10-12 lines blind spit, just get it done soon...
flood
The judge
10-12 lines blind spit, just get it done soon...
i ll spit within 20 mins man..........good luck..............................woot...........
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So call your self the judge, tell me the judge of what
You walk up in the gay bars and you judge they buts
Tell me where you come from, all the whos and whats
Hang around a lotta dick man you must be nuts
You and ya crew-<> oh wait you aint got one
I'm here to slay the opposition cuz I gotta get some
Shatter ya ribs with my words as they leave you stunned
Liten up son this unsung hero's won
And I'm really here to let you have no fun
Go ahead and tell me that your gonna grab your gunz
My wieghts a ton on you, its over, done
easy but,
flood couldn't even make a crew.....let alone try-out,
fuck this stain rite up...and leave my lines to take the die-out,
merking this newbish hoe...even with a limp wrist you cant let this go,
its funny how this hazord is a flood...but ent got no flow,
ill leave this flood to freeze im so cold..pulling him apart.
and just to tell you man..no one knows(sig) who you are,
it doesn't make sense how the judge can merk you in 15 minuits,
so wak..people mistake your last bar as your start not your finnish,(get it?)
even climbing mount everist you couldnt reach my peech,
cause my lines will drain you out..leaving this flood officaily leaked.
quick merk...........woot
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ayt vote judge but i wasnt feeling floods at all, not 1 good punches, structure and flow was ok,no good personals, ive seen a lot better from judge he had some good pucnhlines,structure was good as was flow so he gets this
1st.................thx.........................wo ot
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2nd............................................... .........woot
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vote judge by a lot..........4 starters flood u say he aint got a crew wen he has 1??was it cos it went past u in a instant and then it was gone???lol....n e way judge u merked this kid the only decent thing flood had was structure and that was still a bit wack.....u can tell ur definately a newbie and u need 2 go visit the wackness emergencie centre 2 improve ya punches and personals it may sound harsh but i gotta tell the truth 2 ya 2 help ya improve....most of ya lines were played 2....also next time u have a battle at least research ur opponnent properly....he has a crew...with that sed judge u merked him as u had good structure flow punches the lot.....every thin that is needed 2 win a battle.......so no need 2 really finish breakin urs down judge as u had better flow punches structure....that is why u get my vote....
Wow...this was whack...Judge won easily....
Flood...You came mad played....get rid of all gay/sex jokes....they are played out.....with that said it leaves you like 2 bars left....And that was wannabe net gangster rhymes and filler...Be more creative in ya verse and show some originality man...
Judge...you came alright...kinda played at times...but the punches/persoanls.metas were all ther and they all hit pretty hard....An overall alright verse...More than enough to win this battle...
Please drop an honest one here..thanks http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116909
A few achievements here and there
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thx alot..........^..................................3 rd.................
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4th plz dont sleep yall.............................................. ........................thx
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omg 5th sleeping...............zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..... ........plz vote yall.....
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vote: judge
better in every categorie
didnt like the other dudes verse it was verry simple, judge had sum nice multies
judge vote on one my battles fairly since ur online, thanks peace it
This was very one sided battle...the Judge killed the other clown...Flood's verse was wack as it gets...he was over flooded with wackness..he had virtually no punches that hit!
Liten up son this unsung hero's won
And I'm really here to let you have no fun
wtf was that??? Lmao...
on the other hand The Judge actually came with decent punches and good multis..very one sided battle...Vote-The Judge
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
Ok I'm in a bit of a rush but heres a quick explanation
Flood-Your lines are short, and structured well, which is pretty good, but that is the only positive aspect of your verse that I could find. You gotta work on your punches.....make them hit harder, and put some multis into it. Also, your flow lost me at times, and your wordplay was a bit forced.....
So call your self the judge, tell me the judge of what
You walk up in the gay bars and you judge they buts
I guess you had a decent idea here......but you really gotta learn to better formulate your punches
Judge-
flood couldn't even make a crew.....let alone try-out,
fuck this stain rite up...and leave my lines to take the die-out,
My favorite part of your verse...this was pretty funny/original....good call here
Unfortunately, I didn't really feel the rest of your verse. You came ok, but a little played. Overall, you gotta work on wording as well, and be a bit more creative...but decent verse overall.
Vote=Judge
Go Red Wings
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