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Thread: E! True Hollywood Stories: The Rap Game

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    E! True Hollywood Stories: The Rap Game

    ...and to conclude this hour long special we are going to have a once in a lifetime interview. So in your own words can you explain what kind of influence rap has had on your life?

    Well the rap game has made me famous, made me who I am. I'm saying at the different times of rap I changed who I was and what I was spitting, rapping I mean. I was first exposed to it at a party, two kids rapping to out do each other. I was addicted on the spot. I knew I had to get in that game so I decided to get into it. I choose that name because I was just all about taking it easy and speaking my mind. Hence Speek.E.Z.

    ...I feel the liquor circulate through my body, as the beat drops
    All the chatter stops, as I grab the mic, and my feet stomps
    Get the feeling for the flow, and let the crowd get ready
    As my flow starts, just making sure everything stays steady
    Because I can’t miss a beat or two, because that leads to boos
    Even if it’s in front of friends with booze, this emcee can’t lose
    I must take this as a stepping block, a way to learn to flow
    And if I keep up, Hip Hop will be the teacher of everything I know
    So as my heart beats faster, I close my eyes and picture the outcome
    That this young MC, will emerge a star from the status of no one...


    Oh yes, you have been known for having so many name changes. What made you make the transition to doing battles and stepping away from party rhymes?

    Well at a party some cat stepped to me and was talking this blah blah about being better than me and that I was just a copy of him. He picked up the mic, told the party DJ to put on an instrumental. He called himself something like Door Wise or some sh*t. I ripped him when I called myself Emerge. After that I took on every challenger and kept the name Emerge

    Growing up there was different ways, of earning your respect
    Sell coke and meth nights and days...or burning all them vets
    Had enough drama with my mama so I didn't wanna attain more
    Plus my spits were lava & I saw a lot-a old same metaphors
    So I brought the fresh wit, and dropped all that death shit
    And I left with The Best kids, asking for me to rep with
    Them, became the spoken leader chosen speaker and set the plane
    As high as Maine cuz, I'da been damned to hear we were plain
    I have to say that battles were a parallel to my struggles
    At points seeming rattled but then I broke through the troubles


    Those battles of you were very well documented. I saw that after a while you mentioned something of a greater cause, care to explain?

    During the time I spent battling I was that there were a lot of racism punches, punch lines or jokes as we call them. Granted alls fair in love and war but this was just getting out of hand. I knew that I should spend my time and rhymes on something better than just making others look bad, on something positive. So I began to get really into the Afro Centric movement that was going on at the time. I didn’t want to be known as a battle head so I changed persona again. This time I wanted to teach people but be wicked about it, you know. No holds barred type sh*t. So I named myself MenTiLL

    ...Politics, poverty, power and protection
    Opposites, overly organize oppression
    Suggestions, sold, separation, no security
    Collections, un-conservative, captivating our currency
    Nurturing, negative, nigga-like, notorious
    Burning, bare bodies, beliefs-boisterous
    Moisture-ness, mother-Africa, momentarily missing mammy
    Futureless, fearful, non-freedom, failed families
    Landing, life, loyalty, love, lullaby-ful lines
    I used to love h.e.r. but we broke up
    ........................this is my new state of mind...


    You did speak with a powerful voice and passion during those times. What made you change yet again?

    I just felt I wasn’t getting through to people with my words. So I flipped it, rather than show them what we can become I showed them how bad we are and how we need to get better. I wanted to scare the f*ck out of people and get them too see what they have been in denial for, for a long time. The name this time stemmed from how I felt. It was like I was always held down, oppressed if you will by my words. So I embraced my ideals and became Trapt Wit

    ...Aight bitch stop frontin, best get ya head straight and act right
    And one slight mishap and ya bound to experience a hearse tonight
    See I don’t start fights, I'm just dumb quick to end shit
    Runnin up on ya clique with a 45 and tech gripped
    Watch how quick ya slip. And laugh at how ya crews wet
    Cause this is how we do it, when fake thugs throw up the wrong set
    So now show respect, cause my niggas and me be some real OG's
    We aim to please, laser scoped straight at the back of yo knees
    Still movin keys, and ya know that pigs can’t touch this
    We run shit! Even the DA's just another paid off bitch...


    Those rhyme of your at the time definitely showed the anger you, and the rap community had at the time. Many have pondered why you made your next move. You were at the height of your fame and then you seem to have just dropped off the face of the earth.

