ight man u no da shit
10-16 lines
house rules
you spit first
checkin in then spit
verses gotta b in 2day
true blue
mc aines
ight man u no da shit
10-16 lines
house rules
you spit first
checkin in then spit
verses gotta b in 2day
who in there right mind would called themselves mc aines/
i'm like vanish i've come to get rid of this staine/
me i've come here with an aim,I,ve gota plan for my life/
this guy thinks he's heavy with a mic but it's all just hype/
I mean theres no way this bum could ever reach my level/
you have a better chance of having a square dance with the devil/
You just a rebel, rebelling thinkin you can escape reality/
but your the kinda guy who has teddy bears as his family/
your an ugly one thats why you have no father/
he slapped your mum for your looks wishing he wore a rubber.
lol imma start keyin in a few mins gotta do sum shit first.......prepare for a merkin
mans laughin but is taken time to go get lyrics from his bredrin
4 1 i sed check in and 2 im eatin at the mo so i will spit wen im done
My Flows Synthetic This Fools Pathetic Blue Folds Under Pressure Like Rookie Paramedics
I'll Strip Ur pride Leave Ur Ego Naked Till Ur A Sad Sex Symbol Like Bo Derek ..Actor
Blue Gets Fucked For Free So Da Only Time U Cum Ill Is Givin Girls VD
TEST Me, Nah Never, Ur Not Clever, Similar To Armless Freaks You Cant Beat Me...
Get Smacked Silly Like Wives Who Cheat,Blue Aint Cuttin This Battle Or The Beef!
No Hiding, This Isnt A Game Of Seek, I'll Cut U Monday Threw Sunday Cause I Slay The Week
U Huge-Hefa, Ride A Bike In Mansions U Still Cant Bunny Hop If Ur Names Hugh Hefner
Whos Better? This kid Just Leaves A Bunch Of Space In Threads Like A Loose-Sweater
U'd Better Approach-Eyez-Deep-with-Caution-Indeed, U'll -Leave Most-Hated Like Dawson In Creeks
Ive Beat You Twice, Blues Seek's A Three! ..I'll Hand You My Cap And You Still Couldnt Reach A Peak
Now Uppin This Shit For Votes
True - nothin quotable.. mostly played concepts.. shaky structure made the flow impossible to catch on to.. nothin personal either.. verse coulda been for anyone cos it was so general..
Aines - not bad.. alot of witty concepts for ya metas.. punches were consistant.. not as personal as expected.. flow was a lil off cos it was kinda stand-alone punches.. but ya did enuff to easily win..
VoTe = mc aines
Drop votes on any of these plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114168
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112698
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096
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uppin number 1
ite aines got this with most things,
specially punches they were cleaver here,
with very nice wordplay and also hit alot,
harder the true.........true your shit was ite,
but came to simple at punches your flow was coo and,
strcuture was ok but didnt hit hard man...l.soz,
aines man i liked your structure abit more but uit still ,
looks streched you need everyline to end on the same line,
and not go of like this
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but nice verse man.....................v-aines.
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uppin number 2 true blue u can upp this shit aswell man
Do you think that I have the ability to be that go. Do you think that I am holding back
they were both shite but mc aines was slightly better.... not a lot in it.
vote = mc aines
aiight breakdown...........
True Blue nothing was that good flow was no-where,opener was pathetic....
Closer wasn't much better and you had weak punches......
Aines aight verse flow was good but bit patchy,opener was weak,closer wasnt much better,however your punches were consistant and hard hittin......
Best Line:- U Huge-Hefa, Ride A Bike In Mansions U Still Cant Bunny Hop If Ur Names Hugh Hefner
\/0te Aines.......
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iight...
True ~ Nothing at all good... You need to work on your punches as none of them really had any effect... The vanish thing was a good idea... But could of been worded better... Pz
Aines ~ Nice verse... Good concepts... Liked the loose sweater thing... Good punches...
v/ aines
Pz...
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Not a bad battle but aines took it for sure...
First Verse...wasn't bad but didn't really stay to complex or hold to many hard consistant punches try to grasp more personals they help
Second Verse...a lot more accademic more punches that week line was great...i actually liked that...a little more flow would be needed on some lines though...i felt you went off an on one your one punch that didn't really rhyme....but all in all good verse
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