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    The Bible Code

    The Bible Code


    Introduction


    A Genesis written 3000 years ago, by a being surpassing our existance
    we all imagine him as GOD, however my perceptions put up a resistance
    What is this heavenly creature - that writes these future predictions
    with technology with mystical features, giving us futeristic visions
    I belive they are evolved beings, who visited ancient generations
    traveling the universe exploring, and using us as petrol stations...
    writing our future in code,with machines that explore throught time
    in theory its all possible,according to a unique mind of Albert Ainstain
    we have existed for many centuries, our technology just started to evolve
    from the mysteries of the universe to our creator so much more to solve...
    however this code - cerries a curse which spells out the human extinction
    terrorists, World powers and nuclear arms all causing tremendous friction
    And when we face our dark hours, not far from now according to the source
    earth will face Armageddon, "End of Days" coming from nuclear force...


    The Bible Code (The Creator)


    "The Distinction between past, present, and future is only an illusion
    however persistant." - Albert Einstein , 1955


    A code exists that writes out the human past to the future we await
    Obviously written by an intelligent being , thats witnessed our fate
    and if the future is foreseeing, than these creatures are way ahead
    but why is it interfering - why does it care if we are dead...
    Centuries ago before time was remebered - a mysterious code existed
    from the first world war to Sep 11th all the details were listed
    Who gave us this monument , was it GOD? as religion guides us to belive
    or were we visited by extra terrestrials who decided to leave
    with technology way beyond our imagination , left us a present
    gave us an outsight into our future, their way of paying rent...
    did they alter the universial pattern by showing us their face
    Religion was born from these beings, it could soon end our race...

    Braking The Code ( the secret book )

    The Code was finaly cracked, by a Mathematician from the Isreali nation
    filled with amazing fact, from the JFK murder to the computer creation
    The world was shocked, as code clearly predicting the German Invasion
    from the comet collision with Jupiter to the Rabin assasination
    One fact stood out as the outstanding inscription that had the world shook
    a mesage" Horror will be created , after the opening of the secret book"
    as the statement stated , the secret book was opened by a computer
    now like all hope's faded, casting a strong shadow over our future...

    Apocalipse ( The End of Days)

    "But thou, O Daniel, Shut up the words and seal the book until
    time of the end" - Book of Daniel 12:4


    Prophecy of great distruction, nuclear holocaust and more
    the code states Apocalipse isn't coming, its already at the door
    when we have the tools to understand, time of the end will follow
    atomic mashrooms will grace the land, making the world hollow
    Armageddon will emerge in the world, as good and evil collide
    war will be followed by the devil, who will take us all in hes stride
    The code predicts time will stand still, in less than a decade
    and all the evil that we done , it shell be repaid....

    Controlling Destiny

    Is the code a prophesy , or just probabilities leaving us clues
    maybe theres more than one path, and its up to us to choose
    we have evolved to solve the math, now we must take conroll
    if this was trully a gift, its only there to stop our fall
    Perhaps these intergalatic travelers will return to visit again
    to leave us with such gifts , they must know the potentional of our brain
    But as the world evolves its nuclear arsenal, and terrorism brings pain
    all the directrions we chose, seem to point to nuclear rain
    but we must understand that we have evolved enough for extintion
    and the next war will be the last, as a great mind said in its vision:

    "I dont know what World War III will be fought with,
    but i know World War IV will be fough with sticks and stones" -Albert Ainstine


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    First of all, I want to watch how I comment on this piece. Overall, I think the rating is anywhere from a 7.6-8.5/10 rating... You really stayed on topic. Its nice to see writings from all aspects of life and not just another shoot em up type of piece. Very deep writing (in certain spots)
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    aight eki....i'll reply later...right now i cant concentrate on what
    im reading...cuz of all the shit going on over here...i'll edit a reply
    later...peace

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    Nice essay-like piece. I saw some repetition but overall you progressed well. Thought I saw some of a double rhyming scheme but it wasn't consistent - would like to see you do that. Flow and vocab were both alright. Original piece - that's a plus. Thought you picked some nice quotes too. I liked the one you ended with especially. Nice work again Eki. Keep writing.

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    This was pretty much hella tight from begining to end...The downfalls with a piece like this is it may come off as some kind of book report you know?...like your just stating a bunch of facts one after another.....but the things you were saying were deep as fuck....its hard to point out a specific line..but i really think that ""The world was shocked, as code clearly predicting the German Invasion
    from the comet collision with Jupiter to the Rabin assasination"" was a good one....The lines were pretty stretched, but i think it is possible to this over the right music....if thats what this is intended for...otherwise this is a beautifully written essay

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    thought this was nice and original.... and had ome very deep aspects to it... which i liked... thought all the verses were pretty consistant... but i prefered the last verse, dunno why, jus did...lol.... but you really got alot into this... maybe cos of the length..lol... nah, jus alot in it.... well constructed.... the length put me off a bit, but ya didnt really fall anywhere.... all in all a solid read.... the only thing i aint keen on is the bible, co im a heathen..lmao...... tight read Ek'.... keep droppping em'....
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    This is hands down my favourite open mic EVER... 9.9/10

    It's so refreshing to see something new and original like this... I've never read anything like it and it kept my interest from beginning to end... I like the way you challenged popular belief and showed some great storytelling in the process.. you should do this audio... having quotes from Einstein throughout was very dope indeed...

    As for vocabulary, this gets top marks... I liked the line about the atomic mushrooms... dope stuff... your storytelling ability is awesome, and you narrated the whole thing like you were some supreme being watching everything... the only downfall in the piece was the flow well off at some points, but its nothing compared to the good points...

    I've read some of your other stuff and your fast becoming my favourite open-miker... if thats a word

    good work!!

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    ^^ cheers man from another wog

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    Deep dude. Do you like philosophy at all? I think about stuff like that all the time and it was nice to know that someone could drop a piece with it in mind. I give it an 8/10. I liked how you stayed on topic. Dope man.
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    This is a great open mic you have a really philosophical perspective on life and death continue to use lines like that in your battles and your sure to win them. Great meaning, deep and spiritual and yet still very powerful and gets straight to the point keep up open mics like this!! hope to read more of your stuff Eki good luck wif your open mics.

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