busta_bust v.s Bio*Chemist

[Illus']

10 lines max:

No feeding
No recycling
No crew Votes
No biting
Etc
10 lines max..
Due anytime today…
Peace…

[Illus']

Ok this is my check in…
Oh yes it is 20 lines max not ten….
We both agreed on it…

Check in Busta

Peace

[busta_bust]

aites im checking in.... check 1..2.. recording lol

[busta_bust]

aites im checking in.... check 1..2.. recording lol im rdy to get torn up by Bio lol

[busta_bust]

yo im spitting first so go when you can aites....

[busta_bust]

aites yo i had to go back to skool. but i skipped 3rd :P so im here and rdy to spit

[busta_bust]

I say shit that makes Mc’s throw in their towels the type of shit which makes you hold in your vowels//
And dis freestyle aint free I need Dinero… no doe o well their goes your bone marrow//
I got an extra chromosome which levels my vocal tone styll no comparison to when your girl moans//
Bio I think u got a few two many ribosomes//
U think your big but am overgrown lyke a moble home//

One or two punch lines just to get u bleeding, u couldint beat me if u went to the future and stoped my parents from meeting//
Ill leave your body split lyke genetically spliced mice your making me sick u better wipe twice// so if u see me on the streets don’t say what’s up cuz Im ina bed wit ur G that’s what’s up// but your B!tch she got some werid symptoms its lyke she’s your Hilary and your her Clinton//

Don’t stop, cant stop, wont stop fo shur better lock the door when I rock the floor//
I see your true colors it truly shows. u the type to walk ina bar with a broken nose//
So you cant fool me with your thug references and no I don’t wanna know about your gay preferences//
Shredding up lines the purpose of ur back spas-ums, force feeding u Mercury lyke u were some sorta cyotoplasm//
So This what happens when u cant spit with out a drink cant even join a boy band cuz u in the sink maybe I really should go to a shrink cuz ripping u Mc’s is a basic Instinct//

Just turn back now u never had a chance cant you see, go back to those guys u meet in nursery//
You cant handle the pressure due to your body size, leave u dead on the ground with them open eyes//
Now it’s the end and u got served with a fries and a soda, your outta here, gone, peace. Nice to know yeahh//…

[Yungstarr*]

^alotta ur shit didnt make sense,it just rhymed

"And dis freestyle aint free I need Dinero… no doe o well their goes your bone marrow//"

i didnt get that

[mad-skillz]

oviously yunsta ain't spic dinero= money anyways busta that was sum il shit omfg, dirty. lets c wat bio has to say about this

[busta_bust]

yunsta is gay dont talk if u ono what ur talking bout lol. im rdy chemist dont tear me up to bad :P

[Dissonance]

OMFG... Stop Free-POSTING.. That shit gets you banned!!!

[Illus']

The first time you step up against the Chemist.. Is the day U met Death.
The only way Ur surviving this If the battle gets slept…
Another emcee in my anatomy list call it an Onslaught
Bust already admitted that I will leave him Torn.
Roll Ur whole skin up like cresses , Wire Ur jaw and leave U speechless.
Look at his Avatar and Alias -Tin Head- has -Busted Features-
Sending U relentless beatings.. I did my research on Ur -Genes- and
Fount out Ur style is -Fading-…
Thoughts left swaying, Look at his location -T dot dot- U must be from
An area of stuttering language….Speech impediments,
Like underground Hard Rock Ur just a fossil trapped in -Sediments-
Begging for me to come lenient , I would but my worse suffices Ur iLLest.
Newbie left on my kill list. This kat could be a model for Terror Magazine
And still couldn’t -Pose A Threat- U got regrets battling the Chemist,
U wanted to go against me now here’s ya chance. One glance and watch
Him wet his pants!
Punches left leaving U dazed , the only time U come with complex lines
Is when Ur whack structure looks like a -Maze-


Around 18 lines good enough…

Uppin No freeposting

[ak-mixa]

bust didn't have an even flow through his words and his basic set up was straight newbish.........anyways bust didn't have a whole lot of metaphors or punchlines....really he didn't have any hard hitting pieces of his verse at all....if i must say so......extreme elevation on all of da above especially on his line equalness...Bio chemist...well it seemed dat I could and kinda catch your rhyming scheme here and there but at da beginning it was kinda off...still da verse was good enough to look beyond dat and get a job well done.....looks like you didn't put as much thought into beating bust too bad...Bio chemist jus make all your shit rhyme a little better...but it's not dat bad......Biochemist had da better dissing verse than bust....so my vote goes to Biochemist.

vote=Biochemist

*vote on ma battles here*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116164
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114817
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114748
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[Illus']

Listen we need pole votes lol…I appreciate you taking the time to vote
But we need pole ones to actually get active lol…
This is why all my battles are never done lol

[BaNE]

flow/structure- neither

ummm both verses were all over the place...busta had a bar for each line and last time i checked slaught didn't rhyme with torn.... and chemist don't use dashes to point out ur punches/wordplay

punches/personals- bio

busta just lacked any creativity.."Bio I think u got a few two many ribosomes//
U think your big but am overgrown lyke a moble home//" ummm....:-/
chemist had some decent personals and several nice punches with some noticable wordplay... props

rhyme scheme/multis- bio

chemist had some multis and variety.... busta was just soo basic..i dislike last word rhyming...

creativity/wordplay- bio

"Bio I think u got a few two many ribosomes//
U think your big but am overgrown lyke a moble home//"-busta
"the only time U come with complex lines Is when Ur whack structure looks like a -Maze"-bio (even though stretched, do the math)

overall- bio

i'll poll vote once i get 100 posts