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Thread: - London Underground -

  1. #1
    Razer
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    - London Underground -

    To the world, are rappers are just another sound,
    Swept Underground, Like We're Just Outta Bound,
    We just wanna rap with a different accent in a new way,
    Make A Shitload of money, And represent the UK,
    Music is our life, just give us an opportunity,
    And we'll create a place full of wealth and rap unity,
    Ive studied rap for years and thats a well known fact,
    But What the fuck am i to do, with no major contract?

    Pe@ce

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    Wasnt actually that bad... Flowed nice... Some nice ideas... And some truth always help an OM... ...

    Make it longer next time...

    Pz...

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    ^ What he said..!!

    But..Pleas keep things like this to ur self..It gives us a bad name...

    Make A Shitload of money, And represent the UK,

    Stay active here in OM...If ur not new...WHATS UR FUCKIN OLD NAME...

    Anyway, If ur new...Stay active...Better ya self...(jus a lil bit, lol)

    And write longer shit..

    Pzz
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    IllConceptz
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    This piece was alright, flowed decently, rhymes were basic, some emotion in it, good concept, the first line caught my attention, but the last bar wasnt that great.. Its kinda hard to critique something so short... Make it longer next time.

    Peace.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bigg E Z
    Stay active here in OM...If ur not new...WHATS UR FUCKIN OLD NAME...
    Bigg... Wouldnt think a "vet" would drop this short of an OM... He is deff new methinks...

    Pz...

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  6. #6
    Razer
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    Im sorta New


    Pe@ce

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    You need to leave 2 links of replies you left or else this will get closed, Thanks.

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    Lol..Free', The reason i sed that is becuz i did this last week...

    lol...Mistook a N0ob for a "Vet".....
    ArcBiggEZ

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    Lol... iight man...

    Pz...

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    I felt this cuz, flowed real hott... i can't really break this up, cus it was too short...make it a li'l longer next time... I didn't really feel it at first, dunno why, but then about tha 3rd line, it got real, I felt every word you wrote on and after tha 3rd line... shit was sweet 'n short... 7/10

    Btw, where abouts in London you rep'n?

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  11. #11
    Razer
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    ^^Safe Blud^^ Im reppin brixton, fulham, battersea, chelsea and most of south london.

    Pe@ce

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