checkin in....remember 10-15 bars...first to 5 votes win.....due ASAP or by 11:59 p.m. tommorow night....aiight
checkin in....remember 10-15 bars...first to 5 votes win.....due ASAP or by 11:59 p.m. tommorow night....aiight
it's time to refute this fool for checkin in on this site,
Mag's gonna shoot in his face change his eye colour to white
give no respite, take flight n spark the craziest battle line
now you've stumbled on da darkest place of diss mind
it's diss time, it's diss rhyme made with da illest design
ya miss timed ya flows and it's lookin like ya should resign
it just goes to show this spar isn't even a little close
that's just da way it goes when im sippin juice n throwin bows
balls like discos, huge and catchin your lady's glance
do some threesome spooge after I work ya lil sis out her pants
yep thats all i need for this one...
the longer you take the less credible the verse...
Hence Forward
your time is running out... please drop and get it over with...
Hence Forward
I dont know what to tell you son....besides I have A LIFE outside of this battle board.....I give you until 11:59 pm of today and this is what you come up with???....this is 15 bars right here for you...you obviously dont know what a bar is so I'm going to have to show you.....READ AND LEARN...
INSERT my fist in your STERNUM, TWERK it and CURVE your VERTIBRAE/
My VERSES GERMINATE, MERGING to form INTERNAL NERVE DECAY//
Feel your flesh BURN as microscopic WORMS PERMIATE/
The EPIDERMAL LAYERS, SQUIRMING into your PURPLE VAINS//
OBSERVE the VERBAL WRAITH REGURGITATE nuclear WASTE/
Hunting you like GERMAN MERCANARY SEARCHING for Anne FRANK//
I Materialize in PERSON, and get BEZERK in the WORST WAY/
REGURGITATING WORDS in the form of nuclear WASTE//
ORION, a cyborg with neural-net CIRCUITS in my BRAIN/
Slicing you with THIRTY different VERSIONS of CIRCULAR BLADES//
A LEARNING COMPUTER, Absorbing SURGES of THERMAL RAYS/
A tactician, and Magnificent is the next PERSON I TERMINATE//
I’m not psycho, but I IMPESONATE NORMAN BATES/
As STRANGE voices URGE me to kill you in a MURDEROUS RAGE//
Fold your body into a PERFECT TRIANGULR SHAPE/
I SLAY from INVERTED ANGLES, and BURN you at a VERTICAL STAKE//
Put you in PERMANENT STATE of AWARENESS/
Like The United STATES of AMERICA AWAITING TERRORISTS//
I’m DANGEROUS as CHEROKEE Indians with CLAY ARROW TIPS/
BARE-knuckled HERETIC, with a pair of fists that AIRLIFT you like an AEROSHIP//
MAGNIFICENT, look at my SIGNATURE, I'm not even HUMAN/
I’m a MAGICIAN with LYRICS, and YOU WINNING is an ILLUSION//
A PHYSICIST with DIGITS, to subtract you out the EQUATION/
I attack with Mathematic ADDITION, and CALCULATION of time TABLES//
Really, I hate battling, but I need MORE RECOGNITION/
So I ENTER weak BOARDS, and GET INTO WARS with THESE BITCHES//
SWINGING SWORDS TOWARD you just to lick the BLEEDING TENDONS/
After your LIMBS fall to the FLOOR, POURING MORE of YOUR LIQUIDS//
With a HORRIBLE display of GORE when I FORMULATE like a CHEMIST/
JARS of DIFFERENT MIXUTRES TRANSFORM you into a CORPSE WITHIN MINUTES//
1. most peeps don't drop more than 10--15 lines.. and i doubt you could spit your 30 lines over 15 bars of music...
2. How can you seriously regurgitate nuclear waste as a rhyme twice???
otherwise im impressed by your random frontin
{Peace}
Hence Forward
Originally Posted by Magnificent
this is my style...this is how i rap....it takes much practice my son.....you can doubt all you want but it doesnt change the fact that i can actually spit like this
and what i meant about the regurgitating line is like something "comming back up" like vomit..."regurgitating words"....using them again....
whatever... upping for some votes...
I will peep a battle for whoever drops a vote
thanks
{Peace}
Hence Forward
Orion ripped him easily....
it doesnt look like he polled that one......^^^^^^^^^^^^^upping for some votes
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ORION, nice verse, what i really noticed you used alot
of BIG words, which is good though, but some of them
i didnt know what they meant, you had some aight punches
in their, but you still need to work on them, you had decent
structure, but next time try not to use to many big words,
your flow was aight, if you can read good, lol, but overall you
MAG, you had a decent verse, it sounds as if you were biting it
off someone, cause all you did was talk bout yourself, i didnt
see one god damn punch thrown in your verse, and if you did
they was weak as fuck, your structure was good though, i'll
give you that, aight flow, easy to understand, next time try
some metas, and multis, you should try topical, your flow
seems like a topical, but keep elevating.
my vote: ORION
return the favor, hit this up!!!
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113808
did pretty good, keep elevating.
........................^^^^^^^^upping for votes....
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