aight son......
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ill have my verse posted by 12 est tonight........
u can just copy and paste urs cause our thread was closed.........
peace..........
PROOF
~Yo What Up~
aight son......
10 lines
house rules
ill have my verse posted by 12 est tonight........
u can just copy and paste urs cause our thread was closed.........
peace..........
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i aint gon go easy on u cause u from phoenix
ill bring my best shit to the table i mean it
my lyrics hot enough to heat u up in the summer
over 200 degrees while yours are 20 under
an illegal alien, like ur entire city
ur lyrics suck, so just retire quickly
goin around town like yo what up
no one want to hear ur verse, so shut up
go back and read my verse again, dont miss a thing
no you know how i beat, werent u listening
im the best rapper of all time, one minute for me to think of it and type it, lol, by the way yo what up, dont be so rude in my battle with KayOhh, i typed it in 8 minutes (lol)
uppin so you can find it yo what up
aight check it out........yo, yo...........
this bitch thinks he's "sweet" but never "made-love", and how does he think hes comin wit hard "punches" when hes "afraid-to-shove"/
ur weak, wack punches played-above lies about bein in love, and how the fuck am i supposed to lose to guy whos askin to be "made-fun-of"/
your wack, u got weak punches that have yet-to-connect, just be takin this battle and comin that wack, ur rap career is set-to-wreck/
u bet-im-correct, im never wrong and at 1-7 everyone knows ur horrible, I spit lyrical "cancer" and im always a "threat-to-infect"/
ur punches r like slime-but-dry, there gross, nasty and bullshit, im killin u, but no one gives a shit, its just a crime-to-a-guy/
dawg ur rhymes-r-lies, im sick of hearin ur bullshit so ima pop u wit my lyrical nine cause honestly bitch, its ur time-to-die/
u rap like ur quite-high, cause u make no sense, and no one can be that wack, and that’s said as fuck u think it’s a tight-buy/
ur outta luck cause dawg, ya writes-dry, u suck, but how the fuck am I supposed to be "straight" wit a dude who "likes-guys"/
uve already blown-fame, ur punches r round, and they never "move" anybody, so thats y cats say u bringin a "stone-game"/
ur shit is known-as-lame, and this fag thinks hes comin into this battle "original" but cant even think of his "own-name"/
EXPLANATIONS -
1st bar - in his sig it says "make fun of my sig in a battle plz"
2nd bar - cancer……infect……get it?
3rd bar - self explanatory
4th bar - if ur straight u like girls……..get it?
5th bar - his name is proof....guy in d12 is also called proof
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dawg, u said u werent gonna feed on the battle, o well godd verse
by the way, cancer is not contaigous
Yo Wat up Won...
YWU= Nice Verse, Bad Structure, Decent Flow, Ok Punches, Enuff To Beat The Kid, Fix Your Damn StructureLol, And Take Away / At The End, Shorten Your Lengths, Your Consistency Was Ok, And Creativity Was Ok, Ok Vocab.
Proof= Okk Verse, Better Structure For Sure, Keep That Up lol, Decent Flow Aswell, But He Beat you On The Punches, But You Can Elevate Visit Tutorials. Your Consistency Wasnt There, Creativity Wasnt Good, Bad Vocab
Proof
Punches- C
FLow- B+
Vocab- B-
Creativity- C
Consistency- C
Overall Grade= C+
Yo Wat Up
Punches- B+
Flow- C
Creativity- B-
Consistency- B
Vocab- C+
Overall Grade- B
Hit This Up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113660
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^^^aight thanx for the vote.......
UPPIN # 1!!!!!!!!!
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Here Is how I saw the battle
flow: I thought that Wathup had a betta flow cuz he had sum nice rhymes in there with a gud wordplay and variation; I din't fel that with proof
punchlines: Wathup had more and betta punches cuz they just came harder and Proof lines were played I thought
personals: They both had sum nice personals but nothin really special
multis: I found the multis of wathup gud cuz they came with a nice flow and it had a gud structure
Overall vote Wathup
Plz vote on this thx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113596
^^^thanx for the vote......
UPPIN # 2 !!!!!!!!!
