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OutCome
one_der
OutCome
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OutCome
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I was peepin your old battles, and i can tell That your whack. Rhymin one word...You need your crew boys to Pat your back.*
You only win battles, because you Spar with weak kids. And on a skill level, I'm too far to beat bitch.
Did you ever hear of a multi? I suggest you use them. And if your not next, I have to Guess who's then.
Yeah, i am a Newb on this site. no wins, no L's...heres a hint. The Clue is to bite!**
Oneders takin no prisoners, like Jails that are full. And im makin you one of my bitches, the way im Nailin you hoe!
The outcome of this battle, sure won't be outcome. You'll come-out of this battle, with a foot in ur ass and me shouting NOW RUN!
Im rippin you so bad, I'll leave you Done with a rattle. And carryin an L on ya records the only way you'll Come out of this battle.
Let me finish this off with a, I feel bad for you son. and when the battles over, it will be 5 CATS TO ONE!!!!***
*- He needs his crew to vote to win battles
**- BIte means to steal lyrics duh
***- Cats are voters....5 voters will vote for one..One= One_der
GOod luck man
Peeping the board for wack memebrs and im like Ders_ONE
truth is, your wack..try somthign called talent, i dare ya son
contaminit infect your brain an damage it with a rampage spit
ima send this pussy home.. like i just mailed a stamped clit
man this kid is forteen he has barely started having puberty
ima birth this cat, but fuck sunnin him ill eclipse his style
lips flip at the fact he coulda bit thinkin "we couldnt wait awhile"
mad because he came to soon his wackness is still premature
well now its not that your untalented your skills just unsure
driven towards ill, except its ona diffrent road taking a detour
newbie with alright post.. well it really makes you One_der
his teeth strike right after ill drops.. like lightning to thunder
wow that was ill.. you know my crew? oh its my writing no wonder
Not enough posts to vote but here's what I thought......
No contest....Outcome took this easily...Came harder with his personals and punches...also showed alot more creativity... One' yer verse was pretty bad.....punches were weak and you used alot of played ideas...yer structure was terrible...didn't really flow...Also work on yer personals....the "outcome of this battle line" was wack...My Vote> Outcome(better punches, personals, structure, and creativity)
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I was peepin your old battles, and i can tell That your whack. Rhymin one word...You need your crew boys to Pat your back.*
fix your structure..ok punch
You only win battles, because you Spar with weak kids. And on a skill level, I'm too far to beat bitch.
ehh ok start but finished weak
Did you ever hear of a multi? I suggest you use them. And if your not next, I have to Guess who's then.
blah
Yeah, i am a Newb on this site. no wins, no L's...heres a hint. The Clue is to bite!**
Oneders takin no prisoners, like Jails that are full. And im makin you one of my bitches, the way im Nailin you hoe!
weak and played
The outcome of this battle, sure won't be outcome. You'll come-out of this battle, with a foot in ur ass and me shouting NOW RUN!
whack
Im rippin you so bad, I'll leave you Done with a rattle. And carryin an L on ya records the only way you'll Come out of this battle.
weak
Let me finish this off with a, I feel bad for you son. and when the battles over, it will be 5 CATS TO ONE!!!!***
ehhh...kinda weak
Peeping the board for wack memebrs and im like Ders_ONE
truth is, your wack..try somthign called talent, i dare ya son
good first line...weak second
contaminit infect your brain an damage it with a rampage spit
ima send this pussy home.. like i just mailed a stamped clit
ok..but kinda played
man this kid is forteen he has barely started having puberty
ima birth this cat, but fuck sunnin him ill eclipse his style
lips flip at the fact he coulda bit thinkin "we couldnt wait awhile"
ok
mad because he came to soon his wackness is still premature
well now its not that your untalented your skills just unsure
ok
driven towards ill, except its ona diffrent road taking a detour
newbie with alright post.. well it really makes you One_der
good
his teeth strike right after ill drops.. like lightning to thunder
wow that was ill.. you know my crew? oh its my writing no wonder
played...blah
Outcome wins this...closer than it should have been....This is the first battle I've seen from you Oucome...only seen ya cyphers dissin me before... but you came alright...Had some filler..but also a few ok personals and punches...ONe_Der this is the second battle I've seen from you..and you came a lot better than the previous one...
please drop an honest vote here guys http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114710
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Ayo lyrics on some bullshit...he voted ganst me in all my battles....and when he explains he just puts 'weal,played, or whack'......Thats dickridin right there....He's mad cause i voted against him in his rbfather battle....W.e tho i aint gonna cry
Uppin
up.
man yall wrong one_der won dat shit his punches was betta gotta give to One_der
vote doesnt count no explannation.. upping for more votes....
Outcome got this one...
Better punches, personals, name disses, metaphors...basically everything went to outcome. One_Der. You need to work on your disses, and also your personals.
So overall...I'm with Outcome on this one.
V/Outcome.
Go vote on my battle now fools.
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Shit. I cant edit and add the link.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115060
Sorry about the extra post.
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*- He needs his crew to vote to win battles
**- BIte means to steal lyrics duh
***- Cats are voters....5 voters will vote for one..One= One_der
Ahhh hahahahhahahah
Oh man. I just noticed that, and advice to you Der...never type stuff like that again. You're verse was bad, and that was even worse. Ahh hahahhaha.
But hey. You made me laugh!
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IIGHT
FAV LINE FROM ONE_DER
You only win battles, because you Spar with weak kids. And on a skill level, I'm too far to beat bitch.
Did you ever hear of a multi? I suggest you use them. And if your not next, I have to Guess who's then.
Yeah, i am a Newb on this site. no wins, no L's...heres a hint. The Clue is to bite!**
FAV LINE FROM : OUTCOME
ima send this pussy home.. like i just mailed a stamped clit
man this kid is forteen he has barely started having puberty
ima birth this cat, but fuck sunnin him ill eclipse his style
lips flip at the fact he coulda bit thinkin "we couldnt wait awhile"
BREAK DOWN OUTCOME HAD BETTER FLOW BETTER PUCHLINES, AND HAD MORE RHYTHESM TO HIS VERSE
SO MY V /OUTCOME
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