15-20 lines
no feeding
no prewriting
no recycling
blind spit
no hate (yo wat up cant vote)
no d/r (yo wat up cant vote)
3-0 ko, first to 5 wins
Stakes::
If Oliver wins, he gets Ice's co leader spot and ice is gone
If Ice wins, oliver is out of Dynasty for good
checkin in........................................
heres my shit.....match this bitch....and no feeding, and you said you were keyed so i expect a drop in a few minutes......
Yo my flows always boil and bubble like coke, that’s cus they hot and constant
We need a dynasty soldier conference, to remove oliver from this continent
He swears he raps good cus he beat Reign Man, but Ice leave dents in his content
Come at me weak and you getting shunned, as if you sinning in a religious convent
Im “shutting off this cats heat”, like im his landlord, and this month he missed rent
He’s talkin shit without consent, your “pussy”, so your getting fucked and left bent
you sayin you always “droppin hot shit”, but im having trouble finding the scent
Oliver’s rhymes don’t even compare to mine, not even a half of a half a percent
now comes the event, where you get tormented without repent to the utmost extent
im taking off, and your in my line of descent,I hit hard like slamming heads into cement
My lucrative lyrics are full of hate, I spit sick like I got the flu and a nasty “cough”
His sig says “get sonned”, but I already made his mother take “Oliver Clothes Off “
that means im impossible to beat,so instead of saying “Fuck me” ,Im sayin “Fuck you”
your flows are cold like “Kryogenix”, meaning you lost so get the fuck outta my crew
I thought it was just a fairy tale, not your life story when they said “Little Boy Blew”
Im through wit you, and nows my cue, your over due, so now I “Bid You Adieu”
Explanations:
Mostly look at his sig, and his name
Dynasty Soldiers or frequent vistors to the forum would get most of this as well
aight just saw dis new thread so here it goes.....
This bitch is actually on this site cuz his rap is new
Even if StarWars was remade, the force still wouldn’t hit you
It took this bitch 2 months to pre-write his verse and put it all together
Now watch as iceman melts, like an ice cube placed in warm weather
Frozen Cold from shock, what comes around goes around, so fuck you
Afraid to stick up for his crew, n even worse he asked me to mange it to
You already had a vote before anyone dropped a verse in this thread
Shows how smart your D/R’s are cuz w/o them u like Barney w/o Fred
Face facts your not nice, we all know its true and I’m right
I mean I respected you until prophet got banned off this site
This bitch is gay and Dyslexic, he can’t even spell shit right
You ducked Illtalic, but yet you stalk me day and night
Dont know how u call me a pussy when you backed down to illtalic
Give da word dawg a new meaning cuz I just checked out ur member pic
Cant figure out a way to tell u, without getting you upset
Silva Dolla doesn’t like white boyz who pussy out over the net
I guess when u started shit with me, you didn’t think u would get dealt with
Now I want you to take ur name off the roster cuz Icebitch you just been melted
explanitions his sig explains it all and everyone in d/s or daz should know wat i mean...
holla uppin dis shyt for sum honest votes.........
RB's two worst named battles, head to head.
iceman
you have a really bad structure, your lines are stretched making the flow off, making it boring to read. you need short lnes, which are witth an have flow.
His sig says “get sonned”, but I already made his mother take “Oliver Clothes Off “
you attempted to make use of wordplay bubt failed several times
your verse had no really hard hitting pucnes,
He swears he raps good cus he beat Reign Man, but Ice leave dents in his content
at times it seemed like you was just putting random words, to make multies
Nothing really stood out, an i have seen you come harder than this.
oliver clossthefuckoff
ok again another weak verse, which is expeced from the crew you rep.
you had a ok flow actually which surprised me. Although your ounches were badly worded, an hardly hit they did hit in one or two place.
An their were time were i didnn't know what the fuck you were goin on about
e.g
This bitch is actually on this site cuz his rap is new
Even if StarWars was remade, the force still wouldn’t hit you
but one of your punches actually stood out, a little bit, not in a good way, but in the way like you see something that isn't right an it catches your attention.
one of your punches wasn't too bad
Cant figure out a way to tell u, without getting you upset
Silva Dolla doesn’t like white boyz who pussy out over the net
^was a personal as well, your wording let you down but still^
you had a good structure.
my vote,
my blessing goes to iceman,
as i am voting for NyZ Grynch aka olvier jkdboff
he had a better flow, structure, an his punches stood out a little bit more than icemans!!
