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Thread: A-Town

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    A-Town

    no you sillies..not Atlanta..but..the real "A" town..I got this from someone who did D-Live..whoever did theres was dope..this is my version..

    My accuracy is accountable to abashing cats
    Abstruse acts, A-Bomb actions leave niggas abstract
    Acrimonious to the artery with the most advanced articles
    Assassinate assemblages with assembled deadly particles
    Activate acariasia,accredit me into the alliance
    Infect the young like acne, then lead them into defiance
    Ambidextrous fire arms standing amiss admidst
    Alongside altars,live and bleed, that proves life is a bitch
    Assholes aren't acceptable,Im greeted with acclaim at festivals
    Im accused of breaking down the best crews to the smallest decimal
    Acting like your muscle actin cant be subdused to actinogen
    Acrid by the acre, acrocentric bars,heard the acoustic again
    Adamant adolescence adapting to acts of God
    Automatic, acrobatic,acme ack-ack to the odd
    Agile agent, set apart the Allegheny Mountains
    Allegro allegories, revived in aliment fountains


    You may want to grab a dictionary

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    Nice piece!!! Nice wordplay and creativity. dope idea of droppin in this style. One of the most original ideas yet.
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    ^^ actually..it wasnt original..I said I seen someone else do this..but it was with the letter "D"

  4. #4
    ummm..uppin?

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    damn..it seems like I got to be dissing someone just to get some replies...

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    damn, no replies on this shit...

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    this wasnt to bad acctualy... good vocab and it was creative.. but your downfall was your sturcture and it didnt flow that well... I sorta couldnt go along with it... andyways keep droping

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    finally..I got some damn feedback..thank god!!

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    Decent peice..
    Nice wordplay
    Vocab was good
    Flow was good
    imagery.. was decent (Could use work)


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  10. #10
    YAY!!!!
    I got another reply, now lets get atleast 5 more then I'l shut the fuck up..

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    aight this was pretty good in my perspective.yo flow was good and yo wordplay,that shit was bad ass,but like ILL said gotta work on da structure,but i think this was a pretty dope drop holla mane

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    uppin for some more replies
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    structure wasnt verygood but good vocab word play. i had to think dis piece over for about 10 mintues

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    w00t
    im dope

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    Some alliteration ish,good concept to do it ur way,nice vocab,some words were well placed although it's difficult,wordplay was dcent,afew mata's,flowed pretty well i thought,Structure would probly be ok in audio.Good drop

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