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i aint gon go easy on u cause u from phoenix
ill bring my best shit to the table i mean it
whack...simplistic
my lyrics hot enough to heat u up in the summer
over 200 degrees while yours are 20 under
nothing here
an illegal alien, like ur entire city
ur lyrics suck, so just retire quickly
weak
goin around town like yo what up
no one want to hear ur verse, so shut up
blah
go back and read my verse again, dont miss a thing
no you know how i beat, werent u listening
no punches in your entire verse
this bitch thinks he's "sweet" but never "made-love", and how does he think hes comin wit hard "punches" when hes "afraid-to-shove"/
ur weak, wack punches played-above lies about bein in love, and how the fuck am i supposed to lose to guy whos askin to be "made-fun-of"/
stretched man...not bad
your wack, u got weak punches that have yet-to-connect, just be takin this battle and comin that wack, ur rap career is set-to-wreck/
u bet-im-correct, im never wrong and at 1-7 everyone knows ur horrible, I spit lyrical "cancer" and im always a "threat-to-infect"/
decent
ur punches r like slime-but-dry, there gross, nasty and bullshit, im killin u, but no one gives a shit, its just a crime-to-a-guy/
dawg ur rhymes-r-lies, im sick of hearin ur bullshit so ima pop u wit my lyrical nine cause honestly bitch, its ur time-to-die/
ok
u rap like ur quite-high, cause u make no sense, and no one can be that wack, and that’s said as fuck u think it’s a tight-buy/
ur outta luck cause dawg, ya writes-dry, u suck, but how the fuck am I supposed to be "straight" wit a dude who "likes-guys"/
ok...kinda played
uve already blown-fame, ur punches r round, and they never "move" anybody, so thats y cats say u bringin a "stone-game"/
ur shit is known-as-lame, and this fag thinks hes comin into this battle "original" but cant even think of his "own-name"/
ehh ok
~Yo What Up~ took this...kinda one sided....Proof jus didn't come with any punches...~Yo~ had some nice ones...lines a bit stretched...but good punches none-the-less..
PLease drop an honest vote on my battle with Oakley..Should be close to the top...Thanks
A few achievements here and there
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^^^Thanx for the vote...........
UPPIN # 3 !!!!!!!!!!!
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in my opinion this was a pretty weak battle.....i've seen ur shyt yo wat up and i think u can do a lot better....my vote goes to ywu because he came with the harder hittin puches, his vocab was nicer, his structure was aiight, and his flow was excellent,
vote=ywu
sorry i cant poll but can anyone hit this up?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113661
i aint gon go easy on u cause u from phoenix
ill bring my best shit to the table i mean it
whack...simplistic
my lyrics hot enough to heat u up in the summer
over 200 degrees while yours are 20 under
nothing here
an illegal alien, like ur entire city
ur lyrics suck, so just retire quickly
weak
goin around town like yo what up
no one want to hear ur verse, so shut up
blah
go back and read my verse again, dont miss a thing
no you know how i beat, werent u listening
no punches in your entire verse
this bitch thinks he's "sweet" but never "made-love", and how does he think hes comin wit hard "punches" when hes "afraid-to-shove"/
ur weak, wack punches played-above lies about bein in love, and how the fuck am i supposed to lose to guy whos askin to be "made-fun-of"/
stretched man...not bad
your wack, u got weak punches that have yet-to-connect, just be takin this battle and comin that wack, ur rap career is set-to-wreck/
u bet-im-correct, im never wrong and at 1-7 everyone knows ur horrible, I spit lyrical "cancer" and im always a "threat-to-infect"/
decent
ur punches r like slime-but-dry, there gross, nasty and bullshit, im killin u, but no one gives a shit, its just a crime-to-a-guy/
dawg ur rhymes-r-lies, im sick of hearin ur bullshit so ima pop u wit my lyrical nine cause honestly bitch, its ur time-to-die/
ok
u rap like ur quite-high, cause u make no sense, and no one can be that wack, and that’s said as fuck u think it’s a tight-buy/
ur outta luck cause dawg, ya writes-dry, u suck, but how the fuck am I supposed to be "straight" wit a dude who "likes-guys"/
ok...kinda played
uve already blown-fame, ur punches r round, and they never "move" anybody, so thats y cats say u bringin a "stone-game"/
ur shit is known-as-lame, and this fag thinks hes comin into this battle "original" but cant even think of his "own-name"/
ehh ok
~Yo What Up~ took this...kinda one sided....Proof jus didn't come with any punches...~Yo~ had some nice ones...lines a bit stretched...but good punches none-the-less.
CUDNT AGREE MORE......PROOF YOUR WHOLE VERSE WAS POOR AND IT WAS PLAYED UR SHIT WAS REALLY NEWB ISH AND U NEED SERIOUS ELEVATION NOW 2 WHAT UP.......UR SHIT WAS KINDA STRETCHED BADLY IN PLACES.....UR PUNCHES WERE IGHT ASND WERE ALOT BETTER THAN PROOF U STILL NEED ELEVATION BUT NICE DROP AS IT WAS WAY BETTER THAN PROOF.......
VOTE YO WOT UP
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