    The money! It’s all about the money. Up until then I loved what I did and the pay was second but then, somewhere along the line it became about the money. Not to me, though. I just saw a lot of new talent being signed for the gimmick they had rather than the rhymes they were able to make. So when my contract was up I went underground with my stuff. There you are embraced for your lyrical prowess rather than your bank account. Due to record contracts I had to change my name, I actually liked Trapt. So I was going to stick with the underground and use all my previous influences to make my music better, or as the name was: Diverse

    ...This underground's my pathway for an emcee on the come up
    I can't hitchhike through my whole life just walking with my thumb up
    Be myself, not a poser, exposure will come to me in certain time
    No gimmicks, no bullshit, just express the truest lyrics when I rhyme
    As long as the crowd relates, the mic check's all that really matters
    Fuck the fortune and the fame, don't need service with silver platters
    I'm hungry to become known, guess you could say I’m a starving artist
    I won't stop until I'm full blown, underground MC's rock the mic hardest
    Listen to my position, it's my full time job to convey these words
    It's not for money or for riches, it's the love and the way I work...


    Oh yes, I did remember hearing about that, just didn’t know it was you. So after such a hate for the commercial aspect of rap why have you decided to finally come back to the mainstream? And as always, what’s the name now?

    Ha ha, you read me like a book. With all the success I have had I was able to make my own label and release my own records without the need to please anyone else. Acro Nim records is doing pretty well, we recently have been signing some nice underground heads in efforts to give them mainstream exposure. As for the name, its pretty much the way I'm thinking now, at times I was pissed at the game, always a pessimist. Back at the beginning I had nothing but love, the game could never do me wrong. So I have been a pessimist and an optimist, I have transcended that and have become The Realist

    ...The games been through changes and too many phases
    I adapted styles with the turning stages, feeling sedated
    When can I settle with a single, original style of whining
    Games been tweaked so the beat overshadows rhyming
    I can’t complain, getting paid for a reworded freestyle
    Meanwhile the soul of the game is taking the green mile
    I can’t leave until I breath life back into the greatest game
    Fuck the fame, id rather explain laws of stress to the insane
    These faces keep smiling all the while thinking I'm playing
    Yet he embraces rhyming styles but not what I'm saying...


    This has been Gabriel Lendof for E! True Hollywood Stories. Thank you and good night.

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    This was dope....

    So many different heads blended into one progression.....

    That Gangsta kid was dope = )
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    niceness....and a clever way to breakdown the verses to get to know each emcee....i will quote the best part of each verse in my opinion and give weakest links and best links of this collab....

    Originally Posted by Speek.E.Z.
    ...I feel the liquor circulate through my body, as the beat drops
    All the chatter stops, as I grab the mic, and my feet stomps
    Get the feeling for the flow, and let the crowd get ready
    As my flow starts, just making sure everything stays steady
    ^i was feeling ur first four lines.....i could feel the situation i guess....the middle of ur verse was kinda blah....u had good vocab....and not many multis....good flow....and the closing of ur verse was nice....good work....

    Originally Posted by Emerge
    Had enough drama with my mama so I didn't wanna attain more
    Plus my spits were lava & I saw a lot-a old same metaphors
    So I brought the fresh wit, and dropped all that death shit
    And I left with The Best kids, asking for me to rep with
    ^first mid-half of ur verse got me.....nice vocab, multis and excellent flow......ur closing was kinda...ehh....and ur opener was ok.....good work E...

    Originally Posted by MenTiLL
    Nurturing, negative, nigga-like, notorious
    Burning, bare bodies, beliefs-boisterous
    Moisture-ness, mother-Africa, momentarily missing mammy
    Futureless, fearful, non-freedom, failed families
    Landing, life, loyalty, love, lullaby-ful lines
    ^niceness....first half of ur drop was weak withe words ending in "tion" or something similar....this had a nice flow, nice vocab.....and good multis....overall nice work....but it seemed to not make much sense....

    Originally Posted by Trapt Wit
    Watch how quick ya slip. And laugh at how ya crews wet
    Cause this is how we do it, when fake thugs throw up the wrong set
    So now show respect, cause my niggas and me be some real OG's
    We aim to please, laser scoped straight at the back of yo knees
    ..first half was blah....this had nice vocab and multis...straight flow.....honestly this is not what i expected in ur verse....lol....u gangsta u....overall nice....but topic was blah...

    Originally Posted by Diverse
    ...This underground's my pathway for an emcee on the come up
    I can't hitchhike through my whole life just walking with my thumb up
    Be myself, not a poser, exposure will come to me in certain time
    No gimmicks, no bullshit, just express the truest lyrics when I rhyme
    As long as the crowd relates, the mic check's all that really matters
    Fuck the fortune and the fame, don't need service with silver platters
    ^possibly the best in this collab....u had a good flow, structure, and vocab without a doubt.....the last part of ur drop i wasnt feelin too much though...overall niceness

    Originally Posted by The Realist
    ...The games been through changes and too many phases
    I adapted styles with the turning stages, feeling sedated
    When can I settle with a single, original style of whining
    Games been tweaked so the beat overshadows rhyming
    I can’t complain, getting paid for a reworded freestyle
    Meanwhile the soul of the game is taking the green mile
    ^basically the same thing i said to Diverse....u had a good structure, vocab, and flow.....and ur closing was blah.....and i see u started using multis towards the end....overall good work Realist....

