10 lines,
25 mins max,
normal shit....good luck.......
$pitacular
The Judge
10 lines,
25 mins max,
normal shit....good luck.......
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checking in...........................................good luck...............
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yo I'ma need more time than that man... I'm at work. At least an hour or so. Confirm OK and I will check in
ite 1 thing to no...is he got accepted for elite then thrown of,
Look at this little herb..thinks i'm a newb so he came wak like this,
but to be honest man...ive seen broken toilets better.......
..........................at takeing the piss............
serveing this faggot like i was his assistent...in a shop,
concentrate on yourself cause your balls would be a better thing to drop,
your simular to a one leged hurdels race...the way your tripping,
even your own foot is desperate to give your ass a kicking,
looking at the executives roster it looks like your a shit talent scout,
cause ill merk this bitch..faster than elite accepting him,
..............................and throwing him out......
you'de probally write ur whole verse in BOLD so it could have,
......................twice the potential............,
because you no judge causes more upsets in this place than womens pre-mensrial.
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just hurry up and drop man...............................40 mins max from now.................gd luck.........
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omg....................not anotha no show?...........just drop your shit man...................................
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He wonders why he wins battles... but never gets Our Respect
Look at your verse... You bite structure like a Plaigerist Architect
You can't Compose ya self... You're style makes me laugh
wrote ya shit on two Grid-lined papers... to make a Pair a Graph
you be the Judge... I'm the Jury handin you Death Sentences
Feel the Tension in the courtroom... while the Bench Pressin Him
Like Iraq in War... you brag but really got a Limited Arsenal
Thought he could battle me and Win... usin a Cheap Personal
Leave you Lyin' down on the Floor... since you think you Rug-ged
I then Permanantly Rest Your Case... Like I buried ya Luggage
holla
up up uppin...........................................
Look at this little herb..thinks i'm a newb so he came wak like this,
but to be honest man...ive seen broken toilets better.......
..........................at takeing the piss............
no creativity there
serveing this faggot like i was his assistent...in a shop,
concentrate on yourself cause your balls would be a better thing to drop,
lame first line, aight second
your simular to a one leged hurdels race...the way your tripping,
even your own foot is desperate to give your ass a kicking,
played
looking at the executives roster it looks like your a shit talent scout,
cause ill merk this bitch..faster than elite accepting him,
..............................and throwing him out......
ok...
you'de probally write ur whole verse in BOLD so it could have,
......................twice the potential............,
because you no judge causes more upsets in this place than womens pre-mensrial.
not good enuf for a close
He wonders why he wins battles... but never gets Our Respect
Look at your verse... You bite structure like a Plaigerist Architect
Aight, nice play
You can't Compose ya self... You're style makes me laugh
wrote ya shit on two Grid-lined papers... to make a Pair a Graph
again nice play
you be the Judge... I'm the Jury handin you Death Sentences
Feel the Tension in the courtroom... while the Bench Pressin Him
aight
Like Iraq in War... you brag but really got a Limited Arsenal
Thought he could battle me and Win... usin a Cheap Personal
second line was kinda filler
Leave you Lyin' down on the Floor... since you think you Rug-ged
I then Permanantly Rest Your Case... Like I buried ya Luggage
again, nice play, nice
Spit took this, jus cuz he had better word play that made his punches and personals hit.
Vote - Spit
Hit up my battles, aight?
uppin............................................. ........
Better structure...
Better directed punches.
Better personals.
That "elite/thrown out"
Was about the only good, hard punch that Judge had.
Everything else seemed forced...kinda funny (the "foot/ass kicking" line)
But it wasn't hard and coulda been used for anyone.
I dunno...
Good battle
But Spit clearly merked this kid with all those personals...
Then I liked how he closed the last two bars with wit and wordplay.
Peace
uppin3............................................ ........
Uppin 4................................................. .....
1................................................. ...........................................took your time man
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The Judge-
You Totally Messed Up The Structure.. Really.. And Connect Your Set Up With A Punch It Packs a Harder Hit.. Makes Them Look Better Really Not As Good As Spit But U Did Good No Hate Man
Spit-
U Killed It With Personals.. Great Job Really Good Structure You Had A Much Better Verse Then The Judge But Eh He Did Do Go So You Gotta Hand IT To Him I Prolly Didnt Get A Couple Personals Because He Changed Something.. Hey U Still Won
V/Spit
Hit MInez Up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115156
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