mysterioso vs. chao

[MYSTERIOSO]

.........................................we Still Uppin.......................................
1-0

[ILLunatic]

Mysterioso
Ima rip this kid and leave him in the after life
unlike elvis sightings he ain't gon' be seen after life/
ima cold zoned nigga like i just killed u at a hockey rink
i got that sprocket that makes this nigga think/
what did u think i would be a easy loss to forget
u couldn't target your girl if you had a sponsor of target/
matter of fact nigga just make sure you keep me in tact you see
even if u was american airlines and i was a contract u couldn't land me/
i can look and see ur style is in a rust
u couldn't beat me now if the W was left in a trust/
come hard or bust~in this battle im like a kid n u like a bus~not even young'ns respect u~they reject u ~inspect u~and in this battle i just digest u~and shit u out like yesterdayz lunch

Very orginial...
Ya getter better tho..
Decent punches
Original flow.. but it was straight
Personals were kinda.. Blah.. but yea
Structure getttin better...
Next time keep that ! ~ ][{})( shit out of ya verse
It makes it look shit...
Overall......12/20

Chao
MYSTERIOSO this whack emcee, shoulda knew better to battle me
i'm gonna merk this kid and hurt his pride, your losin to a newbie
with flows like his my guess he has to ride dick
only way for this kid to be ill, is to get really sick
i'mma burn you like i'm hot and i'm on fuckin fire
votes gonna be 5-0, and i betcha i'm the one gon be higher
so you say your from flint, here let me give ya a hint
i just merked you so fast, you didn't even see the glint
get some of your friends, and yo i'll beat your whole cattle
cause if there anything like you, you can bet i'll win some more battles
fuck this i'm through wit you, man you shoulda knew
messin with chao will get you a loss, man you never had a clue

Eh.... ok i guess
rhyme scheme was weak
Flow was... Blah..
Punches was weak
Personals were'nt used..
Structure was decent...
But alot of played lines...
Overall.....6/20

V/Mysterioso...
Simple came harder

[MYSTERIOSO]

.........................................come on yall uppin 2-0..............................

[CAMROK]

Yo, this battle wasn't great, but wasn't bad.. um.. I think both of your verses were kinda the same in some ways. The rhymes were pretty simple, nothing really made me go "wow" or anything like that. Therefore, the punches didn't hit too hard. I think myst had better punches and they were more direct and personal on chao. That's what matters most. Creativity, was lacking.. both could do better. myst had some multis, some were alright, keep working on those. Come up with some shit that blows people away. A line that wins it... overall this battle goes to Myst

vote- myst

[MYSTERIOSO]

Thanks for the votes

thread closed

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