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  1. February 13th, 2004, 01:58 AM #1
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    I am afraid.

    Does absence make the heart grow fonder?
    Thus passions take a start and go farther!

    I miss you, every last part of your being
    I would act out for everyone if you are seeing
    Where are you, I wake up alone at night
    Searching the covers, alone and in fright
    Dream of you as my security blanket
    Cover my fears, shielding me quick
    Ignorance is bliss, do I contradict
    Life without you encompassing me
    Dream a little dream of me...

    I dream of you and I don’t want to wake
    Someone asked me a question today...

    What’s your biggest fear?

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  2. February 13th, 2004, 03:32 AM #2
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    lol..is that lady divinity in your avy??
    is this about her?..lol

    tight...lmao..
    nah but..this was ok i guess..
    with my interpretation of this...i'd say ur fear is like being alone or some shit..
    so its coo....^correct me if im stupid..
    anyway..this piece is kinda short to really get into..so
    ill just say that the concept's examples can be more original..
    dont knkow what i mean?..sorry.if u dont...but peace....


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114002

    peep it
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114002
  3. February 13th, 2004, 12:31 PM #3
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    Short and to the point man .. dope .. I liked the way you took the idea a lot .. the shortness didn't take away from the piece in this one man .. this had a lot of true felr lines in here ..


    Dream of you as my security blanket
    Cover my fears, shielding me quick


    But that line there was the one that had me .. I thought it was dope man .. very real and recognizable .. nice piece here again man .. keep writin .. one

    A.i

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  4. February 13th, 2004, 12:45 PM #4
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    Nice..short and sweet..so is my reply...^^
  5. February 13th, 2004, 12:53 PM #5
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    Dope stuff...

    Not rap, though.

    This is poetry.

    And it's very good.

    Deep.

    Expressive.

    And slightly creepy if you've started stalking femcees.

    But whatever works for you, man.

    Peace
  6. February 13th, 2004, 12:59 PM #6
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    its real...content good...not complex or anything but just expressive as stated above...ok peice

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  7. March 23rd, 2004, 03:07 PM #7
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    wow i just found this!
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  8. March 24th, 2004, 05:47 PM #8
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    nice drop homie...lot of emotion into it...short but to the point like evry1 else said n it was heartfelt...dope piece man n keep flowing, hope to see sum more in the future

    Peace

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  9. May 1st, 2005, 01:53 AM #9
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    This goes to your sig. Why? Because nigga.
  10. May 1st, 2005, 02:56 AM #10
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