    Best Category Award
    Vocab - MenTiLL
    Flow - Diverse, The Realist, Emerge
    Multis - Trapt Wit, Emerge
    Structure - Diverse, The Realist
    Opener - Speek.E.Z., Diverse, The Realist
    Closing - Diverse
    Emotion - Speek.E.Z., Emerge, MenTiLL

    Final Ranks
    1. Diverse
    2. The Realist and Emerge
    3. MenTiLL and Speek.E.Z.
    4. Trapt Wit

    Overall - honestly u all came nicely....good vocab all throughout...and the way this was handled in the E! True Hollywood form was nice......Trapt didnt come as i expected.....but nonetheless he had good rhymes and multis.....overall this is a very good collab....

    Rating
    9.5/10

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    ^^^
    How did you expect me to come? lol

    I was supposed to come as the stereotypical "gangsta rapper"
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    lol....i expected the usual from u...not carrying guns and dropping blood with one hand throwing up crip and a latin king tatoo on ur back with a gangsta disciple pitchfork behind u....

    peace

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    /\thanks a lot for this breakdown... i honestly wish more people would take that time like you did...keep it up smoke you are starting to be a worthy member....

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    Shit was dope, props to all on this collab..Descent wordplay throughout all tha verses, wid styling vocab too..Imagary was descent aswell as tha storytelling..Nice drop, maybe i could jump in a collab wid ya TR

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    yeah that waz sum dope shit. i liked it alot

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    ^WACK....worthless reply...stop trying to get ur posts up....hoe...

    Originally Posted by Emerge
    keep it up smoke you are starting to be a worthy member
    ....at least my sig doesnt talk about male genitalia

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    I actually took my time and read this long ass dreadful shit!
    I'm impressed...Don't know why...when I know what to expect from all of writers on this collab...Diverse...you have impressed me....You still need lot of work..(We all do )...I have one question... who's idea was this??? pretty clever...
    Now...read my shit and tell me I'm over`rated...thank you....

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    This came out pretty damn dope .. Props to TR on puttin' it all together .. I thought that was dopely done .. And about my verse .. I doubt it'll make since to many people .. But for a short explanation .. Look at it as a rewind thru the history of black people .. If U still don't get it .. Then U wont .. one

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    Overall concept is interesting - nice way to connect many different thoughts all into one greater whole.

    Speek.E.Z.
    Flow started off very good but I think it regressed slightly in the middle portion, then closed out ok. I think when you double rhyme in a line it sounds better if the second portion is the longer one. ie:
    "Because I can’t miss a beat or two, because that leads to boos
    Even if it’s in front of friends with booze, this emcee can’t lose"
    Seems a little off to me. You represented your name well though - it seemed very natural - unforced.

    Emerge
    Lots of internals and multis. Nice verse - a few things seemed awkwardly worded. Given the introduction I expected something a little more hard-hitting - this struck me as more a retrospective piece than a demonstration of a battling mindset. Liked your closer.

    MenTiLL
    Nice scheme, sometimes when people go for sound repetition some of the words seem to be out of place, but you carried it well. The first six lines were powerful but the last four seemed like they could use some work. "families" line needs to be reworded so it can just say "family" because the "s" sound throws off the rhyme. Then the last two lines while they have a good idea just don't seem to quite flow to me. I read your explanation and I liked the way you carried the concept.

    Trapt Wit
    First two lines seemed a little drawn out but you quickly got into the flow. I don't know - your verse was full of the necessary aspects of a "gangster" rap but I just didn't get the impression of "damn - this man's a murderer". Just seemed like an intellectual writing in a character - rather than animalistic cunning.

    Diverse
    Thought you expressed the stated idea well. Nice flow - saw a few internals. I think your 7 & 8 lines might have made a better closer than 9 & 10. Nice piece but I think to really exemplify the character you needed to have a longer verse. I understand that everyone was just putting ten lines down. But a knowledge piece just needs to be a little longer in my opinion.

    The Realist
    Nice way to close the whole piece out, your whole verses closes the chapter well and then you closed your verse well. Liked your flow - think it was the best job of all. I have no real criticism for this verse - thought it was very nice - had some quotables.
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