Unwritten Hazard __vs__ illtalic

[Its Illytizzle!™]

12 lines..

due in an hour..

i'll post first..

no feedin..

same old same old..

check in soon as ya see this..

[Unwritten Hazard]

i spit, rip, then i vanish........... posting fake votes in the ballot///
im getting votes from illtalic....using eleborate tactics to become a HAZARD fanatic//
what a faggot, tryin to front, imma leave you soaked like a pump in a swamp///
then make "iLLtalic" bleed, like ink from a "font"//
your avatar says "really is that gully"//
he probably ment to type "REALLY IM UGLY"//
you got nothing, like the "projects" im buring your "garbage" fast///
really fag, i wouldnt let you "blow me" if your were an atomic blast///
this kids a "JOKE", he should change his name from illtalic to "COMIC" sans



9 lines should be sufficient
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[Unwritten Hazard]

fuck an hour, KEY somthin

Today, 07:04 AM
illtalic

Today, 07:16 AM
Unwritten Hazard

[Its Illytizzle!™]

The Chemist already dropped u .. now im makin sure ya really hurt
the past is the same as ya future.. dead an buried beneath the dirt…
Style resembles ya heroes.. a long forgotten boy band
I’ll call u Justin.. cos outta Sync ya clapped by ya own hand…
So drop ya 2 cents.. ya can even drop nickels an dimes
But like big nosed coke addicts I’ll simply hoover ya lines…
Cos Illtalic’s the Harold Shipman of RB.. ‘Dr Death’ will do fine
im performin talent transplants.. so now ya ass is really mine…
The votes'll never be in ur favor kid.. no one understands ya vibe
cos scratchin at the surface of talent DOES NOT make u a Scribe...
Nicca I'll plant ya face on the side of the road.. so ya constantly see the curb
Breedin slurs.. call this bitch a Root.. he has to elevate jus to be a Herb...

[Unwritten Hazard]

lol nice


i like the ending

we should have went like 20 lines
so i coulda used

"im more "BOLD" then illtalic"
or "your not ILL-talic, your just ILL-iterate"

or somthing like that,



good battle, uppn 4 votes

[buh bye Matty :(]

Unwritten ~

i spit, rip, then i vanish........... posting fake votes in the ballot///
im getting votes from illtalic....using eleborate tactics to become a HAZARD fanatic//
not a bad use of multis, nice opener
what a faggot, tryin to front, imma leave you soaked like a pump in a swamp///
then make "iLLtalic" bleed, like ink from a "font"//
hmm..ok, ok..i feel ya here..
your avatar says "really is that gully"//
he probably ment to type "REALLY IM UGLY"//
kinda the corny humor..so so
you got nothing, like the "projects" im buring your "garbage" fast///
really fag, i wouldnt let you "blow me" if your were an atomic blast///
this kids a "JOKE", he should change his name from illtalic to "COMIC" sans
very creative closer, liked the last line, lol

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illtalic ~

The Chemist already dropped u .. now im makin sure ya really hurt
the past is the same as ya future.. dead an buried beneath the dirt…
ehh, wasnt feeling this..
Style resembles ya heroes.. a long forgotten boy band
I’ll call u Justin.. cos outta Sync ya clapped by ya own hand…
lol!
So drop ya 2 cents.. ya can even drop nickels an dimes
But like big nosed coke addicts I’ll simply hoover ya lines…
wasnt feelin it...sorta...wack
Cos Illtalic’s the Harold Shipman of RB.. ‘Dr Death’ will do fine
im performin talent transplants.. so now ya ass is really mine…
good general diss..not a personal though..
The votes'll never be in ur favor kid.. no one understands ya vibe
cos scratchin at the surface of talent DOES NOT make u a Scribe...
hmmmm....so so at best..
Nicca I'll plant ya face on the side of the road.. so ya constantly see the curb
Breedin slurs.. call this bitch a Root.. he has to elevate jus to be a Herb...
second line was good lol

Damn, overall, this was actually close. But but but...reading it over again, I liked Unwritten's approach better. You were both equal with flow, structure, illtalic..you spit any multis? maybe in the closer, might be stretching it...

Anyways, Ima have to give this to Unwritten, but overall, this was a really good battle, you 2 should consider a rematch...

Vote ~ Unwritten

[buh bye Matty :(]

Hit this up...sry, forgot to post it..

Gracias..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114599

[Its Illytizzle!™]

Damn at not puttin 'no herbish votes' in the rules.. oh well.

[buh bye Matty :(]

Man, I'm just giving my honest opinon man, damn.

[nolonger]

^werd 2 illtalic that was gay..lmfao............
rite ill took this wateva man its clear ,
unwritten you had some really nice wordplay,
but your verse was newbish man no hate but,
wats all the * // for leave em out next time,
also your punches were ok but they didnt hit as hgard ad ill's,
ill had a much better strucutre and flow also,
v-ill..........................

plz hit this up now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&page=2&pp=15 thx alot no hate........

[Its Illytizzle!™]

Someone on my wavelength!

Wahey!

[Unwritten Hazard]

thanks/// 4 ////the ///vote//

lol i smell a rematch

[e.coli]

unwritten-u didnt really have any decent punches in ya verse......u had some nice flow and multies but u didnt have hard punches...that is the main part of a battle...also u need to stop putting "" around ya words that is newbish....overall below average verse....4/10

illtalic-decent verse.....u had consistancy and a few nice punches....i liked your closer it was real creative....u took this battle wit more creativity and consistancy...overall decent verse.......6/10

v/illtalic

[Its Illytizzle!™]

-uppn-

[Physik]

in my opinion i think illtalic took this

punches: ill But like big nosed coke addicts I’ll simply hoover ya lines…
Cos Illtalic’s the Harold Shipman of RB.. ‘Dr Death’ will do fine

personals: ill The votes'll never be in ur favor kid.. no one understands ya vibe
cos scratchin at the surface of talent DOES NOT make u a Scribe...

flow: both had aight structure but ills was better

structure: ill had better because his were about even

overall i gotta go with illtalic

peep mine

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111414