10-20 lines
about 1 hour time limit.. no specific, just get it up
blind spit
no d/r, any bullshit
check in as soon as possible <
this is my checkinnnnn
Tornado
CAMROK
10-20 lines
about 1 hour time limit.. no specific, just get it up
blind spit
no d/r, any bullshit
check in as soon as possible <
this is my checkinnnnn
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checkin in set it up u spit first then ill post but can it be due tomorrow
go back into the bitchslapped thread to discuss this....
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This battle, so easy, for me, like the old days & playdoh
Kid must be from Kansas, thinkin up a name like Tornado
Is a comparison though, chance he might be a no-show
He needs time, to prepare his lines, make sure they rhyme
Then posts bad structure, I guess ur winds blew em outta line
Think you can kill me, but u cant, my body keeps clonin
Tryin to hit #1, while number 2 has got your girl moanin
U won't need her anyway, I fuck up ur levels of Serotonin*
Keep ownin, this flow has me like a pimped out master
Clasher, as I make Tornado's body an incredible disaster
Faster, before you know it, he's buried and gone
Quicker, then my man from 'Family Guy' can say "Lets get it on!"
Tornado, from the day he was born, he hasn't had any balls
Doc cut em off, wasting his time & finding you were the cause
Maybe u shoulda been a girl anyway, God knows u can't rap
U flap and flap ur gums, and all I'm smelling is crap
Good thing u have no audio, 4yr old boys sayin "Tornado is wack"
Boy, you suck, lets face it, I just gave you that fact
*Serotonin = levels of it inside the body, creates arousal
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Yo, where are you? I said it would be fine putting it up today, cause I'm nice like that. But I said do it asap...... 7:06pm and still ticking...
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u need to cross out the cam cause i'd be rocking your world
the only thing i'd be fuckin is your girl/
to bad u got beat by a newb who be sayin dirt to your face
losing to a first timer boy your a disgrace/
camrok be tryin to be like eminem but u can never succeed
cause i beat u so bad that u'd have to go to the negro need/
he'd be tryin to battle but he doesn't no how to rhyme
to bad he tryed and he failed cause he can never shine/
i be knockin your lights out with my left
cause your not worthy enough for my right cause u aint the best/
i dont no how he does it acceptin and losin
i spin and hit your life so much death is the next place u'd be crusin/
callin a battle while i could accept r u mentaly ill
no i just bust open his head he'd be needin a bottle of pills/
make sure u lose by all means necessary
but if u come my home i'd scream damn your scary/
i'd really take him on if he was worth the challenge
to bad none of your rhymes r wanted/
i beat u so hard theres no need for voting
there is no hope for u so no need of hoping/
Upppinnnn #1........... lets hit this people......
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comn... uppiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn(2)
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upppiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn(3)...................
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CAMROCK took this easy...Tornado came weak as hell..played weak lines...like sex/gay jokes....Try and be more creartive and original in your verse...Stay away from all sex and gay and wannabe gangsta lines....CAMROCK..you had some nice punches and personals in your verse...also some good metas...SOme filler too..but not enough to damage your verse
Please drop an honest vote here Thanks http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115298
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thanx for the tips cause im new to the place, lets get some votes in
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Upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp(5) -- last upp!
vote on this fucking battle already.....
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very played out tornado... think you can do much better... ima personally have to say that nothin you said hasn't been said a million times in a diss cypher... so for pure lyrical dismantlin and for keepin a better structure... cam deserves a nod...
but cam seretonin? it is a chemical in the brain closely linked to nervousness, anxiety and obsessive compulsive disorder... there has been little documentation on it's affect on arousal...
Hence Forward
damn 2-0 lets get some votes in damn people sleepin
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