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Thread: Chamber Of Dreams (Intellect Intact)

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    Chamber Of Dreams (Intellect Intact)

    If reality is a nightmare, are we all just fooled by dreams?
    Time duped us to believe, our journey leads to heaven, so it seems;
    Two extremes, the rich, the poor, due to what? the hand of fate?
    Tried to strangle me in all its glory,loved only to seeth with hate.
    Hope sprang elate, a ray of light through curtained dark
    Dove through the holy portals, the heat that bathed my heart
    Torn and bleeding in the silence, struck by the devils evil dart
    God departed from the desert, left no trace of caring mark,
    A work of art, the human body at its best, prime condition,
    Crime ambitions, putting the Bible to the test..you've guessed the rest,
    A world that loathed beliefs, spited and smited every tell tale sign,
    So that nothing they've achieved, they say, 'the world is mine'
    Really, they are owned, jealous of the steam that made the air its only home.
    Puppets, raised on strings for the entertainment of the Lords
    That sit high, looking down, cherishing their thrones,
    Rightly laugh and taunt at the foolish wars of men,
    Swords and guns sweep the title, that came prior to the pen,
    Intelligence, vanished from the scene, they walk and talk like idiots
    Collisions in between, rare, to find one not affected by this war
    Intellect intact, writing and speaking even more,
    Flowering the world, in a blossom breathed in rhyme
    And these we call the Legends, that collect and hold our time.
    Last edited by FanTa ZeE; February 13th, 2004 at 12:55 PM
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    wow, i'm listening to Eminem, Love You More, its dope as hell! he has improved so much since he first came out..anyway, anyone wanna reply to this? i figured emotion would get me somewhere, hopefully that comes across here.
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    n e 1 feeling nice today nd wanna put a smile on my face by replying?

    LMAO
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    oh well..nobody loves me...dayumm...i'm off shopping catch y'all later...
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    so its wack, i could at least be told that..

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    Quote Originally Posted by FanTa ZeE
    so its wack, i could at least be told that..

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    ^Very Wack!!!!!

    LOL..Just Kidding...I read this other day..I didn't have the time to reply it that day..anywho...you always have a great flow and vocab on all your pieces...I think youa re the best female on OM"s... and overall other than DR...you are next in line...^^ ~~Click~Click~My sig~~

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    this was nice man.....structure was cool.....flowed well.....nice concept.....would of been nice to see some multies....but the word play was nice....ovall this was a nice drop keep it up
    ....peace

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    danke schon.
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    first piece ive seen of yours..
    not bad at all
    the opening 4 lines were really cool..some intellect and depth in those..
    the piece as a whole was nice...u had some good imagery thrown in

    'Hope sprang elate, a ray of light through curtained dark
    Dove through the holy portals, the heat that bathed my heart

    liked it..
    try and check more of your drops..

    oh yeh..
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113145

    drop a reply if u have the time
    pax
    Last edited by f-gee; February 16th, 2004 at 02:01 PM
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    FaN ....this was a very poetic piece, nice delivery and all that, really kept me going never went off the topic in fact that the whole rhyme was about "dreams" in you went in to a greater depth for that. thats HIPHOP the art of storyTellin' , keep that up .....this is a nice piece.....~GONE~
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