Centz The Commercial M.c. Of The Year

[noncentz]

CAN I GET AN INTRO??????????

hell no im the low budget-platinum rappers still thuggin-
still buggin-for r/b wax and gang tracks singing boute muggin.
speaking on weekend fiends hoping you'll be jealous....envious and haten-
premeditating blinging when siging boute bank accounts subliminaly staten-
my 20's on the whip are older then the honey dips im dating and mating.
the no rehearsel-carasmattic drug addict doing commercials-
that needs lute and looks cute doing D.A.R.E infermercials.
amassen the cash~man doing crazy shit at random-
cause you cant fathom my fashion-
dressing like a bitch so when i see you mimic it i can die laughing.
i got that ill spit writ subscript to be a big hit-
steal his scripts for the remix cause i cant create my own shit.
talken about hoes doe and 24's-
then what i do to those who oppose and play foes.
next thing you know im a sensative m.c.-
that just needs to be accepted and turns to R&B.
i need no one im dolo on solos and fallow every trend for my my promos-
all i need to do is ride the trends............
(i hope the next style aint being a homo.)
now on the concious tip i love a lady.......nah bitch i only did it-
so i can attract more hoes on the tip of my dick.
spoke some qoutes i learned speed reading an encyclopedia-
maybe said one complex word an ellude the whole media.
now im the hardest platinum artist on every guest list-
every A&R wish-a bandwagon they can ride till im useless.
then when my career goes bankrupt-
i do songs aboute the industry beingt corrupt-
record labels being fucked up.
try to make cable on an indie label-
then realize im no longer living my fable-
no longer stable-representing the street im from but not able.
now im exactly what i spent a struggling artists rent dissing-
dissmissing the real and now begging for what im missing.
cause for the VIBE i rapped aboute cloute and homicide-
but in the end each aspect was a chain of events to career suicide.
all this for fine things rings and the occasional bling-
who am i the commercial trend with only a beat no lyrics or spirit......
im the next big thing.

[The Realist]

you just keep getting better!!!

I dont have much time but from what i read the flow is SICK.

good job!

[Poppa Bean]

this was ok

flow was choppy ass fuck

content was good but could be alot better

i would like to see your shit more, you have potential

this was a decent drop for sure,

you just need to spend more time and put more thoughts into yur lines

if you get a chance

please peep this
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115031

[noncentz]

i dont think of my topics that the point pop i did this in under 20 mins just going off

[Split]

lol, you need to be doing audio bro, cause you explode on your tracks, would be interesting to see how you could vocally spice up your pieces,

but like always, great drop bro, work on the multis abit, and GET AT ME FOR A COLLABO TWIN!!!

[Endeva.]

PURE GARBAGE....Lmao.... nah, a good drop.... looks more suited to audio, jus the way in places it really got going, like should be spit fast... well thats the way i got it any way.... maybe im jus using artistic license..lol.... but i liked it,,, think your scheme is getting better, not that it wasnt ill anyways, but it jus seems to be getting more lively... 'm liking it... good job twin

[Endeva.]

when ya get ya ass online hit me for a collab,,, been too long.... could have edited my last post, but i like free post'n...lmao..... lataz....

[noncentz]

This Was For A Faster Rhyme I Was Bumping Tonedeff So I Was Influenced

[SMZ]

Nice job - I like the kinda off the cuff way you spit. Flow, vocab, etc all good. You made me laugh several times:
cause you cant fathom my fashion-
dressing like a bitch so when i see you mimic it i can die laughing.

i need no one im dolo on solos and fallow every trend for my my promos-
all i need to do is ride the trends............
(i hope the next style aint being a homo.)

Then you closed it with a serious thought and your point - nice work.