10-20 Lines..
You know the rules kid..
you spit first..
Mentality
{Jihad}
10-20 Lines..
You know the rules kid..
you spit first..
aight checkin in
u do the same
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New To this stage, came out strong so now you must think that Pac
But If Bein a rapper is your dream Then Wake up...u forgot to set the alarm clock
Try to act tough, but your ass prolly already started to perish
But thats aight dawg, you had a couple of days for your undefeated record to cherish
Its like I swallowed a Flame Thrower Cus I Always Spit Fire
Seen Your ad in the paper askin......... "Is there A Ghost Writer for Hire?"
You envy these words but never will get to the peek like mine
And You gonna be looking red and white, ....like the neighborhood stop sign
Now you got your head achin searchin for punches to return back
Maybe you should just take some tylenol, ...four or five packs
You really suck, my rhymes burst at you like they were magnetic
Stop slappin bitch....oh was that an attempted punch? That was pathetic
worst spit in a long time...let see
lol...7-0..hate to ruin that preety record..aight kid..now where do i start?..
Aight 1st let's look at ya flow, you know ..perhaps an inspection..
Because when we follow your verse, we need a map and directions..
My mentality's militant,so c'mon man, you had enough of this?..
I'll bitch slap you with the same hand I finger fucked ya mother with..ohhhhhh
you can go bribe the voters, we heard that you do..(7-0, hmmm)
I'm fuckin' bribing the judges to let me off for murdering you..
I hit forcefully Ment, so don't smile kid..
or i'll leave ya skeleton stuck in the 80's like your style is..
With NO confidence & meek making a statement quick..
Screaming ‘the Hell am I doing like priests raping a Satanist..
And I’m not religious, but I’ll go for liquor when I plummet..
With a knife to exorcise the spirits from your stomach..
But you knew I’m like the Aaliyah plane crashes in seas..
Enough to make you cry when your Dame Dashes to me..
its over..
Peace
100
Uppin for votes...
uppp
Mentality - Weak verse, too simplistic. Ideas were played, punches were soft, disappointing all around. Please elevate, it seems you have potential.
Jihad - nice verse, well rounded, decent punches, couple were slightly played, but decent noetheless. Def took this one.
Vote - Jihad
both yall hit this up since I took the time to vote... thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114933
1-0..
uppin for votes
it was a real good battle and i think jihad
yo jihad u wanna battle me
Bitchslapped can be used for callouts, 'freepost' again in ne tread.. & u be banned.
-Eddy
Last edited by Edicius; February 19th, 2004 at 04:57 PM
aight,..
Vote not well explained, & removed.
-Edicius
Last edited by Edicius; February 19th, 2004 at 04:58 PM
jihad had some pretty sick ass rhyme schemes and punchlines in this battle
i liked these punchlines "My mentality's militant,so c'mon man, you had enough of this?..
I'll bitch slap you with the same hand I finger fucked ya mother with..ohhhhhh"
and "Enough to make you cry when your Dame Dashes to me.."
i wasnt really feeling mentalities verse he had some real corny lines like that shit bout in the newspaper trying to get ghostwriters for hire
overall- im voting for jihad on this one his verse had better punchlines and was more creative than mentalities
cool 2-0..
upppppppppppiiinn
hit this up with a vote, leave a link...and we'll vote on your battle..
peace
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holy shit wot a battle..........jihad took it tho he got sum dope as rhymes sum made me laugh 2............he had the harder punches personals both structures were ight
Aight 1st let's look at ya flow, you know ..perhaps an inspection..
Because when we follow your verse, we need a map and directions..
holy shit jihad that 1 made me laugh and it was ill.......
mentality i tink u under estimated jihad in this 1 and he was way 2 strong 4 ya u had a lot of fillers and not as many direct punches....work on these and u will elevate.....
vote jihad
jihad check yo pms aswell and reply thnx man
pz
aight bro..
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