..10 lines
..no biting, feeding, d/r
..spit asap after checkin!
..best of 5
CHECKIN IN...
..10 lines
..no biting, feeding, d/r
..spit asap after checkin!
..best of 5
CHECKIN IN...
Im cool wid da rulz bro......checkin in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!aaaiiiggghhhttttt
Like eggs dis so called rapper as bin srammbled,
Like his small testicals my rhymes can't be handdle,/1
.Ill. spitting words dat sound bambled,
Hes bin surrounded,dis is lyrical bullying,/2
.ill. dnt fit in wid MC's surrounding,coz lyrical Mc Rhymes were Hip-hops Founding,
.ills. punches come cheeper than a Will Smith Feature,/3
da only difference being .ill. is an ugly creature,
he needs a verbale teacher,coz hes a bible precher,/4
But da way fings are shapping,he will need Gods hand to stop verbaly faking,
a puncher in his vocab gaping./5
Ill. hosts da a lyrical trashing at da hands of Lyrical MC,
Platium disc awaiting,u can av theses line on me/6
I host da victory,.Ill .rapping??
More chance a guy wid leperacy clapping/7
You Honering me is very flatering,
but wid verbs mirroring a bullet,/8
you betta fle,before i pull I Pull It (tiriger)/9
This Lyrical MC Is Empty To the Point Of Exhaustion/
Use Caution, I'll Fuckin 'Clean Ya Out' As If I Was Flossin!/
Ya Genitals-Used!..Yur Composed Of 'So Much Pussy' Ya Leave 'Cannibals Confused'!/
Yur Under Federal-Review!… Cuz Ya 'Spank Yur Monkey' To The Extent Of 'Animal Abuse'!/
I Set Up A Battle And This Fucker Responds, WTF Is He On?/
Beating Me Is Impossible, Like Christopher Reeves Mowing Yur Lawn/
3-0 Dont Matter When They All Were Newbees/
Or Groupies, Now Sing Along As I Fluke Thee/
Soo...
.iLL. Winning Is Probable, This Kat Ain't Even An Obstacle/
His Spit Has Less Of A Plot Than Mission Impossible/
HoLLa BaCk YoUnGiN! ~
.......uppin for votes...............drop a honest vote and leave a link and i will hit u back!!!
this was a preety close battle
ILL...you had a good flow and an aiight structure but your punches didnt really hit hard enough. I would have liked you to have more personals in your verse. This is the first of your stuff that i have seen but i reckon dat you need to practise a bit more.
Lyrical MC... you had a nice flow and a good structure but again your punches werent that hard hittin. You had some nice personals but i want to see some more from you.
This isnt the best that i have seen you produce but keep it up.
vote Lyrical MC
If your not a herb, you could see that this battle was NOT "pretty close"
Like eggs dis so called rapper as bin srammbled,
Like his small testicals my rhymes can't be handdle,/1
ehh…
.Ill. spitting words dat sound bambled,
Hes bin surrounded,dis is lyrical bullying,/2
what? Naaa….
ill. dnt fit in wid MC's surrounding,coz lyrical Mc Rhymes were Hip-hops Founding,
.ills. punches come cheeper than a Will Smith Feature,/3
no…
da only difference being .ill. is an ugly creature,
he needs a verbale teacher,coz hes a bible precher,/4
bad “punch”
But da way fings are shapping,he will need Gods hand to stop verbaly faking,
a puncher in his vocab gaping./5
Bad
Ill. hosts da a lyrical trashing at da hands of Lyrical MC,
Platium disc awaiting,u can av theses line on me/6
no…
I host da victory,.Ill .rapping??
More chance a guy wid leperacy clapping/7
no…
You Honering me is very flatering,
but wid verbs mirroring a bullet,/8
oh no no no
you betta fle,before i pull I Pull It (tiriger)/9
horrendous
This Lyrical MC Is Empty To the Point Of Exhaustion/
Use Caution, I'll Fuckin 'Clean Ya Out' As If I Was Flossin!/
Pretty Okay...
Ya Genitals-Used!..Yur Composed Of 'So Much Pussy' Ya Leave 'Cannibals Confused'!/
Yur Under Federal-Review!… Cuz Ya 'Spank Yur Monkey' To The Extent Of 'Animal Abuse'!/
Hehehe…decent
I Set Up A Battle And This Fucker Responds, WTF Is He On?/
Beating Me Is Impossible, Like Christopher Reeves Mowing Yur Lawn/
Pretty okay…
3-0 Dont Matter When They All Were Newbees/
Or Groupies, Now Sing Along As I Fluke Thee/
Weak…
Soo...
.iLL. Winning Is Probable, This Kat Ain't Even An Obstacle/
His Spit Has Less Of A Plot Than Mission Impossible/
heh, kindof okay…
Sorry, Lyrical. Hopefully your having a bad day, because that was horrendous. You need to work on structure and vocab. Using words like "lyrical" is fucking played and herbish. Get help with wit and wordplay.
iLL...you came pretty good for a noob. I liked your verse to some extent.
One sided battle...Ill wins...
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Originally Posted by Brandon Heat
alrigth battle
Flow-Tie
Personals-Ill
Vocab-Ill
Not goin into anythin else
Lyrical ryhems were aight but didnt really feel em nd thought they were a lil confusin
Ill you were aight...which was really all u needed in this battle
Overall-Ill
Keep uppin
ThA Ce
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114182
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113988
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114112
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113893
Vote on those^^^
Pay back the favor
lyrical mc had the better wordplay in this battle.. and punchlines i felt like ill didnt try enough alot of your verse was filler il.. lyrical mc just came straight out with some pretty clever disses
i vote for lyrical mc on this one based on his punchlines and wordplay.. hey man can you hit this battle up with a vote man heres the link
it should be an easy ko for me
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114270
^aaaiigth....uppin for votes ppl.......please vote.................
Imma give this battle to umm Lyrical MC he got good punhcs he started of strong i like that the other MC was okay but he didn't do good enuff u know so V/lircal MC!! you got mah vote mayne!
uppin 4 votes...leave links and i will hit u back............leave a honest vote!!!!aaaiiggghhttt!!!!
ill wins.............................................. ..
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