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Every single day. For Some, Every Single Weak..
Peeps try to Be Neat. Posting Threads Typing what they'd Normaly Speak..
All these Sigs. All these EmCee's Plus Fem'Cees..
Your Looking for that Something thats Empty, with Post's that your Sending..
Honestly I've been Pondering. Just Wondering..
Aren't there Fun-er Things. And Here we are, Together on the Inter-Net..
Every One trying to Make a Reputation. Like this Post, Should I Center it..
I know for a Fact. most User's Have More then One Name..
On Game. You can easily Tell when Two or three Rappers all Flow Same..
Are we Really Elevating? Or Just hating On One Another..
Points. Here's another, P Diddy Made it and He's Wack Like No Other..
Were Sucker's. Just Tossing our Flow's In the Air..
So anyOne here. Can Take it then Rap it and Record saying it's There's..
Who really Needs a Crew. Especially when Some Are in Two..
Two Face Bitches in real Life. And i Guess it's here on the InterNet Too..
White People who say Dude. Then over the Net Claim there Black..
But why. Some Day Kid's, Your All Gonna Have to Face That!..
Like Life and What Call InterNet Life Theres PopulaRity..
For us Who are out Of High School, Isn't that Just Called Immaturity?..
anyWay..I or we Could say these things In Plenty Ways..
I could say GoodBye to My Friends OutSide, But stiill Chat Here AnyDay..


Blah..
Uppin..

[Prince Adem]

This was decentish. I don't really like the topic... but the mid section, particulary this part:

Were Sucker's. Just Tossing our Flow's In the Air..
So anyOne here. Can Take it then Rap it and Record saying it's There's..
Who really Needs a Crew. Especially when Some Are in Two..
Two Face Bitches in real Life. And i Guess it's here on the InterNet Too..

I liked that... end was dope too... but i wasnt really impressed towards the beginning.... and after that dope part... you started saying "white guys cant say dude"... i mean... wtf.... i can say bro, dude, yo, sup whatever i want to... doesnt mean im trying to be black...

Lyrically, this was good... mostly consistent multies, vocab wasnt bad... some more metaphors could have helped

Structure was particularly nice... like the flow and the way it was set out....

Overall = 7.5/10

Keep writing, this was good... try to use some of the things i mentioned... i'll check your next open mic... you getting a nice start at RB (unless your an older member who made a new account)...

Check out my collab with FormulaMC called "The Origins Of The Two"... peace

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Thanks for the Feed.And that Black People Line.
I didn't Mean It That Way. Wait, I guess I kinda Did Huh.
Just Depends who you are. You Might Not Understand, But I get your ArgueMent.


Uppin.

[inspire]

Aren't you that dude that looks like Sinead O'connor.. and got clowned when he posted his pics?

[ELEETE]

This piece was alright not to bad at all....but this part

White People who say Dude. Then over the Net Claim there Black..
But why. Some Day Kid's, Your All Gonna Have to Face That!..----Ruined the entire thing......Why do people think you have to be black to love, sing, or wite this type of music? I mean im not black im latino but when you start putting a gender or color on something such as music then thats ignorance........

But all in all a pretty good drop.

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Aren't you that dude that looks like Sinead O'connor.. and got clowned when he posted his pics?

No.
Uppin.

[inspire]

Are you sure? He had the same name.. Fucker.

[Sharp]

Hey Killz. Liking your lyrics here. Your flow is kinda good too.

Are we Really Elevating? Or Just hating On One Another..
Points. Here's another, P Diddy Made it and He's Wack Like No Other..

I really like this bit, some dope shit! Keep it up fella.

[Yung Blaq]

All that shit was tight, we just got some bitch made ppl cry'n cuz u pulled
the race card knowing it was only some lyrics.U made some good points tho it was ill