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    Post -=Broken Dreams=-

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    damn..I'll read this letter..but I beleive it was called..."short" story..not long story...geez..

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    this is some good join,i like this

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    Quote Originally Posted by drunkenmaster
    this is some good join,i like this
    ^spit on your self...while you at it....just hang your self~~~

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    wasn't this an open mic piece that i spent 10 minutes reading last week?? i think i replied to it in OM, Ya, i did, cause i remember saying... You and your "Short Stories". anyways, peep my feedback on the OM piece, same goes here...

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    Anyways i read this last night...but when i was done i was tired cuz i felt i just read a novel lol....but it was awesome

    the imagery was great as well with the emotion very detailed I enjoyed the unique concepts you write about...or make things into. Very creative. good vocab etc...i felt this would be a great piece. made me open my eyes a lot to certian lines...which was impressive...good work my man.

    & congradulations on getting into legends finally i just seen it...well done.
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