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leave feed and a link i'll return it
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lol thanks .........uppin dis bitch.................
hmm...both were pretty weak...
i didnt really like either of your punches
too much..but...i feel oliver came a bit harder in his verser cuz it was tighter
iceman wasnt that good...weak lines all up in there...
while oliver had some good ones...
i cant poll..but can u please vote here..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114851
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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Yo my flows always boil and bubble like coke, that’s cus they hot and constant
We need a dynasty soldier conference, to remove oliver from this continent
He swears he raps good cus he beat Reign Man, but Ice leave dents in his content
Come at me weak and you getting shunned, as if you sinning in a religious convent
Nice... but i didnt feel it much
Im “shutting off this cats heat”, like im his landlord, and this month he missed rent
He’s talkin shit without consent, your “pussy”, so your getting fucked and left bent
you sayin you always “droppin hot shit”, but im having trouble finding the scent
Oliver’s rhymes don’t even compare to mine, not even a half of a half a percent
now comes the event, where you get tormented without repent to the utmost extent
im taking off, and your in my line of descent,I hit hard like slamming heads into cement
You Wordplay.. seems like you were trying to force this.. alot it will come naturally juss slow your roll with it
My lucrative lyrics are full of hate, I spit sick like I got the flu and a nasty “cough”
His sig says “get sonned”, but I already made his mother take “Oliver Clothes Off “
Really.. No the second line was ok but ehh wasnt feeling the first at all played concept
that means im impossible to beat,so instead of saying “Fuck me” ,Im sayin “Fuck you”
your flows are cold like “Kryogenix”, meaning you lost so get the fuck outta my crew
I thought it was just a fairy tale, not your life story when they said “Little Boy Blew”
Im through wit you, and nows my cue, your over due, so now I “Bid You Adieu”
Okay you were aveage the whole time until here... But these are whack.. sorry this was a bad closer
Explanations:
Mostly look at his sig, and his name
Dynasty Soldiers or frequent vistors to the forum would get most of this as well
You shouldnt have to explain anything.... No No
This bitch is actually on this site cuz his rap is new
Even if StarWars was remade, the force still wouldn’t hit you
Nice wordplay.. it made since!
It took this bitch 2 months to pre-write his verse and put it all together
Now watch as iceman melts, like an ice cube placed in warm weather
Ok punch and personal.. wasnt your best tho
Frozen Cold from shock, what comes around goes around, so fuck you
Afraid to stick up for his crew, n even worse he asked me to mange it to
First line.. dope.. iceman doesnt do much for dynasty... ok punch
You already had a vote before anyone dropped a verse in this thread
Shows how smart your D/R’s are cuz w/o them u like Barney w/o Fred
Not the best word play.. but nice concept tho
Face facts your not nice, we all know its true and I’m right
I mean I respected you until prophet got banned off this site
This bitch is gay and Dyslexic, he can’t even spell shit right
You ducked Illtalic, but yet you stalk me day and night
Nice liked this alot.. ice ducking illtalic eh i knew that was comming!!
Dont know how u call me a pussy when you backed down to illtalic
Give da word dawg a new meaning cuz I just checked out ur member pic
Ha nice personal.. but dont repaet the punch u had in your first line!
Cant figure out a way to tell u, without getting you upset
Silva Dolla doesn’t like white boyz who pussy out over the net
Nice personal punch liked it original.. but arent all personals?
I guess when u started shit with me, you didn’t think u would get dealt with
Now I want you to take ur name off the roster cuz Icebitch you just been melted
Ha a played personal but he chose the name.. but its a good punch!!
overall... drum roll.... Oliver!!
The Legion
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Haha.. this is funny shit...
Well, I don't write out all of your lines like the rest of the guys^^.. I find that annoying but.. lets see, iceman ive seen u spit better and post nicer rhymes then that.. this was wasn't that good. Like Menolin said, it looked as though u were throwing random shit in there to create "hot" multis, except they weren't hot at all. Your punches were.... allllright, really nothing special. Nyc/oliver had nicer flow, I think better overall punches, more personal, but sounded better putting plain and simple. And to be totally honest though, I think if I were oliver I would wnat to lose this battle and be removed from Dynasty Soldiers. haha!. but I hate to break the news to you, you won this.
vote- olv
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holla yo icebitch its a k.o. motherfucker........uppin
Dont fukkn mention my name in a verse that shit again.. please..
Oliver - i dunno how ya gettin votes.. for a in-house crew battle u were exceptionally impersonal.. surprisingly so.. the personals that u did use are all wack an badly played.. 'dog' an 'melt' lines against IceMan are jus not done.. the general punches u used were also wack.. u opened wiv a 'starwars/force' line for fukks sake! An all round weak verse..
IceMan - alot more personal.. as expected in a crew battle.. effective punches.. flow was iffy at best but the metas an such made ya verse consistant an harder-hittin.. took this wiv ease..
VoTe = IceMan
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well grinch......dont be a bitch and take the ko, let it go to 5 votes.....to see if i cant pull a comeback.....if you win 5 votes......ill give you your respect....but no ko bullshit....
wow.....i say that oliver took this one....(nyz grinch)
his punches came harder.....and his flow was sik
This bitch is actually on this site cuz his rap is new
Even if StarWars was remade, the force still wouldn?t hit you
^^that opener waz sikkkk dawg......really...i neva knew u waz ill....u pretty good...lol
overall...iceman lost his touch......u went a lil' eazy...u should of came harder...
oliver- good shyt....u took this one....keep it up...
punches: oliver- hit harder....i felt em
flow: oliver....good shyt
wordplay- oliver......for his nice opener
structure- oliver...ice- keep it down a bit...
weak battle
but oliver takes it pretty easily......
aight uppin number 4............imma got 5 votes so dont call me a pussy cuz if it was u you'd take the k.o.......up
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