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    Tombstone & Casket

    I always hear people talking without thoughts before speached
    Eye visual seeing the obscene before it being seen or reached
    Prepare to walk on water but you have no wishes of god correct
    Yet there still in a hazerdous zone reachen for a certian aspect
    Demies but why consider non existing when you have a gift
    Crys denied from the mases suicides an extreamly cheap uplift
    Thinkin if you pass away an fall short nothin will retaliate
    Sinkin in your own blood now you realise skin shouldn't seperate
    What you did was selfish so why act apon a destiny unplanned
    Fuck emotions carried on inside killing yourself wasn't a demand
    Nor is death able tobe reabilitated so why argue true facts
    Core of the heart is hard to encounter but use your back
    It's a hard game a life sweat over the eyes stoppin visual
    Shit it is what it is so why go beyond gods natural principal
    Your here for a reason why else would you be on earth
    Sore mind but so was your mothers womb at a precious birth
    Coming into this world was a dream unseen so why unmask it
    Running from your life was pitiful nobody said Tombstone & Casket
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    I always enjoy your work...you have great wordplay...your imagery is always dope~and most of all..all of your pieces seem like you put some thought in to them...unlike 85% of the OM's on this site...which are I'm gangsta and you are not..anyway..I think this is good enough for Top 10 of the month..peace...

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    good man...you make me think that you can't rap for shit but you can write you ass off.Too many rappers on this site can't rap, but they can write...welcome to the club.I can rap sweetie!
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    Penskills thanks for the reply...nominate then bodhicitta

    Ca..thanks for the reply...but audio for me isnt set up...because i'm not very good at it, writting is a easier delivery then audo..i feel...and this is just for fun i don't take it overly seriously
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    uppen...
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    you got skills though, I'm not a hater I'm a reality facer.
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    okie....uppen for some more replies
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    nobody reply to shit anymore?
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    Good drop dawg...

    You always keep up a good standard in our drops...

    Vocabulary is always highly consistent... Good imagery as usual...

    Nothing to critisize...

    Just keep dropping at this standard dawg...

    Hit up... 'Treading Water'...

    Thanks...

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    hmm..
    didnt really capture me this piece tbh
    just seemed to lack in creativity and didnt spark any excitement for me as a reader
    writers voice was quite weak..
    flow wasnt bad..
    just wasnt feeling this like i do most of your pieces
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    pretty decent the imagery was there...
    good vocab and internals you had em...
    this was a dope piece overall
    keep at it rule...
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    Not seen any of your work for a while...

    Good but I've seen better from you. This is one of those pieces which some people would struggle to rap out loud (me included).

    Vocab was fine, flow was good and creativity was good but your best attribute here was your wordplay.

    Pretty good drop.

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