then the utter brilliance of heaven’s light.

    I feel this was a dope piece and hopefully me and Absolute will get
    Replies.. Peace

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    good lookin man... a kinda poetic examination of love... i dun understand love but thats me prob aint it ... good lookin bio think u easily out shined me lol

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    We compliment each other in this piece by using two different styles
    To analyze the complexity of love….
    We shined together in this piece hopefully other heads will realize.

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    uppin!

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    Dope, anymore questions? How come you don't drop more?

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    Don't be having time....and uppin

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    Ok damn atleast a feew more replies this piece isn't that long of a read...

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    yah definately nice pice, yah the two styles did lift this up, they went good together, good topic, , jus a good collabo. good flow, the structure was good, good meaning to it 2, yah and it was a good "description of luv" i guess if thats wut u wanna cal it, nice drop, nice collab, keep it real man,

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    yah definately nice pice, yah the two styles did lift this up, they went good together, good topic, , jus a good collabo. good flow, the structure was good, good meaning to it 2, yah and it was a good "description of luv" i guess if thats wut u wanna cal it, nice drop, nice collab, keep it real men

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    It was a nice piece.
    Cant' really say much
    Took words out of my keyboard


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    Ty for feed back..much appreciated
    peace

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    werd much appreciated

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    bumpin?

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    Nice enough..

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    nice out look on the complexcity of love....multies were nice.....you both complimented eath others drop.....flows seemed solid....vocab was nice

    nice drop from both
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    check my drop "defining ill~ness"

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