Lawyer vs. kuniva

[Lawyer]

10 lines
blind spits
30 minutes after we both check in..so check in quick
no crew votes or fan votes

good luck

[Lawyer]

cheking in....waiting for u to start keyin..

[kuniva]

um aight, heres my checkin....

[Lawyer]

Ties Nike Airs Up..and Pumps Em Up

kuniva right? wrong, cuz this bitch aint dirty or gritty/
who the fuck are u..bout as well known as your city/(death upon u)

Runs Laps and Suicides in His Nike Airs

this homo..look at his sig, i think he wants double the trouble/
not the violence..he just wants the condom to double in bubbles/(fag!)
you cant beat me, thats like surviving a kavorkian prescription/
my verse turns u on..but got u blue balled cuz ur spits always missing/(ooh!)
ur no competition, i blast kuniving lames with hellish fiery flames/
voters give u snubs, cuz u winnin is 04 all star game with LeBron James/(power!)

Super Death Bar Kickin Him In The Face With Dirty Sneakers

is that a dope verse? i think not, here's the dose of illness your thriving/
i thought u coulda come nice but i forget u just a fake fucka kuniving/(dropped)

[kuniva]

even though this is a blind spit, its like im battlin a runt
i got the hard part, niggaz profile empty as a nuns cunt

i wanna see what the judge lays down for the sentence
i wont give you a break with my rhymes, im relentless

lyrics are an art, i garuntee that im the true art king
dont battle me bitch, cause your new ta RB

haha, this bitch dont even have a signature
leavin that shit empy just proves ur immature

so, ladys and gentlemen of the jury, whats the verdict
but i guess everyone knew i won before they even heard it

[kuniva]

look, he really did make fun of everything i gave him, while he only gave me his name

[Bruise Banter]

I cant officially vote (dont have enough posts) but here's what I thought....

> Kuniva took this all the way. Had Nice structure/flow and had Decent punches with some nice personals. Creativity could have been better though
>Lawyer decent opener but..the rest was trash. Punches were far too weak and were played. You should stay away from sex punches...they're played.Really needed more creatvity, and you should probably dump that 'super death bar'.....The shit in bold letters, is annoying as is the ( ) at the end of each line. Work on your punches and personals, and try to be more creative....

My vote > Kuniva


honest votes > Bruise Banter vs. TJwillingham

[wordplay]

opener:kuniva's opener started out real amature, but the seconds line saved his ass, it also made me laugh.

lawyer's opener started out really bad too, but just like his opponents opener, he saved it with the personal in his second line.......:::lawyer::


punches:: lawyer came pretty good with his punches, but you got to knock it off with the sexual punches, they just show a lack of creativity and thought...
kuniva really didn't have much for punches, bu the ones he had hit pretty hard.................::lawyer::

structure:: lawyer really fucked it up with the bold letters, I kept stumbling over them, trying to get to the next line.....
kuniva's structure was okay, he needs to pick a sylable count and stick with it.................::kuniva::

personals: kuniva

wordplay:none:

closers: both were weak, but kuniva edged out on top here.....::kuniva::

vote kuniva

[KayOhh]

kuniva right? wrong, cuz this bitch aint dirty or gritty/
who the fuck are u..bout as well known as your city/(death upon u)
Weak punch
this homo..look at his sig, i think he wants double the trouble/
not the violence..he just wants the condom to double in bubbles/(fag!)
Aight
you cant beat me, thats like surviving a kavorkian prescription/
my verse turns u on..but got u blue balled cuz ur spits always missing/(ooh!)
kinda makes sense
ur no competition, i blast kuniving lames with hellish fiery flames/
voters give u snubs, cuz u winnin is 04 all star game with LeBron James/
A forced out multi, hurt
is that a dope verse? i think not, here's the dose of illness your thriving/
i thought u coulda come nice but i forget u just a fake fucka kuniving/
wtf....

even though this is a blind spit, its like im battlin a runt
i got the hard part, niggaz profile empty as a nuns cunt
aight
i wanna see what the judge lays down for the sentence
i wont give you a break with my rhymes, im relentless
...
lyrics are an art, i garuntee that im the true art king
dont battle me bitch, cause your new ta RB
nah
haha, this bitch dont even have a signature
leavin that shit empy just proves ur immature
....
so, ladys and gentlemen of the jury, whats the verdict
but i guess everyone knew i won before they even heard it
Aight closer

Ima give this to Kuniva, his was a lili basic, but hit a lil harder than laws

I'll vote when I can