Understand the the truth if you can.

[Xey]

One soldier two soldier three soldier four.
What are we posting in this forum for?
Some of my best friends are on the front line ,
they could be dead by the i drop of my next line.
Who in here studies diligently?
Have you scratched the surface of conspiracy?
Where has Bin Laden been hiding out?
Have we forgot what this war is about?
We've been brainwashed by unseen entities.
Do you know who are our real enemies?
Where does this country get it's energy?
Who is part of the illuminati.
Organization based on domination.
Bush is a member of this secret group.
Who wins elections without popular vote?
We're staging raids in biblical places.
Soon the beast's mark will be in our faces.
We will soon see the time we have wasted.
Getting high and fucking in the basement.
In our death beds screaming God please save us.
His love does not reach to those who are faithless.
This open mic session was meant to keep you all pacing.


Don't reply with even out your bars, if you can count please figure out what sylables are. As with all my posts, let me know what you liked and what you didn't, but more importantly WHY, did you or did you not like it.

[JamesJr.]

My verse to:

"Understand the truth if you can"

You don't even got to worry dog, I got you, I see you
See these other mother fuckers just watch you, wanna be you
Cuz you were able to pick up the topic mangled and see through
Now I'm also mad seeing all these little babies who needs shoes
It does come out red but in reality it's deep blue
I'll tell you why they're posting in the forum
They want more whores, and they want more Rum!
But the facts are they can't even afford none
Cuz the fact is most of us are poor as fuck!!
But ask yourself, why are we poor
They won't lie to you?, they lied to you before
They'd lied to you once, you don't think they'll lie to you more?
Showing you images,LIVE from the war
You can try to make light of this and the New World Order
Until they bring your life to the whole new 'world order'!!
A world Army and Court, a world without views,or borders
While you keep listening to the news and the new reporters
This world has left me all alone, but fuck it my balls are crome
45 Caliber is fully loaded...pull, Fuck Bush, fuck Skull & Bones
I watch the Council on Foriegn Relations
When they go to 'counsel on foriegn relations'
This isn't boring engagments, you're ignoring the nation
Distorted wavelengths, or just shortage of brainwaves
Now this is the "Land of the Free?"
And most of you are barely a man on the street
Barely able to stand barely able to breathe
So the code is to protect myself, hand on my heat
Now the day I lay in my death bed
Is the day I pray to accept death


JamesJr.

[Xey]

Speak it brother. Anyone else out there that knows what's really goin on post it here.

[MYSTERIOSO]

that shit was hard.............................................. .......propz........................

[Xey]

I'm glad you like that, if you got something to add post it man. Let me know what you liked about it too.
LMAO "ILL PUT MORE WOOD IN YA GIRLS MOUTH THAN A POPSICKLE"

[JamesJr.]

Big props on the topic.....
Nice pyramid
Waiting on some feedback

JamesJr.

[SMZ]

Flow - line length was fine, but lines about 5-11 with their questions all back to back seemed a little awkward to me.
Vocab - well done, really nothing else to say - you used your words well
Concept - I like this type of art - about mental stimulation.
Overall - 8